Chale Karz Chod kar------------- Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on December 19, 2011, 11:55:17 PM
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Na Jao Abhi zindagi se youn karz chod kar
Hoga kaise mera basr tumhari pension ko lekar

Ilzam kaise na dun tumhe apni halat dekh kar
Layega kaun nai sari mujhe meri jaan keh kar

Kitne the gile-o shikayaten tumhe yun dekh kar
Fuzol thi baten sab, jo tum chale hamen chod kar

Maaf kiya tumhara yun jana hamara dil todh kar
Kaun ata hai vapas yanhan phir mun modh kar


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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2011, 11:57:14 PM »
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Yeh Ashaar, priyaji (Priya Shikhawat) ki ghazal padhkar nikal aaye, to yeh unhiki nazr ki jaati hai.

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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2011, 03:54:02 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2011, 04:02:46 AM »
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Doctor Saheb,

Shukriya bahut bahut shukriya,
aapki inayat yeh behke hove lafzon ko bhi aap ne sarhaya

Mamnun hain aapke
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2011, 12:48:28 PM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on December 19, 2011, 11:55:17 PM
Na Jao Abhi zindagi se youn karz chod kar
Hoga kaise mera basr tumhari pension ko lekar

Ilzam kaise na dun tumhe apni halat dekh kar
Layega kaun nai sari mujhe meri jaan keh kar

Kitne the gile-o shikayaten tumhe yun dekh kar
Fuzol thi baten sab, jo tum chale hamen chod kar

Maaf kiya tumhara yun jana hamara dil todh kar
Kaun ata hai vapas yanhan phir mun modh kar


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Hmmmm..Dil Ko chuu Gaye Yeh jazbaat!!!

Bahut bahut Khooob Abul Asad Ji..

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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2011, 03:14:35 PM »
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khwaish Saheb,

Aap ki daad behad pur maine aur khubsurat hai
shukriya.
Maazrath, ke maine isse thorda qabl nahi dekha.

Khwaish saheb kia aapne voh post kia hai, jo iss
mazmun par aapne likha tha? Shayad ham taghaful rahe.
Zaroor padhna chahenge.

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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2011, 03:22:17 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abul ji.. Bahoot Umda peshkash..Very heart touching Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2011, 03:52:22 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2011, 04:06:46 PM »
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Quote from: Nysha on December 26, 2011, 03:22:17 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abul ji.. Bahoot Umda peshkash..Very heart touching Usual Smile

Nyshaji,
bahut bahut shukriya, appki daad zyaadah umdah theen aur dilkash
Behad mamnuun aapke, Aapke sarhane aur mohabatton ke
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2012, 08:48:35 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 26, 2011, 03:52:22 PM
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MKV Saheb,

Maafi talab, maine aap ki daad pehle nahi dekhi,
ab meri shukriya kubool kijeye..

Bahut bahut inayat aapki saheb

Dua goo
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 09:16:40 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on December 19, 2011, 11:55:17 PM
Na Jao Abhi zindagi se youn karz chod kar
Hoga kaise mera basr tumhari pension ko lekar

Ilzam kaise na dun tumhe apni halat dekh kar
Layega kaun nai sari mujhe meri jaan keh kar

Kitne the gile-o shikayaten tumhe yun dekh kar
Fuzol thi baten sab, jo tum chale hamen chod kar

Maaf kiya tumhara yun jana hamara dil todh kar
Kaun ata hai vapas yanhan phir mun modh kar


Abul Asad

good one Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2012, 06:39:28 PM »
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Adil Sahab,

Thank you, Your comment is appreciated

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