CHAND TUM DARPAN HO !

by smardia on December 22, 2008, 09:50:47 AM
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Chand tum darpan ho
surya ka pratibimb tum me
dekhta he jug sara
kaash main bdal pata
konn(angle)tumhara
aur dekhta apne
priyatam ki chhavi tum me

Chand tum darpan ho
aag ka roop tum me
dekhta he jug sara
per shitalta he
gunn(quality) tumhara
shital kardo meri agan ko bhi
paan kara ras priya ki chhavi ka

Chand tum darpan ho
vishfoton ka drishya tum me
dekhta he jug sara
fir bhi shantidoot tum kahlate
fir kyon chhein rehe tum shanti meri
chhip jao,mat yaad dilao tum priya ki.

surendra "surya"
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2008, 09:53:20 AM »
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bahut hi khoob likha hai aap neh Surya.


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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2008, 10:43:52 AM »
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Surya

Bahut khoob ! Applause

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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2008, 11:56:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Surya Ji..
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2008, 12:04:55 AM »
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Nice Smardia Ji
Welcome to yoindia
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2008, 05:36:22 PM »
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Jasbirji,Rajbirji,rajeshji,mahiyaji
aap sab ko hosla afzahi k liye dhanyavad
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 23, 2008, 12:04:55 AM
Nice Smardia Ji
Welcome to yoindia
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2009, 10:56:19 AM »
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wah wah kya khoob sooch hai.....
Chand me mehboob dekhna hai.....

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«Reply #7 on: January 02, 2009, 12:48:04 PM »
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Dhanyavad....Shukriya....
aap ko pasand aai
kavita saarthak ho gai
Quote from: ANAAM on January 02, 2009, 10:56:19 AM
wah wah kya khoob sooch hai.....
Chand me mehboob dekhna hai.....

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«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2009, 04:43:28 PM »
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Nice One Smardia Ji,.
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«Reply #9 on: January 02, 2009, 05:18:40 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne,aapko yahan paa kar bahut khushi hui.

chaand bhee kabhi tanhai mein yeh sochta hoga
yaad priyatam ki dillane par bhee
usey koi kosta hoga!
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«Reply #10 on: January 02, 2009, 05:34:47 PM »
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dhayavad.....
Tumhari damdar gazlo ka maza lootne hum yaha tak pahuch gye...
Intzar hai nai rachna ka.....
surendra
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 02, 2009, 05:18:40 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne,aapko yahan paa kar bahut khushi hui.

chaand bhee kabhi tanhai mein yeh sochta hoga
yaad priyatam ki dillane par bhee
usey koi kosta hoga!
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2009, 10:35:11 PM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob smardia ji... wah kaya baat hai... kash aise saral hindi mai, main bhi likh saku.. bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai apse... bahoot khoob..

Chand tum darpan ho meri pal pal ki tanhaai ka
dekhun tujhe aor mangu, yaadon ki rihaai ka

chand tum darpan ho, meri raato ki uneendo ka
puche ajj yah dil, kyun ant nahi hai meri umeendo ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek ansoo ka
dil bechaini se kar raha hai intzaar, tere ek jadu ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek zakham-o-tadap ka
sheetal se tum ho, aor mera jeevan bhi hua, barf sa
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«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2009, 09:29:42 AM »
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Dhanyavad poojaji....aapko pasand aai....kavi ka prayas safal...

Aapne bhi bahut suder lines jod ker is thread ko aage bdhaya hai....
aapne pehle  uneendo aur fir umeendo ka jikra kiya....
Umeendo per to jeevan chalta hai uska ant kyu manga ?

Daad kabul ho !

CHAND Tum Darpan ho,badal paata kon tumhara
Dekhta yoindia shayero ko padhte huye un k kalam;


Quote from: Pooja on January 04, 2009, 10:35:11 PM
bahoot bahoot khoob smardia ji... wah kaya baat hai... kash aise saral hindi mai, main bhi likh saku.. bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai apse... bahoot khoob..

Chand tum darpan ho meri pal pal ki tanhaai ka
dekhun tujhe aor mangu, yaadon ki rihaai ka

chand tum darpan ho, meri raato ki uneendo ka
puche ajj yah dil, kyun ant nahi hai meri umeendo ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek ansoo ka
dil bechaini se kar raha hai intzaar, tere ek jadu ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek zakham-o-tadap ka
sheetal se tum ho, aor mera jeevan bhi hua, barf sa
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«Reply #13 on: January 05, 2009, 10:24:11 AM »
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Shukriya jaanasheenji
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 04:43:28 PM
Nice One Smardia Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2009, 10:30:12 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 02, 2009, 05:18:40 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne,aapko yahan paa kar bahut khushi hui.

chaand bhee kabhi tanhai mein yeh sochta hoga
yaad priyatam ki dillane par bhee
usey koi kosta hoga!

very nice prateek

jasbir singh
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