CHAND TUM DARPAN HO !

by smardia on December 22, 2008, 09:50:47 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 05, 2009, 10:31:44 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 04, 2009, 10:35:11 PM
bahoot bahoot khoob smardia ji... wah kaya baat hai... kash aise saral hindi mai, main bhi likh saku.. bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai apse... bahoot khoob..

Chand tum darpan ho meri pal pal ki tanhaai ka
dekhun tujhe aor mangu, yaadon ki rihaai ka

chand tum darpan ho, meri raato ki uneendo ka
puche ajj yah dil, kyun ant nahi hai meri umeendo ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek ansoo ka
dil bechaini se kar raha hai intzaar, tere ek jadu ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek zakham-o-tadap ka
sheetal se tum ho, aor mera jeevan bhi hua, barf sa


Very nice JI. bahut pyara kaha aap neh

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #16 on: January 05, 2009, 12:20:07 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 04, 2009, 10:35:11 PM
bahoot bahoot khoob smardia ji... wah kaya baat hai... kash aise saral hindi mai, main bhi likh saku.. bahoot sikhne ko mil raha hai apse... bahoot khoob..

Chand tum darpan ho meri pal pal ki tanhaai ka
dekhun tujhe aor mangu, yaadon ki rihaai ka

chand tum darpan ho, meri raato ki uneendo ka
puche ajj yah dil, kyun ant nahi hai meri umeendo ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek ansoo ka
dil bechaini se kar raha hai intzaar, tere ek jadu ka

chand tum darpan ho, mere her ek zakham-o-tadap ka
sheetal se tum ho, aor mera jeevan bhi hua, barf sa
wah wah bahut khoob....
Aapne to Chand ka poora poora fayda uthaya hai poojaji
Aapki her kriya-pratikriya ka chash-m-deed gavah banaya hai
Bahut sunder khayal hai aapka....clap ..clap..clap
Applause Applause Applause
surendra
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«Reply #17 on: January 05, 2009, 12:39:31 PM »
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aap sab ki pratikriyaon v hosla-afjhai k liye bahut bahut dhanyavad...Anaamji,Poojaji,Jasbirji...
Anaamji aap kuchh likh rahe they......Surendra lika aur chhod diya...
aapki aalochana ka intezar rahega.....
 
Quote from: ANAAM on January 05, 2009, 12:20:07 PM
wah wah bahut khoob....
Aapne to Chand ka poora poora fayda uthaya hai poojaji
Aapki her kriya-pratikriya ka chash-m-deed gavah banaya hai
Bahut sunder khayal hai aapka....clap ..clap..clap
Applause Applause Applause
surendra
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«Reply #18 on: January 05, 2009, 05:55:50 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on January 05, 2009, 12:20:07 PM
wah wah bahut khoob....
Aapne to Chand ka poora poora fayda uthaya hai poojaji
Aapki her kriya-pratikriya ka chash-m-deed gavah banaya hai
Bahut sunder khayal hai aapka....clap ..clap..clap
Applause Applause Applause
surendra


shukaria Anaam ji... kaya apka naam bhi Surendra hai? Thori confuse ho gai hu main  DOH
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«Reply #19 on: January 06, 2009, 10:32:46 AM »
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NAHI POOJAJI main to likh raha tha
Surendraji aapne Chand ki bahut hi vaigyanik kalpana ki hai, Hum to chand ko romantik upma k liye hi istemaal karte hain...
Per pata nahi kaise button dab gaya aur adhura message chala gaya...
anaam
Quote from: Pooja on January 05, 2009, 05:55:50 PM
shukaria Anaam ji... kaya apka naam bhi Surendra hai? Thori confuse ho gai hu main  DOH
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«Reply #20 on: January 06, 2009, 10:43:07 AM »
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Surendraji bahut achhi rachna hai aapki... Applause Applause Applause
Chand ko aapne ek alag roop me dekha hai.
Aapne Chand ki bahut hi vaigyanik kalpana ki hai, Hum to chand ko romantik upma k liye hi istemaal karte rahe hain... anaam
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«Reply #21 on: January 06, 2009, 07:13:52 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on January 06, 2009, 10:32:46 AM
NAHI POOJAJI main to likh raha tha
Surendraji aapne Chand ki bahut hi vaigyanik kalpana ki hai, Hum to chand ko romantik upma k liye hi istemaal karte hain...
Per pata nahi kaise button dab gaya aur adhura message chala gaya...
anaam

Oh Ok Anaam ji!!! Shukkaria yah clear karne ke liye!!
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«Reply #22 on: January 09, 2009, 01:11:52 AM »
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waah Meri Pooja Behna,.
Teri Kavita Ka Kya Kehna,.

Nice One Didijaan,.
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«Reply #23 on: January 18, 2009, 12:10:36 AM »
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shukaria bhaijaan
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«Reply #24 on: August 27, 2009, 04:38:07 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,Pooja ji,Anaam ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: August 27, 2009, 10:21:57 AM »
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Madhuji Shukriya....dhanyawad....kuchh mahino baad he sahi aapki nazar tou padi hamaari kavita par.....aapko pasand aai...rachana safal...saarthak hui

surendra

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 27, 2009, 04:38:07 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,Pooja ji,Anaam ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #26 on: August 27, 2009, 04:22:48 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 27, 2009, 04:38:07 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,Pooja ji,Anaam ji,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukaria Madhu ji. chaliye apki najar to parri.. warna humare smardia dost ji ki to najar abhi bhi nahi parri humari likhe jawab per sad5
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«Reply #27 on: December 05, 2009, 12:57:30 PM »
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Surendra "surya"ji....smardia ji...simple saral shabdo mai likhi aapki ye kalpana bhari kavita mujhe bahoot pasand aayee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chand jab bhi aata hai pritam ki yaad dilata hai
Kaash badal konn Pritam k darshan kar paati main
Quote from: smardia on December 22, 2008, 09:50:47 AM
Chand tum darpan ho
surya ka pratibimb tum me
dekhta he jug sara
kaash main bdal pata
konn(angle)tumhara
aur dekhta apne
priyatam ki chhavi tum me

Chand tum darpan ho
aag ka roop tum me
dekhta he jug sara
per shitalta he
gunn(quality) tumhara
shital kardo meri agan ko bhi
paan kara ras priya ki chhavi ka

Chand tum darpan ho
vishfoton ka drishya tum me
dekhta he jug sara
fir bhi shantidoot tum kahlate
fir kyon chhein rehe tum shanti meri
chhip jao,mat yaad dilao tum priya ki.

surendra "surya"
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«Reply #28 on: December 06, 2009, 05:46:45 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Koyal ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: December 06, 2009, 01:23:54 PM »
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Shukriya...Dhanywaad....Thanks...Madhu-di...U R always encouraging me......

Quote from: madhuwesh on December 06, 2009, 05:46:45 AM
Very beautiful lines Koyal ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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