Chhoda hai...

by brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 07:11:24 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 27, 2010, 07:54:24 PM »
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shukriya ji..aur aap apna waqt le ji...
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«Reply #16 on: March 27, 2010, 09:13:19 PM »
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Jab se tune merra hath chhoda hai,
tab se kalam ne bhi merra sath chhoda hai,

nhi bante koi alfaz merre jazbato k,
terri doori ne merra har ehsas toda hai,

tu tou wahan apno mein khush hai,
merri tanhai ne bhi aaj mujhse rukh moda hai,

mhbt se darte the per tune hausla dilaya,
aur aaj tune hi mhbt ko phir BEWAFA LAFZ se joda hai..

tu darr mat merre ajnabi main sambhal jaungi,
jis chaht k tufan mein aaj tune bhi mujhe laa chhoda hai......


Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #17 on: March 27, 2010, 09:35:26 PM »
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shukriya rajesh ji..
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«Reply #18 on: March 28, 2010, 03:42:24 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 07:11:24 PM
Jab se tune merra hath chhoda hai,
tab se kalam ne bhi merra sath chhoda hai,

nhi bante koi alfaz merre jazbato k,
terri doori ne merra har ehsas toda hai,

tu tou wahan apno mein khush hai,
merri tanhai ne bhi aaj mujhse rukh moda hai,

mhbt se darte the per tune hausla dilaya,
aur aaj tune hi mhbt ko phir BEWAFA LAFZ se joda hai..

tu darr mat merre ajnabi main sambhal jaungi,
jis chaht k tufan mein aaj tune bhi mujhe laa chhoda hai......

bakhubi utara hai dil k dard ko inn lafjon mein bbl ji....bahut khoob
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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2010, 03:48:35 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Sahihab ji....aapne iss thread ka rang aur bhi badha diya.....
Yu hi likhte rahiye...... Clapping Smiley

Klaskar ji khoob saath diya aapne bbl ji ka...... Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: March 29, 2010, 08:18:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya nikhar ji...
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«Reply #21 on: March 29, 2010, 08:21:31 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 27, 2010, 07:39:39 PM
Bahut hi khoob jawab diya hai shihab ji apne...Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Terre har dard ka andaza hai mujhe,
kabhi tune merri bolti khamoshi ko dekha,

tu hi tha hamare rishte ki shuruwat karne wala,
kabhi tune merri tadap ko merri baato mein dekha,

aaj tujhe merre ilzamo se hazaro gile hain,
kabhi merri chahto ki hadh ko tune parakhke dekha,

kitni asani se tu kehta raha ki nhi ji payega merre bina,
kabhi tune merri nigaho mein chhipe terre aks ko dekha,

tu tou diwana tha apni hi dhun mein..
kabhi terri judai mein merri jaagi ankho ko aur unme ruke hue paani ko dekha,

aur kya saboot du ki chahti hu tujhe main..
kabhi tune merre lafzo mein basi terri mhbt ki kahani ko dekha......

Humesha Ki tarah Bahut Bahut Khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har Lafz mein Dard Chipa Hai..Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #22 on: March 29, 2010, 08:26:53 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji... notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #23 on: April 01, 2010, 07:43:58 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 01, 2010, 06:43:34 PM


Kaise Dekhun Aapke Lafzon Mein Muhabbat Ka Ehsas
Aapto Har Kisi Se Issi Andaaz Mein Guftgu Karte Hain.
 
Loota Te Rehte Hain Bas  Auro,n Pe Hi Apni Chahtein
Kahaan Ik Pal Ko  Bhi Aap Humari ,Justju Karte Hain
 
Mat Puch Kis Qadar Hone Lagti Hai Dil Men Hulchul Ki
Jab Kbhi Ap Aake Humse, Koi Baat Rubaru Karte Hain.
 
Ilzam Dene Se Pahle Mujhe, Aa Zara Sa Aakar Dekhle
Jaan Jaaoge Ki Hum ,Kis Qadar Aapki Aarzu Karte Hain.

Kaise Dekhun Aapke Lafzon MeIn Muhabbat Ka Ehsas
Aapto Har Kisi Se Issi Andaaz Mein Guftgu Karte Hain.

bahut khoob ji...


Kya izhar karu main tujhse apni mhbt ka,
tu kya jane terri chaht mein kin kin halaato se guzar rahi hu main,

jis mhbt ko gali gali dhundhti rahi,
tu kya jane terri judai mein kitni barsato se guzar rahi hu main,

tujhe kuch naa keh kar bhi terre liye tadpati hu,
tu kya jane kitni tanhai bhari raato se guzar rahi hu main,

merri tanhai ko door kar usme mhbt bharna wale,
tu kya jane terri hasrat rakhte hue bhi tujhe khone ki baato se guzar rahi hu main,

kis tarah das rahi hai ye khamoshi mujhko tujhe kya kahu,
tu kya jane terri muskaan k liye viraniyo ki kaisi saugato se guzar rahi hu main,

ek hi baat kehna chahti hu dil-o-jaan se tujhe..
tu kya jane dil mein terri bepanah mhbt chhupa kar bhi sar-e-aam berukhi k jazbaato se guzar rahi hu main......
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«Reply #24 on: April 01, 2010, 07:56:34 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Shihab ji,Geet ji,Kapil ji.bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aap sabne.really touched.great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #25 on: April 01, 2010, 08:01:51 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya madhu ji...
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«Reply #26 on: April 02, 2010, 11:24:37 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 01, 2010, 06:43:34 PM


Kaise Dekhun Aapke Lafzon Mein Muhabbat Ka Ehsas
Aapto Har Kisi Se Issi Andaaz Mein Guftgu Karte Hain.
 
Loota Te Rehte Hain Bas  Auro,n Pe Hi Apni Chahtein
Kahaan Ik Pal Ko  Bhi Aap Humari ,Justju Karte Hain
 
Mat Puch Kis Qadar Hone Lagti Hai Dil Men Hulchul Ki
Jab Kbhi Ap Aake Humse, Koi Baat Rubaru Karte Hain.
 
Ilzam Dene Se Pahle Mujhe, Aa Zara Sa Aakar Dekhle
Jaan Jaaoge Ki Hum ,Kis Qadar Aapki Aarzu Karte Hain.

Kaise Dekhun Aapke Lafzon MeIn Muhabbat Ka Ehsas
Aapto Har Kisi Se Issi Andaaz Mein Guftgu Karte Hain.

Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: April 02, 2010, 11:26:49 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 01, 2010, 07:43:58 PM
bahut khoob ji...


Kya izhar karu main tujhse apni mhbt ka,
tu kya jane terri chaht mein kin kin halaato se guzri hu main,

jis mhbt ko gali gali dhundhti rahi,
tu kya jane terri judai mein kitni barsato se guzri hu main,

tujhe kuch naa keh kar bhi terre liye tadpati hu,
tu kya jane kitni tanhai bhari raato se guzri hu main,

merri tanhai ko door kar usme mhbt bharna wale,
tu kya jane terri hasrat rakhte hue bhi tujhe khone ki baato se guzri hu main,

kis tarah das rahi hai ye khamoshi mujhko tujhe kya kahu,
tu kya jane terri muskaan k liye viraniyo ki kaisi saugato se guzri hu main,

ek hi baat kehna chahti hu dil-o-jaan se tujhe..
tu kya jane dil mein terri bepanah mhbt chhupa kar bhi sar-e-aam berukhi k jazbaato se guzri hu main......

Bahut Bahut Khooob Geetji! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi khoobsurti se Aapne Kuch Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon Mein Bayaan Kiya
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«Reply #28 on: April 02, 2010, 01:16:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shihab ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on March 25, 2010, 09:23:50 PM
Kiya Hi Kab Tha Tumne Izhaar-e-Muhabat
Jo Aaj Lagaaye Mere Sar Itne Ilzaam Hai.

Kya Itna Hi Yakin Tha Chahton Pe Tumhe
Jo Likha Ye Shiqayaton Bhara Qalaam Hai.

Yahi Khata Thi Ki Tootkar Chaha, Shayad
Issliye Diye Tumne Mujhey Ye Inaam Hai

Aey Mehfil Men Karne Wale Rushwa Kabhi
Ake Dekh Kaise Guzrti Meri Bhi Sham Hai

Na Kar Yun Bina Jaane Koi Faisla-e-Dilbar
Mera To Aj Bhi Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Hai.

Tu Chahe Kitna B Gira De Nazron Se Magar
Mere Dil Men Aj Bhi Tera Wohi Muqam Hai.
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«Reply #29 on: April 02, 2010, 01:18:43 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 02, 2010, 11:26:49 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Geetji! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi khoobsurti se Aapne Kuch Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon Mein Bayaan Kiya

bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji kuch editing ki hai ho sake tou gaur farma lijiyega...ek baar phir shukriya ji...
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