Chhoda hai...

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«Reply #60 on: April 08, 2010, 09:11:28 PM »
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Shukriya ji aur bahut sahi kaha apne..sapno chahe jitne hi mushkil kyun naa ho hausle se har sapne ko poora kiya jaa sakta hai aur uske liye insaan ka positive attitude apni zindgi ki taraf hona bahut zaruri hai jo ki main apke alfzo mein aksar dekhti hu...

bahut khoob likha hai ji...


Dono jahan mein apna pyar bikher k,
sine mein terri arzu ko liye chalte rahenge,
tujhe naa pake bhi hum terre hi rahenge..
jine mein terri justju ko liye chalte rahenge......
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«Reply #61 on: April 09, 2010, 04:47:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 08, 2010, 07:44:10 PM
Wah wah Kapil dost aur Geet jee..bahaut khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #62 on: April 09, 2010, 04:53:34 PM »
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Bahut achche Rahim bhai...

kal tak unse mohabbat thi aaj unke khwaabon se hai,
ab unse rishta na raha bas unke yaadon se hai...

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 08, 2010, 08:17:18 PM
Woh aye toh the zindagi main meri yaaron,
Meri shaksiyat nahin; yaad banke rehgaye...
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«Reply #63 on: April 09, 2010, 05:52:11 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji. haan zindagi k sahi maze ko lootne k liye optimistic hona bahut jaruri hai. humko haar me bhi jeet ko dhundna chahiye. kuch agar kho dete hain to usime paane ki khushi ka ehsaas hona chahiye. koi baat nahi agar aaj haar gaye kal jeet hamari hi hogi.agar aisa nahi sochenge to aasuon k siwa aur kuch nahi mil paega....

Aur aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai...

na paake paane ko hum haasil kahenge,
jeewan k har pal me hum tere rahenge,
tera pyaar mil gaya to jannat kahenge,
na mile tum humein to kismat kahenge...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 08, 2010, 09:11:28 PM
Shukriya ji aur bahut sahi kaha apne..sapno chahe jitne hi mushkil kyun naa ho hausle se har sapne ko poora kiya jaa sakta hai aur uske liye insaan ka positive attitude apni zindgi ki taraf hona bahut zaruri hai jo ki main apke alfzo mein aksar dekhti hu...

bahut khoob likha hai ji...


Dono jahan mein apna pyar bikher k,
sine mein terri arzu ko liye chalte rahenge,
tujhe naa pake bhi hum terre hi rahenge..
jine mein terri justju ko liye chalte rahenge......
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«Reply #64 on: April 10, 2010, 04:42:45 PM »
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bahut khoob hamesh ye hi attitude aur thinking rakhiyega zindgi ki taraf..sach maaniye zindgi mein har dard mitha lagega...bahut khoob likha hai apne...


Tujhe na pake bhi jina tou nhi chhodungi,
bus dobara ankho se muskura nhi paungi,
tujhe paane ki chah har lamha rahegi sine mein..
aur ek isi wajah se main tujhe bhula nhi paungi......
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«Reply #65 on: April 10, 2010, 06:43:41 PM »
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Mehfil do kadam aur badhane tatha jamane ke liye
aap dono ne bahut umda kaarye kiya hai Geet aur Kapil Ji
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«Reply #66 on: April 10, 2010, 08:07:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... aap logo ka protsaahan hi hai jo hume likhne k liye majboor karti hai. aap k ek ek shabd hamare liye aage likhne ki taaqat ban jaati hai... teh dil se shuriya adaa karna chahunga aapka Rajesh ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

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Mehfil do kadam aur badhane tatha jamane ke liye
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«Reply #67 on: April 10, 2010, 08:15:35 PM »
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Ji shukriya. Sahi kaha aapne. Hum to hamesha se hi aise rehne ko tayyar the aur hain. Par aap kisi haar k baad muskurana kaise chhod sakte hain? Ye to zindagi se bhaagna hua na ? Galat baat hai na ye? hamesha har gham me haste rahiye... keep smiling...

Aur bahut achcha likha hai aapne...

bhool to tujhe hum bhi nahi paayenge,
tujhe yaad karke har pal muskurayenge,
teri baaton ko un mulaquaton ko yaad karke,
har ghadi pyaar k geet gungunayenge....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 10, 2010, 04:42:45 PM
bahut khoob hamesh ye hi attitude aur thinking rakhiyega zindgi ki taraf..sach maaniye zindgi mein har dard mitha lagega...bahut khoob likha hai apne...


Tujhe na pake bhi jina tou nhi chhodungi,
bus dobara ankho se muskura nhi paungi,
tujhe paane ki chah har lamha rahegi sine mein..
aur ek isi wajah se main tujhe bhula nhi paungi......
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«Reply #68 on: April 10, 2010, 08:57:42 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 10, 2010, 06:43:41 PM
Mehfil do kadam aur badhane tatha jamane ke liye
aap dono ne bahut umda kaarye kiya hai Geet aur Kapil Ji

bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji..
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«Reply #69 on: April 10, 2010, 09:07:41 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 10, 2010, 08:15:35 PM
Ji shukriya. Sahi kaha aapne. Hum to hamesha se hi aise rehne ko tayyar the aur hain. Par aap kisi haar k baad muskurana kaise chhod sakte hain? Ye to zindagi se bhaagna hua na ? Galat baat hai na ye? hamesha har gham me haste rahiye... keep smiling...

Aur bahut achcha likha hai aapne...

bhool to tujhe hum bhi nahi paayenge,
tujhe yaad karke har pal muskurayenge,
teri baaton ko un mulaquaton ko yaad karke,
har ghadi pyaar k geet gungunayenge....


Ji shukriya ji..aesa kuch nhi hai kapil ji..haar k baad muskurana sikh gyi hu..

Chehre se chhal karna agya hai hamein,
pal pal mein rang badalna agya hai hamein,
kabhi rote hai kabhi muskura lete hai..
khushi aur gum dono mein sambhalna agya hai hamein......
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«Reply #70 on: April 10, 2010, 09:44:46 PM »
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Par ek baat jarur yaad rakhiye. Muskan sirf chehre pe ya hothon pe nahi dil se honi chahiye. Warna kya faida agar andar dard hai aur chehre pe muskaan. Aisi muskaan bemaine hoti hai...

aapka yun girke sambhalna khoobi hai aapki,
gham me bhi yun muskurana khoobi hai aapki,
chahte hain hum ki aap khush rahen hamesha,
par dard ko humse chhupana khoobi hai aapki...


Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 10, 2010, 09:07:41 PM
Ji shukriya ji..aesa kuch nhi hai kapil ji..haar k baad muskurana sikh gyi hu..

Chehre se chhal karna agya hai hamein,
pal pal mein rang badalna agya hai hamein,
kabhi rote hai kabhi muskura lete hai..
khushi aur gum dono mein sambhalna agya hai hamein......
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«Reply #71 on: April 13, 2010, 06:52:46 PM »
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ji bahut sahi kaha apne kapil ji..aur bahut khoob likha bhi hai...


Mujhse zyada tujhe aur koi na pyar karega,
tu bhi merri har dhadkan pehechanta hai,
tujhe khona nhi chahti main kisi bhi haal mein..
kyunki tu mujhe mujhse bhi zyada janta hai,
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«Reply #72 on: April 13, 2010, 08:27:54 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

har dhadkan pe mere tera hi naam hai,
tu hi meri har talash meri justju hai,
kaise kahun tujhe ki tu mere liye kya hai,
mera pehla pyaar meri aakhri mohabbat tu hai...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 13, 2010, 06:52:46 PM
ji bahut sahi kaha apne kapil ji..aur bahut khoob likha bhi hai...


Mujhse zyada tujhe aur koi na pyar karega,
tu bhi merri har dhadkan pehechanta hai,
tujhe khona nhi chahti main kisi bhi haal mein..
kyunki tu mujhe mujhse bhi zyada janta hai,
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«Reply #73 on: April 13, 2010, 09:07:02 PM »
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Wow bahut khoob Geet ji,Kapil ji,Rajesh ji.very touching and lovely lines.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #74 on: April 13, 2010, 10:09:19 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 13, 2010, 09:07:02 PM
Wow bahut khoob Geet ji,Kapil ji,Rajesh ji.very touching and lovely lines.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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