Chhoda hai...

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«Reply #75 on: April 14, 2010, 10:56:42 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 13, 2010, 09:07:02 PM
Wow bahut khoob Geet ji,Kapil ji,Rajesh ji.very touching and lovely lines.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

shukriya madhu ji...
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«Reply #76 on: April 14, 2010, 11:00:49 AM »
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shukriya ji...

Agar itni hi mhbt hai tou door naa jana,
merri in ankho ko phir se naa rulana,
aati jaati har sans mein base ho tum merri..
dekho kisi gair k liye mujhe naa bhulana......
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«Reply #77 on: April 14, 2010, 06:08:20 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne... rula kaise sakte hain aapki aankho ko hum...

kyun sochti ho tum ki kabhi main tumhe bhool jaunga,
tumhari awaaz pe main maut k darwaaze se laut aunga,
maut aajaaye kabhi to maang lu do pal ki zindagi khuda se,
mar bhi gaya to tumhaare mohabbat ko na bhool paunga...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 14, 2010, 11:00:49 AM
shukriya ji...

Agar itni hi mhbt hai tou door naa jana,
merri in ankho ko phir se naa rulana,
aati jaati har sans mein base ho tum merri..
dekho kisi gair k liye mujhe naa bhulana......
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«Reply #78 on: April 15, 2010, 08:42:11 PM »
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Shukriya ji...bahut hi mhbt bhare alfaz likhe hai apne...

Terre jane k baad tujhse koi silsila naa rahe,
jo kam naa kar sake kabhi aesa koi faasla na rahe,
agar judai hi likhi hai apne muqaddar mein..
tou milan ki aas kaa koi kaafila naa rahe......
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«Reply #79 on: April 16, 2010, 01:17:55 AM »
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Shukriya Geet ji...aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

juda hoke bhi juda na ho paunga,
tujhe chhod k main kahaan jaunga,
rishta tujhse hai har janam ka,
mar ke bhi tera saath main nibhaunga...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 15, 2010, 08:42:11 PM
Shukriya ji...bahut hi mhbt bhare alfaz likhe hai apne...

Terre jane k baad tujhse koi silsila naa rahe,
jo kam naa kar sake kabhi aesa koi faasla na rahe,
agar judai hi likhi hai apne muqaddar mein..
tou milan ki aas kaa koi kaafila naa rahe......
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«Reply #80 on: April 16, 2010, 01:22:37 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Geet ji n Kapil ji,great creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep up the good work
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«Reply #81 on: April 16, 2010, 01:26:22 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... aap logo ka protsaahan aur Geet ji ka saath milta rahega to ye silsila yunhi chalta rahega...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 16, 2010, 01:22:37 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Geet ji n Kapil ji,great creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep up the good work
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«Reply #82 on: April 16, 2010, 12:58:48 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 16, 2010, 01:22:37 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Geet ji n Kapil ji,great creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep up the good work

thnx alot madhu ji....
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«Reply #83 on: April 16, 2010, 01:03:39 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 01:17:55 AM
Shukriya Geet ji...aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

juda hoke bhi juda na ho paunga,
tujhe chhod k main kahaan jaunga,
rishta tujhse hai har janam ka,
mar ke bhi tera saath main nibhaunga...


shukriya ji...

Koi jhutha khuab tu merri ankho ko naa de,
pehle hi main gum chhupa kar muskurati hu,
tujhe paane k khayal se ji uthiti hu phir se..
per tujhe khone k darr se phir toot jati hu......
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«Reply #84 on: April 16, 2010, 01:16:41 PM »
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bahut khoob Geet ji...

khwaab jo mere dekhogi wo poore honge,
har khwaab poora hone tak hum hi honge,
kyun mujhe khone k darr se tut jaati ho roz,
agar tutoge tum to saath me hum bhi to honge...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 16, 2010, 01:03:39 PM
shukriya ji...

Koi jhutha khuab tu merri ankho ko naa de,
pehle hi main gum chhupa kar muskurati hu,
tujhe paane k khayal se ji uthiti hu phir se..
per tujhe khone k darr se phir toot jati hu......
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«Reply #85 on: April 16, 2010, 06:58:57 PM »
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shukriya aur bahut hi khoob rply diya hai apne...

Har yad terri rahegi mehfuz merre dil mein,
naa koi aur ayega ab merre dil ki mehfil mein,
tujhe paane ka har jatan karungi main..
per apne farz na bhulaungi main terre haasil mein......
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«Reply #86 on: April 17, 2010, 09:51:07 PM »
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shukriya ji...

tujhse dur jaana asaan na hoga tere aane k baad,
tujhe bhulana asaan na hoga tujhe paane k baad,
mere har haasil pe ab tera naam hai,
kisi aur ko chahna asaan na hoga tujhe chahne k baad...
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«Reply #87 on: April 17, 2010, 10:44:13 PM »
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Ba.di achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Kapil aur Geet Ji
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«Reply #88 on: April 17, 2010, 10:51:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 17, 2010, 10:44:13 PM
Ba.di achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Kapil aur Geet Ji
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«Reply #89 on: April 18, 2010, 12:07:24 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 17, 2010, 10:44:13 PM
Ba.di achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap dono ne Kapil aur Geet Ji

shukriya rajesh ji...bahut acha lagta hai jab koi apna kimti waqt nikal kar hamare kaam ko pasand karta hai...shukriya ek baar phir...
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