Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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Tanha chod do muze, aab iss shor se muze daar lagta hai
Yeh mehfilo se aab dil bhar gaya, Par Tanhai main rehne se bi daar lagta hai

Voh hum se bichad gaye kuch aise ki , aab kissi se milne ko bi daar lagta hai
Khafa na ho mere Dost, Teri dosti se nahi uske baad ki dusmani se daar lagta hai

Kitne fasle teah kaar aaye hum , aab to in raston pe chalne se bi daar lagta hai
Teri Talash main garam ret paar youn chale hum ki , aapne pav (feet) ke chaalo( wound) se daar lagta hai

Zinda hai aur jeena bi hai , paar aab jindgi jeene se daar lagta hai
Haar darkan pe naam tumra tha, aab to sans lene se bi daar lagta hai

Tum se juda hue hum jis raste pe , Ab to kissi manzil ki aur badne se bi daar lagta hai
Youn toot ke choor hue teri mohbat main hum ki aab to Pyar karne se bi daar lagta hai

Milan ke baad judai aur judai ke baad milan bi hota hai
Tum kahin na muze mil jao fir se, Isliye aab haar Mulakaat se daar lagta hai .............

**Neel**


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 07:23:23 PM »

Aaj pehli baar aisa ho raha hai ki main compliment dena chah raha hoon par keys nahi mil rahe hain keyboard pe... main aapki is kavita me doob gaya hoon...ehsaason ko itni khoobsurti se aapne shabdon me utara hai ki kya kahen...WAH... sach dil ki gehraayion ko chhu gayi hai aapki ye kavita... aur ab iske compliment me kuch likh likhne se bhi dar lagta hai... sach hi kaha hai aapne ki aaj kuch alag hi mood me hoon... sach me.. bahut hi alag mood me hain aap... ab tak ki aapki ye poem mujhe best lagi... aapki har poem ek se badhkar ek hai par is k kya kehne... WAH.... aap hi bata dijiye iski taarif me main kya likhun... KAMAAL nahi likh raha q ki ye KAMAAL se kai guna upar hai... to main is kavita k credits kam nahi karna chahta KAMAAL kehke... aur main khud iske aage koi kavita nahi likh raha q ki main kuch bhi likhunga to meri kavita ko sharm se mu chhipana padega... bahut bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne....bahut dard bhara hai isme... aap to hamesha hasne hasaane waalon me se hain na ... fir itne dard bhare ehsaas kahan se dhund k laaye aap? Huh?

..... likhna shuru kiya hoon par kya likh raha hoon kya likhun samajh nahi paa raha hoon... aaj taarif k liye shabd nahi mil rahe hain Neel ji... it's too good.... superb....!!!!!!!!!


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 07:32:13 PM »

Hey Kapil .... no yaar itni tarif ki haqdaar nahi hoon .. yeh i agred its gud one bt itni nahi jatni aapne tarif ki

ur vry much ryt ki i alwyz +ive aur khosih karti hoon ki saab ko khush rekho.
Told u im in diff mood 2day ... dnt vana 2 b bt i m dnt knoe y ?
U cant keep up high all d tym

Tons of Thnx ... No words 4 me say Thnx 2 u aise hi yeh aap saab ki apricition hai jo main kuch toda bhut likhne lagi hoon ...

DIs Lyf is really starnge u nver knoe wat it stores 4 u That's y alwyz said ... Alwyz be +ive ...

Quote from: klaskar on April 25, 2010, 07:23:23 PM

..... likhna shuru kiya hoon par kya likh raha hoon kya likhun samajh nahi paa raha hoon... aaj taarif k liye shabd nahi mil rahe hain Neel ji... it's too good.... superb....!!!!!!!!!


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 07:35:28 PM »

Kyon yeh jindgi hai aur kyon jeena padta hai
Thaq gaye hoon itna ki aab sans lena b bhari padta hai


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 07:48:06 PM »

main kabhi jhooti taarif nahi karta... mere saath bhi yahi hota hai na chahte huye bhi kabhi kabhi upset ho jata hoon... kuch yaadein kabhi bhi pichha nahi chhodti...

u r always welcome Neel ji...

pata hai aajkal mujhe sabse jyada hasi kaunse joke pe aata hai... jab aapke saath kuch bura hota hai aur har koi aapse ye kehta hai ki something is good for u in future.... hehehheeh.. ab bhi hasi aa gayi is joke pe... future kisne dekha hai... aur jiske saath bhi bura hota hai har us vyakti k saath future me kuch achcha hona rehta hai ... hai na.... hehehehehe.... hasi ruk hi nahi rahi meri ab.... don't take it seriously... bas dil me aaya aur main likhta gaya... keep smiling..... Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 07:32:13 PM

Hey Kapil .... no yaar itni tarif ki haqdaar nahi hoon .. yeh i agred its gud one bt itni nahi jatni aapne tarif ki

ur vry mumain kabhi jhooti taarif nahi karta... mere saath bhi yahi hota hai na chahte huye bhi kabhi kabhi upset ho jata hoon... kuch yaadein kabhi bhi pichha nahi chhodti...

u r always welcome Neel ji...

pata hai aajkal mujhe sabse jyada hasi kaunse joke pe aata hai... jab aapke saath kuch bura hota hai aur har koi aapse ye kehta hai ki something is good for u in future.... hehehheeh.. ab bhi hasi aa gayi is joke pe... future kisne dekha hai... aur jiske saath bhi bura hota hai har us vyakti k saath future me kuch achcha hona rehta hai ... hai na.... hehehehehe.... hasi ruk hi nahi rahi meri ab.... don't take it seriously... bas dil me aaya aur main likhta gaya... keep smiling..... Usual Smile

ch ryt ki i alwyz +ive aur khosih karti hoon ki saab ko khush rekho.
Told u im in diff mood 2day ... dnt vana 2 b bt i m dnt knoe y ?
U cant keep up high all d tym

Tons of Thnx ... No words 4 me say Thnx 2 u aise hi yeh aap saab ki apricition hai jo main kuch toda bhut likhne lagi hoon ...

DIs Lyf is really starnge u nver knoe wat it stores 4 u That's y alwyz said ... Alwyz be +ive ...


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 07:59:36 PM »

bahut dard hai aaj aapke shabdon mein... humse bhi raha nahi gaya kuch likhe bina...

kuch bhooli yaadon ko yaad kar k aaj rona aata hai,
unki majbooriyon ko yaad karke humko rona aata hai,
majboor wo the par kamzor to hum bhi the us pal,
apni kamzoriyon ko yaad karke humko rona aata hai....

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 07:35:28 PM

Kyon yeh jindgi hai aur kyon jeena padta hai
Thaq gaye hoon itna ki aab sans lene taak ko di nahi karta


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 08:23:40 PM »

Maat ro eh dil uske liye jo kabhi tha hi nahi
Duniya uzar gaye hamri aur usse kuch pata hi nahi

Quote from: klaskar on April 25, 2010, 07:59:36 PM


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 08:26:23 PM »

I have no words..Kapil Dost ne sab kehdia...Main toh doob gaya..har lavz dil choo gaya..Bas only my salutes...Likte rahein aur Khush rahein..

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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2010, 08:27:29 PM »

Nice ones by you too Kapil Dost... Applause


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2010, 08:30:09 PM »

Thnx a lot Kapil......

No its not a joke...... Its fact if u think it happns... if u dont think gud Hoe gud can happn .........
So its vry imp alwys keep ur hopes alive.....

Live in today & hope for tomorow
Its ur thoughts which r making ur lyf & ur future..

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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 08:34:15 PM »

lovely n painful lines...

safar me zindagi ke kai humsafar mil jaate hain,
kuch saath chalte hain kuch pichhe reh jaate hain,
humne bhi to chaha tha saath kisi k chalna par,
kuch palon k saath k baad bas tanha reh jaate hain...

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 08:23:40 PM

Maat ro eh dil uske liye jo kabhi tha hi nahi
Duniya uzar gaye hamri aur usse kuch pata hi nahi


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 08:35:07 PM »

Thanx a lot Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 25, 2010, 08:27:29 PM

Nice ones by you too Kapil Dost... Applause


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2010, 08:37:17 PM »

Well said Neel ji...!!!

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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2010, 08:46:23 PM »

Kyon voh beete hue paal yaad aate hai
Yaad karna nahi chate fir bi yeh kyon chale aate?

Quote from: klaskar on April 25, 2010, 08:34:15 PM


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Re: Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2010, 08:52:28 PM »

Rahim Thanx a lot!!!!!!

Its really mean a lot 2 me 'coz ur writngs r alwyz vry vry deep ..

Thnx 2 all of u .......
Keep smiling Alywz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 25, 2010, 08:26:23 PM

I have no words..Kapil Dost ne sab kehdia...Main toh doob gaya..har lavz dil choo gaya..Bas only my salutes...Likte rahein aur Khush rahein..

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