Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)>

by neelgold on April 25, 2010, 07:10:52 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 25, 2010, 08:58:28 PM »
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yaadon pe kahaan koi zor chala paate hain,
jab ji karta hai wo bekhauff chale aate hain,
kuch beete huye lamhe jinhe bhoolna chahte hain,
ye yaadein apne sang unhe bhi le aate hain....


Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 08:46:23 PM
Kyon voh beete hue paal yaad aate hai
Yaad karna nahi chate fir bi yeh kyon chale aate?
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«Reply #16 on: April 25, 2010, 09:19:28 PM »
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Neel ji sach mein aapne bahut dard bhari kavita likhi.bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likhi.reall heart touching creation.excellent.Kapil ji aap bhi kuch kam nahi likht.great lines.keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2010, 09:42:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 25, 2010, 09:19:28 PM
Neel ji sach mein aapne bahut dard bhari kavita likhi.bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likhi.reall heart touching creation.excellent.Kapil ji aap bhi kuch kam nahi likht.great lines.keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: April 26, 2010, 05:48:14 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 07:10:52 PM
Tanha chhod do mujhe, aab iss shor se mujhe darr lagta hai
Yeh mehfilon se ab dil bhar gaya, Par Tanhai main rehne se bhi darr lagta hai

Voh hum se bichhad gaye kuch aise ki , aab kissi se milne ko bi darr lagta hai
Khafa na ho mere Dost, Teri dosti se nahi uske baad ki dusmani se darr lagta hai

Kitne fasle teah kaar aaye hum , aab to in raston pe chalne se bhi darr lagta hai
Teri Talash main garam ret paar youn chale hum ki , aapne panv (feet) ke chaalon( wound) se darr lagta hai

Zinda hai aur jeena bhi hai , par ab zindagi jeene se darr lagta hai
Har darkan pe naam tumhara tha, aab to sans lene se bi darr lagta hai

Tum se juda hue hum jis raste pe , Ab to kissi manzil ki aur badne se bhi darr lagta hai
Youn toot ke choor hue teri mohabbat main hum ki ab to Pyar karne se bhi darr lagta hai

Milan ke baad judai aur judai ke baad milan bhi hota hai
Tum kahin na mujhe mil jao fir se, Isliye aab har Mulakaat se darr lagta hai .............


**Neel**


Bahut hi uchkoti ki peshkash hai Neel Ji
Itna dard kahan chhupa ke rakkha tha aap ne

Ab to hume is dard mein doob jaane se darr lagta hai
Mehfil mein aap dono, (Kapil aur Neel)ke aane se darr lagta hai
Kabhi muskura dete the ab muskurane se darr lagta hai
Kuchh sudhaar kiya hoon par teri narazgi se darr lagta hai
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«Reply #19 on: April 26, 2010, 09:49:37 AM »
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Wah ! wah !! wah !!! Neel-di bade he khoobsoorat andaaz mai.....
apne zindagi k kitne he pehluon mai chhupe darr ka izhaar kiya hai.....
Kahin atti se uoob hai tou kahin bhavishya k garbh mai chheepe darr ki kalpana...    

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Tariffo ka silsila iss kadar badh raha hai sakhee kay
Ab tumhe fuuul k kuppa hone ka darr na lagne lage

Taaliyon ki gadd-gaddahat ka shor suunn kay sakhee
Darti hu ki kahin tumhe iss shor se darr na lagne lage


Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 07:10:52 PM
Tanha chod do muze, aab iss shor se muze daar lagta hai
Yeh mehfilo se aab dil bhar gaya, Par Tanhai main rehne se bi daar lagta hai

Voh hum se bichad gaye kuch aise ki , aab kissi se milne ko bi daar lagta hai
Khafa na ho mere Dost, Teri dosti se nahi uske baad ki dusmani se daar lagta hai

Kitne fasle teah kaar aaye hum , aab to in raston pe chalne se bi daar lagta hai
Teri Talash main garam ret paar youn chale hum ki , aapne pav (feet) ke chaalo( wound) se daar lagta hai

Zinda hai aur jeena bi hai , paar aab jindgi jeene se daar lagta hai
Haar darkan pe naam tumra tha, aab to sans lene se bi daar lagta hai

Tum se juda hue hum jis raste pe , Ab to kissi manzil ki aur badne se bi daar lagta hai
Youn toot ke choor hue teri mohbat main hum ki aab to Pyar karne se bi daar lagta hai

Milan ke baad judai aur judai ke baad milan bi hota hai
Tum kahin na muze mil jao fir se, Isliye aab haar Mulakaat se daar lagta hai .............


**Neel**
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«Reply #20 on: April 26, 2010, 11:21:02 AM »
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Bahot hi achhi poem likhi hai Neel ji. Kamaal kar diya. Bahot purkashish aur dard se labrez. Bravo.
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«Reply #21 on: April 26, 2010, 12:12:55 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji...

Rajesh ji aap bhi humein khoob sharminda karte hain,
Neel ji ki kalam k aage hum to paani bharte hai,
kabhi socha karte the ki kabhi hum bhi likh lete hain,
ab inka lekh padhke kuch likhne se bhi hum darte hai...

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 26, 2010, 05:48:14 AM
Bahut hi uchkoti ki peshkash hai Neel Ji
Itna dard kahan chhupa ke rakkha tha aap ne

Ab to hume is dard mein doob jaane se darr lagta hai
Mehfil mein aap dono, (Kapil aur Neel)ke aane se darr lagta hai
Kabhi muskura dete the ab muskurane se darr lagta hai
Kuchh sudhaar kiya hoon par teri narazgi se darr lagta hai
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«Reply #22 on: April 26, 2010, 11:08:45 PM »
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Thanx a lot Madhu ji....
Really thnx for ur appricaition !!!!!!!!!

Ur words lots 2 me .. Thnx again 4 ur tym!!!!!!!!!!!!

Behappy alwyz!!!!!
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 25, 2010, 09:19:28 PM
Neel ji sach mein aapne bahut dard bhari kavita likhi.bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likhi.reall heart touching creation.excellent.Kapil ji aap bhi kuch kam nahi likht.great lines.keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: April 26, 2010, 11:11:08 PM »
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Thnx A  lot RAjesh ji BHut khoob kaha aap ne bi

Hamri Narzgi se kya darna eh Dost
Hum to jeete hai sirf teri hansi dekh dekh ke

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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 26, 2010, 05:48:14 AM
Bahut hi uchkoti ki peshkash hai Neel Ji
Itna dard kahan chhupa ke rakkha tha aap ne

Ab to hume is dard mein doob jaane se darr lagta hai
Mehfil mein aap dono, (Kapil aur Neel)ke aane se darr lagta hai
Kabhi muskura dete the ab muskurane se darr lagta hai
Kuchh sudhaar kiya hoon par teri narazgi se darr lagta hai
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«Reply #24 on: April 26, 2010, 11:13:11 PM »
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Wah Wah Koyal ji ......

BHut khoob jawab

Thnx 4 ur appericaition !!!!!!!
Keep smiling!!!!!!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 26, 2010, 09:49:37 AM
Wah ! wah !! wah !!! Neel-di bade he khoobsoorat andaaz mai.....
apne zindagi k kitne he pehluon mai chhupe darr ka izhaar kiya hai.....
Kahin atti se uoob hai tou kahin bhavishya k garbh mai chheepe darr ki kalpana...     

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Tariffo ka silsila iss kadar badh raha hai sakhee kay
Ab tumhe fuuul k kuppa hone ka darr na lagne lage

Taaliyon ki gadd-gaddahat ka shor suunn kay sakhee
Darti hu ki kahin tumhe iss shor se darr na lagne lage
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«Reply #25 on: April 26, 2010, 11:14:52 PM »
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Thnx Riyaz ,

EK choti si khosish thi pasand aah gaye to Happy..

Thnx 4 ur tym & appericaition !!!!!!!!
Khush Rehe...
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 26, 2010, 11:21:02 AM
Bahot hi achhi poem likhi hai Neel ji. Kamaal kar diya. Bahot purkashish aur dard se labrez. Bravo.
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«Reply #26 on: April 26, 2010, 11:16:38 PM »
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Kapil aise b khuch maat bolo
Yeh Raaz aise maat kholo
EK khosish ki thi pasand aah gaye
Abb aur tarif maat karo...

Quote from: klaskar on April 26, 2010, 12:12:55 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji...

Rajesh ji aap bhi humein khoob sharminda karte hain,
Neel ji ki kalam k aage hum to paani bharte hai,
kabhi socha karte the ki kabhi hum bhi likh lete hain,
ab inka lekh padhke kuch likhne se bhi hum darte hai...
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«Reply #27 on: April 26, 2010, 11:20:08 PM »
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Kapil Bhut khoob kaha .....

Yadain to fir yadian hai,
In paar zor koi nahi chalta hai
Haar mausum, haar samy yeh chali aati aati hai
In ko rok kaha koi sakta hai ....
Quote from: klaskar on April 25, 2010, 08:58:28 PM
yaadon pe kahaan koi zor chala paate hain,
jab ji karta hai wo bekhauff chale aate hain,
kuch beete huye lamhe jinhe bhoolna chahte hain,
ye yaadein apne sang unhe bhi le aate hain....
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«Reply #28 on: April 27, 2010, 12:25:36 AM »
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kaam aapne aisa kiya hai,
hum taarif kaise na karein,
raaz ab ye raaz na raha ,
ab chup hum kaise rahein...

Quote from: neelgold on April 26, 2010, 11:16:38 PM
Kapil aise b khuch maat bolo
Yeh Raaz aise maat kholo
EK khosish ki thi pasand aah gaye
Abb aur tarif maat karo...
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«Reply #29 on: April 27, 2010, 12:27:08 AM »
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shukriya Neel ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...



yaadein hain jaise nadi ka paani,
dono ki hai ek jaisi kahani,
apni bahaaw me baha k le jaati,
lagti hai kabhi wo badi suhaani,

nadi ka qahar tab pata chalta hai,
jab usme kabhi baadh aata hai,
yaadein bhi hoti hain baadh k jaisi,
apne sang humein baha k le jaata hai.....


Quote from: neelgold on April 26, 2010, 11:20:08 PM
Kapil Bhut khoob kaha .....

Yadain to fir yadian hai,
In paar zor koi nahi chalta hai
Haar mausum, haar samy yeh chali aati aati hai
In ko rok kaha koi sakta hai ....
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