dard-e-daastan

by samir_bc on December 16, 2009, 05:02:31 AM
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main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta

kuch hi to samjhte hain, aksar sabhi haste hain
isiliye zakhm-e-dil ko dikhana nahi chahta

wada kiya tha usse, na badnaam hone dunga
isiliye main naam uska batana nahi chahta

yeh zakhm to tohfe hain jo usne diye hain
isiliye in zakhmo ko sukhana nahi chahta

nibha rha hun jo wada-e-wafa kiye the maine
isiliye main bewafa use bulana nahi chahta

main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta





samir"dilse"
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2009, 05:12:20 AM »
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Very touching and mindblowing creation Samir ji.bahut hi khoob. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2009, 05:14:52 AM »
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Very touching and mindblowing creation Samir ji.bahut hi khoob. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahot bahot shukriya madhu ji.. apko pasand ayi.
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2009, 06:16:16 AM »
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Bahut Hi sundar Dastan Likhi Hai Samir Ji Aapne Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2009, 06:23:23 AM »
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Bahut Hi sundar Dastan Likhi Hai Samir Ji Aapne Applause


thanks rishi ji...
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2009, 06:33:50 AM »
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Samir Ji Bahot Khub Pesh Ki Aapne Yeh Dastan Nice  Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2009, 07:54:42 AM »
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wah wah Samirji badi achhi najm hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause
Wafa ka kya sila diya hai aapne... icon_salut

Badnaam na hojaaye wo es darr se main
Dard-e-daastan apni sunana nahi chahti

Shaq na ho logo ko hamaare toote rishto ka
Labo pe muskaan bikherti hu,ashq behne nahi deti...




main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta

kuch hi to samjhte hain, aksar sabhi haste hain
isiliye zakhm-e-dil ko dikhana nahi chahta

wada kiya tha usse, na badnaam hone dunga
isiliye main naam uska batana nahi chahta

yeh zakhm to tohfe hain jo usne diye hain
isiliye in zakhmo ko sukhana nahi chahta

nibha rha hun jo wada-e-wafa kiye the maine
isiliye main bewafa use bulana nahi chahta

main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta





samir"dilse"
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2009, 11:49:58 AM »
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Samir Ji Bahot Khub Pesh Ki Aapne Yeh Dastan Nice  Applause Applause Applause

bahot bahot shukriya SK ji.
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samir_bc
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2009, 11:51:31 AM »
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wah wah Samirji badi achhi najm hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause
Wafa ka kya sila diya hai aapne... icon_salut

Badnaam na hojaaye wo es darr se main
Dard-e-daastan apni sunana nahi chahti

Shaq na ho logo ko hamaare toote rishto ka
Labo pe muskaan bikherti hu,ashq behne nahi deti...





shukriya koyal ji........... nice reply. bahot hi sunder likha apne.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2009, 11:56:48 AM »
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Achhi peshkash achhi hai samir ji. Nice sharing.
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samir_bc
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«Reply #10 on: December 16, 2009, 12:01:44 PM »
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Achhi peshkash achhi hai samir ji. Nice sharing.


thanks riyaz ji.......shukriya.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: December 16, 2009, 01:42:57 PM »
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Zzrra nawaji ka shukriya Samir-bhai... angel11




shukriya koyal ji........... nice reply. bahot hi sunder likha apne.
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2009, 01:48:21 PM »
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main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta

kuch hi to samjhte hain, aksar sabhi haste hain
isiliye zakhm-e-dil ko dikhana nahi chahta

wada kiya tha usse, na badnaam hone dunga
isiliye main naam uska batana nahi chahta

yeh zakhm to tohfe hain jo usne diye hain
isiliye in zakhmo ko sukhana nahi chahta

nibha rha hun jo wada-e-wafa kiye the maine
isiliye main bewafa use bulana nahi chahta

main is mehfil ko ashko me dubana nahi chahta
isiliye dard-e-daastan ko sunana nahi chahta





samir"dilse"


Samir jee Bahot khoob. Achcha likha hai. Daad kabul kijiye.
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«Reply #13 on: December 16, 2009, 01:49:18 PM »
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wah wah Samirji badi achhi najm hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause
Wafa ka kya sila diya hai aapne... icon_salut

Badnaam na hojaaye wo es darr se main
Dard-e-daastan apni sunana nahi chahti

Shaq na ho logo ko hamaare toote rishto ka
Labo pe muskaan bikherti hu,ashq behne nahi deti...




koyal jee aap bi bahoot acha reply likha.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #14 on: December 16, 2009, 02:10:55 PM »
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Thanks Ashaji.....

koyal jee aap bi bahoot acha reply likha.
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