----- /// Deewaaron se baatein karte hain /// -----

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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2010, 07:50:47 PM »
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waahhhhhhhh ji waahhhhhhhhh kya khub kaha hai kapil ji......
kuch hum bhi shikayat karte hain.....

Mahobbat me ye berukhi
Hume til til jalati hai
Kaise kahen k kya dil pe
Aur kya humpe guzarti hai

Hamare hi samne tum
Gairon se mila karte ho
Hum dekhte rehte hain tum
Unke gale mila karte ho

Iss tarah tadpate ho
Kyun is tarah jalate ho
Jab karte ho pyar tum
Kyun bewafa kehlate ho

Aake thaam lo mujhko
Ab to adayen kehti hain
Tumhe rijhane ko ye
Sau sau nakhre karti hai…..
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«Reply #16 on: August 29, 2010, 07:54:01 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 07:42:39 PM


Woh kahti hai cigret ke dhue se jigar jalta hai
Hum kahte hai teri yaad se pura ghar jalta hai

Woh kahti hai sharaab se tum hosh meiN nahi rahte
Hum kahte hai kya hua tum humare aaghosh meiN nahi rahte
          



bht khub parwaz ji.......

mast  kaha hai aapne .... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2010, 07:59:32 PM »
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ji sarkaar....

ye to bahut achchi baat hai ki meri kavita kisi ki poori kahaani bataati ho... aapki kahaani bina jaane bina sune hi humne likh diya... ummeed karta hoon aapko kisi tarha ki chot nahi pahuchi hogi meri kavita se... agar pahuchi ho to maafi chahunga...

ji hamaare vichaar milte hain par shayad aadatein nahi...


achcha bahaana hai sharaab ghum bhulaane ka,
andaaz niraala hai ghum dhuye me udaane ka,

kya do boond sharaab se wo wapas aa jaayegi,
fir kya faida apne hi hothon ko jalaane ka...

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 07:42:39 PM
Klaskar Jee aapne sahi kaha hai,
par humne isi liye kaha ke ismeiN aapne kuch masala mix kiya ho per humare liye ismeiN koi masala hi nahi puri tarha hubahu hamare kirdaar ko jata rahi hai aapki yeh kavita......

Waise humare vichaar bhi milte hai to ho sakta hai aadateN bhi milti ho....  Humari likhi line's ko sarahane ka shukriyaa....        



Woh kahti hai cigret ke dhue se jigar jalta hai
Hum kahte hai teri yaad se pura ghar jalta hai

Woh kahti hai sharaab se tum hosh meiN nahi rahte
Hum kahte hai kya hua tum humare aaghosh meiN nahi rahte
          
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«Reply #18 on: August 29, 2010, 08:01:40 PM »
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maar dalaa kapil ji.......

jo kehna tha mujhe aap keh gaye........bht khubbbb....
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«Reply #19 on: August 29, 2010, 08:14:01 PM »
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Klaskar Jee behad mindblowing reply diya hai aapne...... Janab Daad Daad Daad...... HazaaroN daad daad:)         


Bewafa mashook se to yeh cigret hi achchi hai
Dil ko jalati hai per honthoN se to lagti hai

Kyaa diyaa mehbooba ne dard ke paimaanoN ke siva
Yeh sharaab hi to hume sab se juda rakhti hai Winking


         
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«Reply #20 on: August 29, 2010, 08:14:45 PM »
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hahahahahahahaha.....


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 08:01:40 PM
maar dalaa kapil ji.......

jo kehna tha mujhe aap keh gaye........bht khubbbb....
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«Reply #21 on: August 29, 2010, 08:16:18 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Kasak ji... bade khoobsurat andaaz me shikayat kiya hai aapne... lijiye aapki shikaayat ka jawaab de rahe hain hum kuch is tarha....


paas ho nahi hamaare, tum dur ho aaj,
hum tumko har pal dhunda karte hain,
kisi ke chehre me tumhara chehra dikh jaaye,
ye soch ke har kisi se pyaar karte hain,

hamaari berukhi na kaho isko tum sanam,
tumhe kareeb laane ke liye sab karte hain,
jalan se laut aao tum hamaari baahon mein,
tumhe fir se apnaane ke liye sab karte hain,

khataa hamaari jo humne kabhi tumhe bewafaa kahaa ho,
hum to tumhe wafaa ki moorat samajhte hain,
samajh sakte hain mazboori tumhaari hum bhi,
tabhi to tumhaare aane ka intezaar karte hain...


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 07:50:47 PM
waahhhhhhhh ji waahhhhhhhhh kya khub kaha hai kapil ji......
kuch hum bhi shikayat karte hain.....

Mahobbat me ye berukhi
Hume til til jalati hai
Kaise kahen k kya dil pe
Aur kya humpe guzarti hai

Hamare hi samne tum
Gairon se mila karte ho
Hum dekhte rehte hain tum
Unke gale mila karte ho

Iss tarah tadpate ho
Kyun is tarah jalate ho
Jab karte ho pyar tum
Kyun bewafa kehlate ho

Aake thaam lo mujhko
Ab to adayen kehti hain
Tumhe rijhane ko ye
Sau sau nakhre karti hai…..
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«Reply #22 on: August 29, 2010, 08:19:38 PM »
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honth jalaye seena jalaye
fir bhi ise tu muh se lagaye

dil jalaye hosh bhulaye
fir bhi ise tu gale se laagaye

ek kash me ek ghunt me ye
tujhe teri duniya bhulaye

lekin kya duniya bhulkar bhi
tu uss bewafa ko ek pal bhi bhul paye....?
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«Reply #23 on: August 29, 2010, 08:24:43 PM »
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shukriya janaab... par ye aadatein bahut kharaab hoti hai....

use hothon se lagaya tha wo dil jala gayi,
ise hothon se laga rahe ho ye ghar jalaayegi,

baaz nahi aate ho zeher ko hothon se lagaane se,
ye zeher ek din khamoshi se barbaad kar jaayegi...


Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 08:14:01 PM
Klaskar Jee behad mindblowing reply diya hai aapne...... Janab Daad Daad Daad...... HazaaroN daad daad:)         


Bewafa mashook se to yeh cigret hi achchi hai
Dil ko jalati hai per honthoN se to lagti hai

Kyaa diyaa mehbooba ne dard ke paimaanoN ke siva
Yeh sharaab hi to hume sab se juda rakhti hai Winking


         

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«Reply #24 on: August 29, 2010, 08:25:48 PM »
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bahut khoob mohtarma .... !!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 08:19:38 PM
honth jalaye seena jalaye
fir bhi ise tu muh se lagaye

dil jalaye hosh bhulaye
fir bhi ise tu gale se laagaye

ek kash me ek ghunt me ye
tujhe teri duniya bhulaye

lekin kya duniya bhulkar bhi
tu uss bewafa ko ek pal bhi bhul paye....?
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«Reply #25 on: August 29, 2010, 08:26:10 PM »
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naa ji naa ye sab to
baatein bana rahe ho aap
dekho unhe dekh k kaise
itna itraa rahe ho aap

hume kehte ho hume jalake
apna banana chahte ho
lekin dekho kaise goriyon pe
dore daal rahe ho aap

has has k unka dil behlate
unse hi aap naina ladate
dekh mujhe kyun muh ho banate
bade besharm ho gaye ho aap

ab na humse baat karna
na hi tum intezar karna
jaana apni saheliyon sang
ab na humari raah takna

hum bhi ab ho jayenge kisike
bahein daalenge gale me usike
karta ho jo hume sachcha pyaar
wahi banega hamara dildaar...!!!
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«Reply #26 on: August 29, 2010, 08:35:53 PM »
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Yaar aap dono ne mehfil jama dii....

Badi achchi sharing kar rahe hai aap dono.... ek taraf hum akele... chalenga... Koi baat nahi.....

Par is baat Kasak jee ka reply aapke against lag raha hai hume... :p         


Hum bhi apni parwaazi ke hunar jante hai
Karna hai jaadu ko kaise beasar jante hai

Aap na bataaiye hume kaise kya ho jata hai
Hum rahte hai bekhabar sab magar jante hai :p

         
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«Reply #27 on: August 29, 2010, 08:36:39 PM »
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aapke shabdon me... "MASTAM".... mazaa aa gaya padh ke...

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aisi baaton se tum hamaara dil se todo,
is tarha tum hamaara daaman na chhodo,
hamare mazaak ko tumne dil se laga liya,
na jao, is tarha tum humse muh na modo,

na karenge ab hum kisi ladki se baat,
na karenge unse hum ab koi mulaquat,
tumhaare bina meri zindagi adhuri hai,
chaahte hain hum bas tumhaara saath,

kar do humein maaf aur aa jao hamaare paas,
tumhaare aane ki hum lagaa ke baithe hain aas,
duniyaa me kami nahi hai khoobsurat ladkiyon ki,
par hum tumpe fida hain, kuch to hai tumme khaas,

tum kaho to ab hum muskuraana hi chhodd denge,
duniya se hum apne saare rishte tod denge,
na jaao tum chhodke humein thaamke kisi ka haath,
dur hui agar tum humse, hum ye duniya chhod denge...
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«Reply #28 on: August 29, 2010, 08:45:15 PM »
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Shukriya sirji hamaari mehfil ka aanand lene k liye aur usey pasand karne ke liye... bas hum to Kasak ji ka saaath de rahe hain aur mehfil sajti jaa rahi hai....

aapko akele kahaan chhoda humne ... hum to bas aapki aadat ko kharaab keh rahe the aur kuch nahi... bura mat maaniye...

haan Kasak ji ka reply against to hai hi... koshish kiya hai humne unhe manaane ka dekhte hain kya jawaab aata hai unka....

aur aapke post ke jawaab me...

kai baar jaanke bhi hum saagar me kood jaate hain,
tairna aata hai magar jaane kaise doob jaate hain,

ye nahi kehte ki aap me hunar kam hai kisi cheez ka,
par aksar samajhdaar hi galtiyaan kar jaate hain....




Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 08:35:53 PM
Yaar aap dono ne mehfil jama dii....

Badi achchi sharing kar rahe hai aap dono.... ek taraf hum akele... chalenga... Koi baat nahi.....

Par is baat Kasak jee ka reply aapke against lag raha hai hume... :p         


Hum bhi apni parwaazi ke hunar jante hai
Karna hai jaadu ko kaise beasar jante hai

Aap na bataaiye hume kaise kya ho jata hai
Hum rahte hai bekhabar sab magar jante hai :p

         

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«Reply #29 on: August 29, 2010, 09:02:14 PM »
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Bahut achche janab.... Aap jawaab achche de rahe hai shayari meiN isliye hum reply de rahe hai ... chaliye aapki mehfil countinue karte hai......           


Samndar ki khamoshi se gehrai ka andaza laga lete hai
Jankar bhi tyerna doobne kaa mann bana lete hai

Hum dusroN ko kabhi andhere meiN rahne nahi dete
Hum wohi deewaane hai jo khud ka ghar jala lete hai

         

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