----- /// Deewaaron se baatein karte hain /// -----

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«Reply #30 on: August 29, 2010, 10:05:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #31 on: August 29, 2010, 10:11:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon jo aapne hamari kavita ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya...!!!

Kapil Dost, dil choo liya apne..Ek nayi tarikke se likha hai apne jo bahaut zada khubsoorat hai..Kuch lines toh itni achi lagi kay dil main rehgayi..Kuch lines mere halat bayan karti hai..bahaut zada khubsoorat..Teh dil se daad hazirrrrrrr hai Dost..
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«Reply #32 on: August 29, 2010, 10:12:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji... waise hain kahan aajkal aap.. aapke kalam se likha kuch padhne ko nahi mil raha hai...!!!

chittiyaan puraani lifafaon main the......yeh bandd bahut umd alaga janaab ,bahoot khob khass kar iss bandd pe daad hi daad.
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«Reply #33 on: August 30, 2010, 08:37:47 AM »
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Two K ji's....ye thread kab janma aur kab itna bada ho gaya pata hi nahi chala......
Shayad mein tou Deewaaron se he baatein karte reh gayi.....
Apne dard se dukhee aapka ye aanshik kaalpanik dard baant hi nahi payee....

Dair se hi sahi...daad kabul kijiye.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #34 on: September 02, 2010, 06:10:33 PM »
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der se aaye aye to sahi... hum samajh sakte hain aap sahi waqt pe is thread ko waqt nahi de paye par par aap aaye humein is baat ki khushi hai... do K ki mehfil me teesri K ka intezar tha... humne aapki daad dil se qubool ki.. shukriya ...!!!

Two K ji's....ye thread kab janma aur kab itna bada ho gaya pata hi nahi chala......
Shayad mein tou Deewaaron se he baatein karte reh gayi.....
Apne dard se dukhee aapka ye aanshik kaalpanik dard baant hi nahi payee....

Dair se hi sahi...daad kabul kijiye.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #35 on: September 02, 2010, 07:21:29 PM »
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aapke shabdon me... "MASTAM".... mazaa aa gaya padh ke...

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aisi baaton se tum hamaara dil se todo,
is tarha tum hamaara daaman na chhodo,
hamare mazaak ko tumne dil se laga liya,
na jao, is tarha tum humse muh na modo,

na karenge ab hum kisi ladki se baat,
na karenge unse hum ab koi mulaquat,
tumhaare bina meri zindagi adhuri hai,
chaahte hain hum bas tumhaara saath,

kar do humein maaf aur aa jao hamaare paas,
tumhaare aane ki hum lagaa ke baithe hain aas,
duniyaa me kami nahi hai khoobsurat ladkiyon ki,
par hum tumpe fida hain, kuch to hai tumme khaas,

tum kaho to ab hum muskuraana hi chhodd denge,
duniya se hum apne saare rishte tod denge,
na jaao tum chhodke humein thaamke kisi ka haath,
dur hui agar tum humse, hum ye duniya chhod denge...
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wah ji waahhhhhh..ab mana rahe hain..pehle dil dukhaya chhoriyon se naina ladake hume jalake ab pachchta rahe hain...jao ji ab hume bhi nahin chaiye ye jhuta pyaar....suno ab hamari baat

Rehne do ab tum ye manuhaar
Dekh liya hai humne tumhara pyar
Baat baat pe takte rehte ho unko
Jo karti hain har pal solah shringaar

Main kaise tumhare man bhaungi
Main to tehri badi hi sidhi saadhi
Nahin aata mujhe oi bhi saaj shringaar
Jao karo tum unhi se naina chaar

Ab hum yunhi akele reh lenge
Tanha tanha zindagi jee lenge
Naam tumhara leke subah o shaam
Par tum na aana ab kabhi hamare dwaar
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«Reply #36 on: September 03, 2010, 01:45:31 AM »
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tension tension tension... ladkiyon ko manana bhi bahut mehnat ka kaam hai... maanna hi nahi chahti... ab maan bhi jao itne pyaar se mana rahe hain... maan jaao na , ab satao na ...

waise aapne jawaab ek dum mast diya hai... Usual Smile  Applause Applause Applause


khoobsurti chehre se nahi dil se hoti hai,
mohabbat hazaaron se nahi ek se hoti hai,
tum kya jaano kya ho tum mere liye,
tumhaari pehchaan mere dhadkano se hoti hai,

wo aur honge jinhe aadat hogi nakhrewaliyon ki,
humko to tumhaari maasumiyat se mohabbat hai,
wo aur honge jo sringaar se dil lagaate hon,
humko to bas tumhaari saadgi se mohabbat hai,

tum jo ho, jaisi ho, mujhe pasand ho,
tum hi meri dil ho, dhadkan ho,
karke humein maaf aajao pas hamaare,
tumhi hamari pehli aur aakhri chahat ho...
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