DHALTI HUI SHAM KE SAAYE

by mamta bajpai on May 17, 2010, 05:12:09 PM
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DHALTI HUI SHAAM KE SAAYE SE DHAL GAYE
HUM TUMHARI YAAD SE AISE NIKAL GAYE

SAFAR DAR SAFAR HAI KOI MUKAAM NAHI
MANZIL QAREEB THI TO RASTE BADAL GAYE

TAREEKIYON KE RUBAROO MAI EK KIRAN HOON DHOOP KI
WO GARMI-E-HAALAT ME BARF KI TARAH PIGHAL GAYE
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 05:29:12 PM »
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wah mamta saheba , wah ,, 2nd sher ne ruk liya ,, bahoth din baad aisa koi sher nazar se guzra hai ,, dil me ghar karne wala sher hai ,, baaqi ashar bhi qoob rahe .. ahh kahen ya wah , khuch samjh nahi aata , qoob .. dad hazir hain qubool karen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe..


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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2010, 05:40:20 PM »
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THANKS QADEER BHAI!AAP ISLAH KARTE TO YAHI KHAYAL JAADUI RANG ME RANG JATE.OPEN THREAD ME BHI AGAR AAP MERI GALTIYA KO ISHARA KARENGE TO YAQEEN MANIYE ZARA BHI BURA NAHI LAGEGA.UMEED HAI GOUR FARMAYENGE...
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2010, 05:44:09 PM »
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buhat he achhi poem... achha laga par kar..
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2010, 05:49:37 PM »
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THANKS QADEER BHAI!AAP ISLAH KARTE TO YAHI KHAYAL JAADUI RANG ME RANG JATE.OPEN THREAD ME BHI AGAR AAP MERI GALTIYA KO ISHARA KARENGE TO YAQEEN MANIYE ZARA BHI BURA NAHI LAGEGA.UMEED HAI GOUR FARMAYENGE...


Mahutrama Mamta saheba ,,

Mai khud eak talib a ilm hon , shayari ki nok palak sikh raha hon , Apki mahubbath hai jo mujhe kissi qabil samjhti hain app , allah apko khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2010, 06:14:24 PM »
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GOOD ONE MAMTA JI..ISEY MOKAMMAL GHAZAL KI  SHAKAL DEIN TO AUR BHI NIKHAR AAYE GA Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2010, 09:52:15 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2010, 11:37:21 PM »
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Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bhut khoob Mamta ji

DHALTI HUI SHAAM KE SAAYE SE DHAL GAYE
HUM TUMHARI YAAD SE AISE NIKAL GAYE

SAFAR DAR SAFAR HAI KOI MUKAAM NAHI
MANZIL QAREEB THI TO RASTE BADAL GAYE

TAREEKIYON KE RUBAROO MAI EK KIRAN HOON DHOOP KI
WO GARMI-E-HAALAT ME BARF KI TARAH PIGHAL GAYE
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2010, 12:07:40 AM »
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SAFAR DAR SAFAR HAI KOI MUKAAM NAHI
MANZIL QAREEB THI TO RASTE BADAL GAYE

umda likha hai aapne ...bahoot khoob wah...marhoom saheb ki jo raae hai woh biklul sahi hai..ghazal mukammal karein to aur bhi behtreen ashar padhne ko milinge ..ise na mukammal chord kar hamein mayuss na karein..guzarish hai hukum nahi....phir aisa na koi user ajae aur kahe "nazar "ji" aap ka andaaz hukumana hai..urdu ki nafasat ko bhool gae...bus mazaq kar raha hoon..daad qubool karein
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2010, 06:29:42 AM »
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HA HA HA HA HA.NAZAR SAHEB !EK -SHAYAR EK YAADGAR BAN GAYA ,BAAT HI BAAT ME WO HANSI KA VAIZ BAN GAYA.AAP BHI CHUTKIYALENE ME KAM NAHI.VAQAI HANSI AATI HAI AISE LOGON PAR.AAP KI SALAH PAR GOUR FARMAOONGI. DAAD KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2010, 06:46:18 AM »
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TUM NA BADLE GAR TO HUM BADAL JAYEGE
TERA DAAMAN CHOD KAR KAHI NA JAYEGE
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2010, 06:57:35 AM »
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CHAHAT TUJSE CHAHANE KI MERI USDIN BHI NA BADAL PAYEGI
JISROJ  HUSAN KE SAATH SAATH TERI UMAR BHI DHAL JAYEGI
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 07:00:32 AM »
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HUSAN DAULAT MEI USKE MANOJ AB RAHA NAHI KOI DUM HAI
PAANE KE LIYE USKO MAGER AAJ BHI MERI AANKH NAM HAI
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2010, 06:58:58 AM »
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Bahot khoob Mamta ji. Bahot pyari takhleeq hai aapki
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2010, 07:15:46 AM »
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DHANYAVAAD RIYAZ BHAI!
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