- Dil Karta Hai -:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

Meena

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Dosto, kaun nahin janta yeh ke yeh khayal bhi, ke kisi apne se kuch dino ke lyie hi sahi, par door rehna padega...kitna satata hai aur tadpata hai...unhi feelings ke nam meri yeh poem hai... judai ke bare me sochte hi kya haal hota hai dil ka! umeed hai pasandayegi ap sab ko! :D

Kaise katenge lamhe judai ke oh sanam,
Aaj pas ho tum to waqt ko rukwane ko dil karta hai...

Sochti hoon jab, ke door hoga kal tu mujhse,
To akhele me ansson bahane ko dil karta hai...

Samajh lo mere pyar ko, tere lyie meri is tadap ko,
Bas ek tu hi to hai jiske saath zindagi ka har pal bitane ko dil karta hai...


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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2005, 04:58:55 PM »

Wow....meena sis...judai me dekh ke acha laga Winking

.....bohat acha likha hai Usual Smile


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Meena

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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2005, 07:24:35 PM »

oh thanx kuddiye lekin lagta hai itni achi nahin likhi maine kisi aur ne padi hi nahin sad5


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nikki

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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2005, 07:46:05 PM »

lo kar lo baat...main bhi thodi bhaingi ho gayi hun...dekha hi nahi is poem ko...sorry sis..

bahut achi likhi hai....

judayi mein aanson bahane ko dil karta hai
milan mein waqt ko rok aane ko dil karta hai

jab kat-te nahi pal bhi intzaar ke
to khud bhaag kar unse mil aane ko dil karta hai

kambakht yeh dil hai jisne humein barbaad kiya hai
woh saamne nahi fir bhi isne unhein har pal yaad kiya hai
tadap kar pukaarta hai unhi ko
jinhone na yaad karke aanson bahane ka vaada liya hai


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HumTum

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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2005, 08:44:24 AM »

Nidhi[/u]

Aap ka sach much mein keyboard karab ho gya lagta hai !!!

Choti[/u]

e lo , kuddi ta baingi nikli Puzzled !

bahot acha likha hai .... sacchii mein !!!

judia mein teri sanam kya haal ho gya
koi bhi nazara ab ankhoon ko bhata nhi
teri yaad mein behte hai anssu din raat
dil ko mere ab khi bhi qaraar aata nhi !!


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HumTum

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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2005, 09:01:56 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Meena -JII .... kya baat ho gyi ....... mein to abhi 21 ko ja rha hoon .. aap abhi se judai ka section bahrne lage ....... yun udaas nhi hote ..... jo yadien sameti hai woh un tanha lamho ko khubsurat ker dengi ..... aur sath mein dard e judai ka section bhar dengi waseey bahut acha likha hai .... hummm mein bhi kuch likhuga !!!

reh paunga tere bhgair ik pal bhi kaseey dilbhar
tere hi sath har lamha bitane ko jee chahta hai

jab sochta hoon tum se bichdne ke uss lamhe ko
ro ke teri bahoon mein samane ko jee chahta hai

tassvuur e dard e judai nagin ki trah dasta hai
"HumTum", aaj khoon e ashq rone ko jee chahta hai


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Meena

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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2005, 03:52:42 PM »

nikki:
oh kuddiye, thank u and bohot acha likha tumne bhi. actually ho jata hai na yaha koi likhta nahin isslyie is section ko koi dekhta bhi nahin. :D

humtum jiiiii:
janab janti hoon abhi nahin gaye par phir bhi na sad5

apne bhi to bohot bohot acha likha!! well done!!!!!! :D


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nikki

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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2005, 06:29:31 PM »

very nice Humtum ...n thanx haiga tuhada dona da....lao ji dona da haal bura hai...... :wink:


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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2005, 08:37:16 AM »

wow meenu sis sorry haan meine abhi dekha sad5

............. bahut badiya hai nikki sis n humtum n meenu sis gr8888888888


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Meena

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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2005, 03:24:43 PM »

oh thank u ji thank u salma sis!!!!!!!

:D


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ashq_ashq

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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2005, 04:06:11 PM »

very gud meena jee

waise to aap ke aage hum kuch bhi nahi fir bhi arz hai

SANG ASHQON KE BEH NA JAAYEN TERI YAADEIN ,
TUMHE BHOOLA BHI NAHI SAKE JEE BHAR KE RO NA SAKE !!
SHARABON TAK MAIN SOORAT TUMHAARI NAZAR AATI RAHI,
JEE BHAR KE PEE NA SAKE , APNE HOSH KHO NA SAKE
KHWABO MAIN AA KAR FIR KAHI BICHAD NA JAAO TUM, GAYI RAAT, RAAT BHAR HUM SO NA SAKE !!

ASHQ


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Meena

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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2005, 04:56:22 PM »

shukriya ashq ji apne bih to bohot acha likha!! :D

unse ma ijuda ho bhi jaon to kya,
unki yaadon se mai juda nahin,
mere ashkon ko na roko inko behene do,
insaan hai hum, koi Khuda nhiN!


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