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dil ke dard ko kagaz pe utarun kaise
bewafa keh kar tujhe aaj pukarun kaise
tere sath rehne ki thi adat sada mujhe
in judai ki ghadiyon ko guzarun kaise
milna bichadna to khel hai kismat ka
in hathon ki lakeeron ko sawarun kaise
samir"dilse"
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2009, 09:35:47 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Samir Ji
Wah! dard ka daria bah nikla
Hum bhi us me bah chale
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khan4momi
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2009, 03:41:17 AM » |
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Raat us ney pocha tha
Tumko kesi lagti hai
Chandni December ki
Saal-o-maah ke baarey may
Guftagu key kya maaney
Chahey koi manzar ho
Dasht ho, samander ho
June ho, December ho
Dharkano ka har naghma
Manzaron pay bhaari hai
Saath jb tumhara ho
Dil ko ek sahara ho
Aisa lagta hai jaisay
Ek nasha sa taari hai
Lakin uski qurbat mein
Kuch nahi kaha mein ney
Takti rah gayee mujh ko
Chandni December ki..
Muddassir
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2009, 04:54:42 AM » |
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Samir sahab and Khan sahab aap dono ki poetry bahut achhi lagi. Aapki hamari pasand ek si hai. Thanks for sharing.
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Asha2089
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2009, 02:20:26 PM » |
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dil ke dard ko kagaz pe utarun kaise
bewafa keh kar tujhe aaj pukarun kaise
tere sath rehne ki thi adat sada mujhe
in judai ki ghadiyon ko guzarun kaise
milna bichadna to khel hai kismat ka
in hathon ki lakeeron ko sawarun kaise
samir"dilse"
Samir jee bahoot achcha laga aapki yeh kalam padhker Daad kabool kijiye. reply me kuch likhne koshish karungi. |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2009, 05:09:22 AM » |
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Bahut Achhey Samir Miyan.
Ujhano Se Bhara Yeh Kalaam
Hume Bahut Pasand Aaya..
Daad Hazir Hai Janaab...
I Wish Aapki Uljhane
Jald Hi Sulajh Jaaye.
Khush Raho
bahot bahot shukriya shihab bhai........ thanks for wishes. |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2009, 05:13:19 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Samir Ji
Wah! dard ka daria bah nikla
Hum bhi us me bah chale
dil se shukriya rajesh bhai. |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2009, 05:15:10 AM » |
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Samir sahab and Khan sahab aap dono ki poetry bahut achhi lagi. Aapki hamari pasand ek si hai. Thanks for sharing.
bahot bahot shukriya riyaz ji........ jab pasand ek si hai to kuch aap bhi likhiye yahan riyaz bhai. |
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2009, 05:18:35 AM » |
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Samir jee bahoot achcha laga aapki yeh kalam padhker Daad kabool kijiye.
reply me kuch likhne koshish karungi.
thanks asha ji......padne ke liye. apke reply ka intezar rahega. |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2009, 05:20:03 AM » |
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Raat us ney pocha tha
Tumko kesi lagti hai
Chandni December ki
Saal-o-maah ke baarey may
Guftagu key kya maaney
Chahey koi manzar ho
Dasht ho, samander ho
June ho, December ho
Dharkano ka har naghma
Manzaron pay bhaari hai
Saath jb tumhara ho
Dil ko ek sahara ho
Aisa lagta hai jaisay
Ek nasha sa taari hai
Lakin uski qurbat mein
Kuch nahi kaha mein ney
Takti rah gayee mujh ko
Chandni December ki..
Muddassir
nice sharing khan ji. |
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2009, 05:22:09 AM » |
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thanks asha ji......padne ke liye. apke reply ka intezar rahega.
U R welcome Samir jee reply me likh rahi kuch galti maaf karna
kismat ne khela kuch aisa mere saath
khwab khwab hi rahe jo dekhe the sath
uss ne de diya mujhe bewafa ka naam
yeh to naseeb me tha jo hue mere saath
khush rahe vo sada her khushi mile usse
main chali sab se door uski yadon ke sath |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2009, 05:34:27 AM » |
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U R welcome Samir jee
reply me likh rahi kuch galti maaf karna
kismat ne khela kuch aisa mere saath
khwab khwab hi rahe jo dekhe the sath
uss ne de diya mujhe bewafa ka naam
yeh to naseeb me tha jo hue mere saath
khush rahe vo sada her khushi mile usse
main chali sab se door uski yadon ke sath
wah asha ji... ate hi sixer maar diya apne. bahot khoob. apko aage bhi padne ki tamanna rahegi ab. keep writing. |
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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2009, 05:42:58 AM » |
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You are welcome Samir Ji. Ek maroof ghazal ke do sher arz hain:
Roya karenge aap bhi pahron isi tarah
Atka kahin jo aapka dil bhi meri tarah
Mar chuk kahin ke is gham-e-hijra'n chhut jaye
Kahte to hain bhale ki wo lekin buri tarh.
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