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«Reply #30 on: December 14, 2009, 08:30:45 AM » |
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shukeriya samir jee daad ka,app ka waqai koi jawab nhi.Bahoot acha reply likha he.
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«Reply #31 on: December 14, 2009, 08:38:22 AM » |
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Bahut hi sundar mehfil saji huvi hai
bahut hi sundar likha hai samir ji aur aasha ji aapne
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samir_bc
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«Reply #32 on: December 14, 2009, 06:32:11 PM » |
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shukeriya samir jee daad ka,app ka waqai koi jawab nhi.Bahoot acha reply likha he.
bahot bahot shukriya asha ji... bus apke reply padker mann kiya apke sath likhne ka. |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #33 on: December 14, 2009, 06:36:54 PM » |
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Bahut hi sundar mehfil saji huvi hai
bahut hi sundar likha hai samir ji aur aasha ji aapne
thanks a lot rishi ji.. ap bhi thoda mehfil ki raunak badhaiye rishi ji. |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #34 on: December 14, 2009, 07:35:02 PM » |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #35 on: December 15, 2009, 05:42:19 AM » |
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thanks koyal ji.... apne bhi bahot khoob likha hai. tum likhna chahte ho ager dard_e_judai
dil ko bana phir kagaz ashkon ko siyahi
samir"dilse"
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #36 on: December 15, 2009, 08:45:19 AM » |
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Thanks Samir-bhai tariff k liye....   Dil k kaagaz pe ashqon ki siyahi say
Maine likhee thee judaai kee kahaani
Wo be-dard padh na saka mere dil ka dard
Kaise sunaati Dard-e-judaai apni jubaani
thanks koyal ji.... apne bhi bahot khoob likha hai.
tum likhna chahte ho ager dard_e_judai
dil ko bana phir kagaz ashkon ko siyahi
smair"dilse"
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«Reply #37 on: December 15, 2009, 08:49:16 AM » |
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Bahut Hi Sundar Line Likhi hai Koyal Ji and samir jI
Samir Ji kuch koshis kar rha hu shayad kuch jamega per Kahte hai na
ki koshis krne walo ki har nahi hoti shayad agar aap ko pasand aaye ya
isme koi kami ho to jarur batana
Syahi Ki Kalam Se Kagaj Pe dil Ka Arman Nikala Tha
Her Ehsas Ko,Apne Jajbat Ko Usme meine Likh Dala Tha
Per Wo Nasamjh Samjhi Usse Sirf Ek Kagaj Ka Tukada
Bana Uski Nauka, Boli Meine To Usse Pani me Bahana Sikha Tha
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«Reply #38 on: December 15, 2009, 11:21:47 AM » |
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samir_bc
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«Reply #39 on: December 15, 2009, 11:26:17 AM » |
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Bahut Hi Sundar Line Likhi hai Koyal Ji and samir jI
Samir Ji kuch koshis kar rha hu shayad kuch jamega per Kahte hai na
ki koshis krne walo ki har nahi hoti shayad agar aap ko pasand aaye ya
isme koi kami ho to jarur batana
Syahi Ki Kalam Se Kagaj Pe dil Ka Arman Nikala Tha
Her Ehsas Ko,Apne Jajbat Ko Usme meine Likh Dala Tha
Per Wo Nasamjh Samjhi Usse Sirf Ek Kagaj Ka Tukada
Bana Uski Nauka, Boli Meine To Usse Pani me Bahana Sikha Tha
thanks rishi ji......... nice reply. aap khud bahot acha likhte hain.. maine pehle bhi kafi baar apko pada hai.. good work.   |
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«Reply #41 on: December 15, 2009, 04:00:48 PM » |
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Thanks Rishi-bhai.....AApne bhi bahoot achha likha hai.... Aapne poochha isliye apni samajh se batla rahi hu....sahi ya galat ki vyakhya nahi hai..... Pehli line ko jara soch kar dekhiye..... "SYAHI KI KALAM".....YA "Kalam ki syahi" Bahut Hi Sundar Line Likhi hai Koyal Ji and samir jI
Samir Ji kuch koshis kar rha hu shayad kuch jamega per Kahte hai na
ki koshis krne walo ki har nahi hoti shayad agar aap ko pasand aaye ya
isme koi kami ho to jarur batana
Syahi Ki Kalam se Kagaj Pe dil Ka Arman Nikala Tha
Her Ehsas Ko,Apne Jajbat Ko Usme meine Likh Dala Tha
Per Wo Nasamjh Samjhi Usse Sirf Ek Kagaj Ka Tukada
Bana Uski Nauka, Boli Meine To Usse Pani me Bahana Sikha Tha
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«Reply #42 on: December 16, 2009, 05:43:31 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Sukriya Sameer Bhai Per Aapse Acccha Nahi Likh skte Aap Bahut HI Accha Likhte HO Sameer Bhai
dil se shukriya rishi ji... ap bhi acha likhte hain.. bus thoda flow ka dhyan rakha karen.. shabd kosh apka bhi bhara hua hai.
kalam bhi ro rahi thi khud alfaz dhul rahe the
jab hum dard-e-dastan ko apni likh rahe the
phir koshish bahot ki maine ki keh dun jubani
baha jo dard-e-dariya to khud hont sil rahe the
sath jinke hum aksar chala karte the
aj ajnabi ki tarah unse mil rahe the
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«Reply #43 on: December 16, 2009, 05:59:15 AM » |
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«Reply #44 on: December 16, 2009, 06:25:36 AM » |
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thanks madhu ji..... bahot bahot shukriya.
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