dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

laaiba

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jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN

woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 10:49:16 PM »

wah beta bahut khoob. kafi dino k baad aapka likha pada aur bahut bahut accha laga padkar. good good vryyyyyyyyy good beta


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2013, 11:06:52 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

wonderful,ma'am


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Ssaagar

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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2013, 11:09:48 PM »

Hats off for this beauty ... awesome creation laiba ji..


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2013, 11:51:02 PM »


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2013, 12:37:42 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

Laaiba Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Baat kehta Hua...yakeen Maniye...Iss Ghazal Ke Har Ashaar Ko Naa Jaane Kitne Baar padh Gaya...Lajawaab,Umda, Khoobsurat,....

jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN

woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN

Har Ashaar Par Hazaaro.............Dillli Daad...


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2013, 12:47:44 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob laiiba ji...Dheron Daad... Applause


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2013, 01:52:37 AM »

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

Jitna Socho Utna Dubte Jaaoge Bahut Khub Behna Clapping Smiley


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nashwani

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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2013, 03:10:48 AM »

waah laaiba jee..apne aise kalaamo.N se hame achhuta chhor ke jane ki baat kar rahe ho aap..??

Ye bahut galat baat hai laaiba jee..Jo bhi hai plz do keep coming..Nd writing..

Waise kehte hain ki agar kisi cheez ka shauk ho ya passion ho to insaan uske liye waqt nikaal hi leta hai..

So dikhte rahiye..likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye..


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 03:23:44 AM »

Very beautiful Laaiba ji, & heart touching reaching to the soul core of emotions .... :icon_salut:h


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 03:28:36 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

Nice One.


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2013, 05:17:21 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...
Clapping Smiley

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN
Clapping Smiley

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN
Clapping Smiley

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
Clapping Smiley

woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...
Clapping Smiley

kee mohabbat to jaanaa dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN
Clapping Smiley


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2013, 08:20:10 AM »

is pyaaree see ghazal par ek rau ke saath daad


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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2013, 09:33:12 AM »

bahut khoob


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mkv

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Re: dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

«Reply #14 on: October 25, 2013, 10:58:09 AM »

Bahut pyari ghazal hai laaiba jee
bahut mubarakbaad


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