dil maiN teRe ek kasak cho.d jaayen geN,..........

by laaiba on October 19, 2013, 12:26:36 AM
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ab ke ham bichre toh shayed kabhee khaaboN main mileN
jis taRah sookhe huye phoo.l kiTabon main mileN,...
[ahmad faRaaz]


apni yaaDon kii meHak chod jaayen geN
dil mein teRe ek kaSak chod jaayen geN

phir udaasee to tehhar jaayegee har soo
ek sehar hum roo.h tAk chod jaayen geN

tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

bhoo.l paa yo ge bhalaa kese pal bhar bhee
pyaar  apnaa tum talAk chod jaayen geN,
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2013, 12:32:55 AM »
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Kya Kehne Badi Sadgi Aur Khubsoorti Se Lafzon Ko Piroya Hai
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2013, 12:41:29 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2013, 01:49:32 AM »
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tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

Bahut badhiya Laaiba jee
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2013, 03:56:23 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 19, 2013, 12:26:36 AM

ab ke ham bichre toh shayed kabhee khaaboN main mileN
jis taRah sookhe huye phoo.l kiTabon main mileN,...
[ahmad faRaaz]

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apni yaaDon kii meHak chod jaayen geN
dil mein teRe ek kaSak chod jaayen geN

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

phir udaasee to tehhar jaayegee har soo
ek sehar hum roo.h tAk chod jaayen geN

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhoo.l paa yo ge bhalaa kese pal bhar bhee
pyaar  apnaa tum talAk chod jaayen geN,

 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2


Waah laaiba jee behad umda jazbaat..dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2013, 04:09:08 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 19, 2013, 12:26:36 AM

ab ke ham bichre toh shayed kabhee khaaboN main mileN
jis taRah sookhe huye phoo.l kiTabon main mileN,...
[ahmad faRaaz]


apni yaaDon kii meHak chod jaayen geN
dil mein teRe ek kaSak chod jaayen geN

phir udaasee to tehhar jaayegee har soo
ek sehar hum roo.h tAk chod jaayen geN

tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

bhoo.l paa yo ge bhalaa kese pal bhar bhee
pyaar  apnaa tum talAk chod jaayen geN,
Waah-waah kya bat hai.
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2013, 04:23:47 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2013, 08:04:15 AM »
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apni yaaDon kii meHak chod jaayen geN
dil mein teRe ek kaSak chod jaayen geN

phir udaasee to tehhar jaayegee har soo
ek sehar hum roo.h tAk chod jaayen geN

tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

bhoo.l paa yo ge bhalaa kese pal bhar bhee
pyaar  apnaa tum talAk chod jaayen geN,

kyon rulaati ho Laaiba
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2013, 08:59:25 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2013, 09:58:02 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2013, 01:14:12 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 19, 2013, 12:26:36 AM

ab ke ham bichre toh shayed kabhee khaaboN main mileN
jis taRah sookhe huye phoo.l kiTabon main mileN,...
[ahmad faRaaz]


apni yaaDon kii meHak chod jaayen geN
dil mein teRe ek kaSak chod jaayen geN

phir udaasee to tehhar jaayegee har soo
ek sehar hum roo.h tAk chod jaayen geN

tum jahan jaayo ge bas paao  ge hamko
har  jagah  apnii jhalAk chod jaayen geN,

bhoo.l paa yo ge bhalaa kese pal bhar bhee
pyaar  apnaa tum talAk chod jaayen geN,


boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!  buss ek rau

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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2013, 01:22:23 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2013, 03:09:12 PM »
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Waah..khoobsurat ehsaas aur aashaar Laaiba ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2013, 06:50:20 PM »
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!


Bahut umda jee bahut khoob... bade hi gehre aur dilfareb khayaalaat ko lafzoN meiN piroya hai aapne...

Sabhi ashaar bakamaal aur umdaa rahe jee... kalaam ko mukammal kar dete toH aur bhi khoob hota...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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