~~!!dil mein aaj dard hu raha hai!!~~

by nice_off_me on June 19, 2005, 10:00:20 AM
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2005, 04:35:06 AM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


Nice...............
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2005, 12:19:52 PM »
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thanx aarzuu frend for liking it..........................................
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 03:41:24 PM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


wah  simmi....................bahot  khoob..........................very nice  wordings..........
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 10:28:26 PM »
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Simran  Dost .................................

Aap ka jwab hi nahin hai koi
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2005, 03:55:26 AM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


WAH !.........
 YAD MA DEKHO BANA HA YH HASEEN TAJ MAHAL
 YAD MAKOI LIKHY SHAM-O-SEHAR SHOKE GHAZAL !
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2005, 06:17:44 PM »
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thank yoy waheed,faree and sadiqa ji for liking it and supporting me....thanx alot
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2005, 08:35:15 PM »
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thank yoy waheed,faree and sadiqa ji for liking it and supporting me....thanx alot
You wel come
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2005, 09:56:22 AM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


bahot hi accha hai
i like it
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 03:35:58 PM »
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thank yoy waheed,faree and sadiqa ji for liking it and supporting me....thanx alot


ur  always  welcome   Simmi................. tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2005, 03:47:45 PM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


excellent sis.............................
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2005, 06:41:04 PM »
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DiL mein aaj dard hu raha hai
uski yaado ka asar hu raha hai,

ShAaM ke dhalte dhalte
aaj phir dil udass hu raha hai,

AaNkHo mein nami hai
labo pe chupi,

subah se shaam aise
hi guzaar rahi hoon,

gumnaam rahoo mein
mein bhi gumnaam si chal rahi hoon,

aaj wo mujhe bewafa
keh ke muh mode jaa raha hai,

bas aaj bhi har raat ki tarah
chand aur tarein mera saath de rahe hai meri iss tanhaii mein,

unhi se baat kar rahi hoon
unhi se sawal jawab kar rahi hoon,

lakin inn sawalo ke jawab
shayd uss sanam ke paas bhi naa hu.......

shukriya...!!


excellent sis.............................

wah wah  simmi  excellent  dost,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,:P
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2005, 10:34:52 AM »
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Dil main ajj phir dard ho raha hai
Ankho se asuo ka samander beh raha hai
janta hai  tum nahi aa sakte woh bereham
phir bhi dil tuzhe yaad kar raha hai
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2008, 09:13:11 PM »
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wow great....
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