~~:dil na jala to jala kya:~~

by ek_tamanna on February 09, 2011, 02:13:39 PM
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my 2nd post..........


Koh ke chasme se nikla kya
pathhar dil pighla kya

sikayat kyoN sabko yahaN
dukh ke siva mila kya..?

jo hai tera vo hi milega
naseeb se fir gila kya
 
ujhad gayaa hai chamaN
bago mein aur khila kya

tut gaya dor marasim ka
ye milan ka silsila kya

sulagti hai aag seene me
dil na jala to jala kya
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2011, 02:50:05 PM »
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Nice tamanna ji..
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2011, 03:11:38 PM »
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wah Tamanna ji kya ghazal likhi aapne superbb ---
kamaal ke words aur thinking very gud.
bahut achhe.
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2011, 04:22:25 PM »
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bht khoob tamnna ji....
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 04:26:52 AM »
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wah tamnnaji...bahut umda....

khush rahie

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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2011, 01:16:00 PM »
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Bahut Khub Tammana JI
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 12:49:34 PM »
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aap sab mujhe waqt diye ....is poem ko padhe apna kimti rae diye
mujhe behat khusi hui

thanx a lot
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 06:09:15 PM »
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my 2nd post..........


Koh ke chasme se nikla kya
pathhar dil pighla kya

sikayat kyoN sabko yahaN
dukh ke siva mila kya..?

jo hai tera vo hi milega
naseeb se fir gila kya
 
ujhad gayaa hai chamaN
bago mein aur khila kya

tut gaya dor marasim ka
ye milan ka silsila kya

sulagti hai aag seene me
dil na jala to jala kya


WOW...BEHTREEN KALAAM TAMANNA JI
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2011, 12:33:26 PM »
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my 2nd post..........


Koh ke chasme se nikla kya
pathhar dil pighla kya

sikayat kyoN sabko yahaN
dukh ke siva mila kya..?

jo hai tera vo hi milega
naseeb se fir gila kya
 
ujhad gayaa hai chamaN
bago mein aur khila kya

tut gaya dor marasim ka
ye milan ka silsila kya

sulagti hai aag seene me
dil na jala to jala kya


bahut khoob
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