Dil-e-Tarap

by Pooja on March 27, 2006, 04:51:22 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 27, 2006, 01:46:34 AM »
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Koun Samjha Hai Samjhaane Se,..
Yaad Bahoot Aati hai Kisi Ko Bhoolaane Se,..

Azeez Thi Hum Ko Meflein Bahoot,..
Ab To kahin Dil Nahi Lagte Wahan Jaane se,..

Tujhse Bichardkar Main Ghamon Mein Doob Gaya,..
Aur Muskuraya Nahi Mein Zamaane Se,..

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bahoot hi acha likha hai apne jaansheen ji!!!

bhule nahi bhulta wo waqat
sath tera gujra hua wo kal
her gali ajj bhi teri pahchan karati hai
saye ki tarah her wo gujra waqat yaad karati hai
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«Reply #31 on: May 27, 2006, 10:09:49 AM »
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Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Koun Samjha Hai Samjhaane Se,..
Yaad Bahoot Aati hai Kisi Ko Bhoolaane Se,..

Azeez Thi Hum Ko Meflein Bahoot,..
Ab To kahin Dil Nahi Lagte Wahan Jaane se,..

Tujhse Bichardkar Main Ghamon Mein Doob Gaya,..
Aur Muskuraya Nahi Mein Zamaane Se,..

____________-Azeem-______________


bahoot hi acha likha hai apne jaansheen ji!!!

bhule nahi bhulta wo waqat
sath tera gujra hua wo kal
her gali ajj bhi teri pahchan karati hai
saye ki tarah her wo gujra waqat yaad karati hai


Shukriya Pankhuri Ji And Nice One,..

Bhoolna Bhi Chahoon Tu Bhoolaya Nahi Jata,.
Teri Yaadon Ko Dil Se Aye Jaanasheen,..
Tu To Basi Hai Dil Mere Aaj Bhi,..
Faqat Ab Tujhpar Hamara Haq Nahi,..

_______________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #32 on: May 30, 2006, 02:27:19 AM »
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yadon per rakha haq aor ab hum per haq nahi
ja O sitamgar, tere dil mai ab wo hum nahi.......
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«Reply #33 on: May 30, 2006, 10:36:29 AM »
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very nice thread.. nice post by all
my first post in DARD-E-JUDAI section...


Jaala kar chal diye mazzaron par
raat bhar main tanha jaalta raha

wada karke laut aane ka kuch lamhon mein
main saari umar deedar ko tarasta raha

jab bhi chali teri yaadon ki andhi
main askhon se ghumo ko roshan karta raha

waffa hai ya yeh jaffa hai tumhari
dard hai ya mohabbat ki khumari

main aapne be-simit raston mein
tere naam ki manzil doondta raha...!!!
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«Reply #34 on: May 30, 2006, 12:04:24 PM »
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Nice One Pooja Ji And Jeet Bhai,..

Haq Ab Kuch Is Tarah Jataane Lage Hain Wo,..
Ke Jaise Unhone Hume Har Pal Khush Rakha Ho,..

______________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #35 on: June 02, 2006, 05:32:04 AM »
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good one Jsheen

Her sukh dukh sath bitaya tha
sukh ka yaad nahi, dukh mai tune bahot sath nibhaya tha
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«Reply #36 on: June 02, 2006, 05:38:41 AM »
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very nice thread.. nice post by all
my first post in DARD-E-JUDAI section...


Jaala kar chal diye mazzaron par
raat bhar main tanha jaalta raha

wada karke laut aane ka kuch lamhon mein
main saari umar deedar ko tarasta raha

jab bhi chali teri yaadon ki andhi
main askhon se ghumo ko roshan karta raha

waffa hai ya yeh jaffa hai tumhari
dard hai ya mohabbat ki khumari

main aapne be-simit raston mein
tere naam ki manzil doondta raha...!!!


Wah ji kaya baat hai, pahli post aor wo bhi kamal ki!!! jab likhty ho dil se likhty ho, hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi touching likha hai apne!!!

Judai ka her pal, ek kami ka ahsaas karata hai
nikalta hai kaise yah waqat, so tarah ke wahem satata hai

yaadein teri, armano ki chingari bhadkati hai
na buje jo, aise payaas is dil ko de jaati hai

jaffa teri bhi, mujko wafa si najar atti hai
her galati teri, khud-b-khud maaf ho jaati hai

manjil ka hosh kise, her rah jab teri taraf atti hai
aa jaye jab teri yaad, pal pal judai phir khoon ke ansoo rulati hai
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«Reply #37 on: June 03, 2006, 03:33:36 AM »
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Wah ji kaya baat hai, pahli post aor wo bhi kamal ki!!! jab likhty ho dil se likhty ho, hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi touching likha hai apne!!!

Judai ka her pal, ek kami ka ahsaas karata hai
nikalta hai kaise yah waqat, so tarah ke wahem satata hai

yaadein teri, armano ki chingari bhadkati hai
na buje jo, aise payaas is dil ko de jaati hai

jaffa teri bhi, mujko wafa si najar atti hai
her galati teri, khud-b-khud maaf ho jaati hai

manjil ka hosh kise, her rah jab teri taraf atti hai
aa jaye jab teri yaad, pal pal judai phir khoon ke ansoo rulati hai


Wah kya baat hai pooja ji & Jaanasheen ji

pooja ji aapki toh har line dil par dastak deti hai... kash koi hota jo humare liye  judai  mein tardpta... :wink:


Dil-e-tarap aab satane laggi hai
Tere yaadon ki mehak aab rulaane laggi hai

Ek nasha sa hota hai tere ehsaas ka
Tu nass nass mein meri samaane laggi hai

Junoon sa ho gaya hai abb tere saath
Na bhuj paye jo kabhi,assi lagi payaas ka

Kahin jaal na jaun iss birah ki agg mein
Jaal raha mera dil,iss toofani barsaat mein

Matt jaya karo door mujhse ek pal ke liye bhi
Mere mehrbaan,tujhse abb JEET ne kar li dillagi hai...!!!
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«Reply #38 on: June 03, 2006, 09:44:23 AM »
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Shukriya Pankhuri Ji And Jeet Bhai,..
Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Appne,..

Judaai Ke Gham Mein Taradpna Asaan Nahi Hota,..
Log To Iske Naam Se Panaah Mangte Hain,..
Kabhi Tum Iska Zikar Bhi Na Karna Anjaane Mein,..
Warna Kabhi Chaarag Na Jalega Pyaar Ke Ashiaane Mein,..

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #39 on: June 04, 2006, 05:04:05 AM »
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Bhut khoob janaasheen ji...
thanks for appreciation :D
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«Reply #40 on: June 08, 2006, 05:39:51 AM »
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Sab ne bahut hi achha likha hai too good...
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«Reply #41 on: June 10, 2006, 03:54:40 AM »
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kyun raaton ko har pal jaagate rehte ho
jaagti ankhon se khawab dikhate rehte ho
mere khawab-0-khayal mein karke basera
har lamha apna ehsaas karwate rehte ho

kabhie toh aao humse milne
ke abb yeh dil be-chain ho utha hai
kyun aaise zindagi ko nayi rah dikha kar
Anjaane raaston mein mujhe Batkana chahte ho...!!!
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«Reply #42 on: June 10, 2006, 04:45:13 AM »
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bahut sundar likha hai sabne .......
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«Reply #43 on: June 11, 2006, 06:28:48 AM »
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kyun raaton ko har pal jaagate rehte ho
jaagti ankhon se khawab dikhate rehte ho
mere khawab-0-khayal mein karke basera
har lamha apna ehsaas karwate rehte ho

kabhie toh aao humse milne
ke abb yeh dil be-chain ho utha hai
kyun aaise zindagi ko nayi rah dikha kar
Anjaane raaston mein mujhe Batkana chahte ho...!!!


bahoot khoob Jeet!!! bahoot acha likha hai apne!!

her koi bhatke apni khawahisho mai
kayun her pal ilzaam lagaty rahty ho
bhar kar kisi ko khud ankhon mai
dil-e-tadap ka ehsaas karwaty rahty ho
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«Reply #44 on: June 17, 2006, 09:51:15 AM »
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Dil-e-tarap aab satane laggi hai
Tere yaadon ki mehak aab rulaane laggi hai

Ek nasha sa hota hai tere ehsaas ka
Tu nass nass mein meri samaane laggi hai

Junoon sa ho gaya hai abb tere saath
Na bhuj paye jo kabhi,assi lagi payaas ka

Kahin jaal na jaun iss birah ki agg mein
Jaal raha mera dil,iss toofani barsaat mein

Matt jaya karo door mujhse ek pal ke liye bhi
Mere mehrbaan,tujhse abb JEET ne kar li dillagi hai...!!![/b]



bahut khoob jeet..........
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