Doli

by seraj325 on January 08, 2009, 03:21:47 PM
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Doli
Ye Nazm ye khyaal Dil me.n lekar padhen ki bahan ghar se Rukhsat ho rahi hai sasuraal ke liye
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Doli
Huee jab khatm sab taqreeb Shaadi ki to ab dekho
Sajaai ja rahi bahna meri ghar me.n lo sab dekho
 
Koi kahta ,"karo jaldi , bahot hi door jana hai"
Koi khata, karo jaldi , nahin achchha zamana hai "
 
Ghadi aayee vida hone ki, sab aa.nkhon me.n paani hai
Magar poore hue armaa.n , ye dil me.n shaadmani hai
 
Saheli roti hain, athhkheliyaan jo pahle karti theen
Tujhe hasne ha.nsane ka jo tab samaan karti theen
 
Lipat kar Ammi roti hain, tha kitne naaz se paala
Juda hoti hai dil ka tukda , kar sakti.n nahin nala
 
Tasalli deti jaati hain, duayen deti jaati hain
Ke apni beti ki sau sau balayen leti jaati hain
 
Bura hai haal Dadi Phoophi ka , Bhabi Mumani ka
Ke khala zaad bahno.n ka, aur iss boodhi si Naani ka
 
Ye Bahne.n apni Baaji ko bahot hi pyaar karti hain
Judaii ki ghadi ro ro ke gham izhaar karti hain
 
Jigar pat-thar tha jis Walid ka, dekho ab pighalta hai
Ke Ganga Jamuna sa in aa.nkhon se aansoo nikalta hai
 
Dua dil deta hai, par kuchh zubaan se kah nahin paate
Jigar  ke  tukde  ki  apni,  judaii  sah  nahin  paate
 
Bhaii...
Abhi tak shaadi thee , maatam kada ye ho gaya kyoonkar
Are  kyoonkar  rulaate  ho,  meri  bahna  ko  sab  milkar
 
Bahan bhaaii magar phir khud lipat kar rone lagte hain
Aur Aabe chashm se rukhsaar apne dhone lagte hain
 
Bahan roti hai, yoon rukhsaar par aa.nsoo ki dhaare.n hain
Umad kar aaj in aa.nkhon  me.n Saawan ki phuhare.n hain
 
Bahot bhaari qadam se Paao.n Dolii me.n jamati hai
Ke sab ko chhod kar rota, Dulhan Sasuraal jaati hai.
Ke sab ko chhod kar rota, Bahan Sasuraal jaati hai !!!
By me
Seraj
 
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 03:33:45 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Seraj bhai..bahut khoobsurat jazbaat pesh kiye hai aapne iss Nazm mein..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 03:44:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob Seraj jii...  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 03:50:02 PM »
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Kya ustad meri koi behan nahi phir bhi meri aakhe nam ho gayee Man gaye tumhe mauko par likhne ki achchi pakad hain tumhari I am really impressed  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2009, 11:09:11 PM »
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Good one Seraj Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2009, 05:38:02 AM »
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Shukriya...

Khwaish  ji,

Roja

Ghayal ji

Rajesh ji.


Jazakallah.
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2009, 12:00:59 PM »
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Bahot Khoob bhaaii....

Abhi wo din nahin aaye bhaaii par ye padhkar aansoo zaroor aa gaye...
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Sach bhaaii itna rona padega..

ha ha ha ha
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2009, 08:26:04 PM »
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Haan Rona tu padegaa bahan...
Yahi iss duniyaan ka chalan...

Kya bhaaii se door jate waqt aapko aansoo nahin niklen ge...
Par hum tu yahi duwa karte hain ki bahn tu sada khush rah...
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