Door ho gaye ho........

by rajrishi on August 26, 2007, 01:05:24 PM

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rajrishi

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Door ho gaye ho mujhse door ho gaye ho,
Hum badnam ho gaye hain, tum mashoor ho gaye ho.

Ye sila mila hai mujko tere pyar mein sanam,
Ye keh rahe hain sab tum magroor ho gaye ho .

Woh vaade woh kasme, mohabbat ki sabhi rasme,
Bhula di hai sari, ya majboor ho gaye ho?

Chaha tha humne to dilo jaan se lekin,
Kisi aur ke kyon hajoor ho gaye ho?

Bhulana bhi chahe to bhula na sake hum,
Nashe ka tum aisa saroor ho gaye ho.

'Raj' ki kismat mein hi tu nahin thi,
Phir bhi tum uska garoor ho gaye ho.


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Pooja

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Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2007, 04:23:58 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Raj ji.... gussa, payar, sawal, kash-m-kash sabhi najar ayya hai apki kavita main... bahoot acha likh ahai...


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Sahiba Zehra

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Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2007, 05:36:07 PM »

acha hai

:D :D :D


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rajrishi

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Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2007, 12:37:04 PM »

Thanks pooja ji and sahiba aapne is nacheej ko saraha.


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Roja

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Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2007, 02:14:50 AM »

Bahut acche Raj...

Milne ki kushi, na milne ka gam
Katam yeh sab..
Zagde bi ho gaye
Tum tum na rahe
Mai mai na rahu
Ab to hum
Ek dujhe main kho jayenge,
Mai bi na dhur ho jau pal bar ke liye
Tum bi na dhur hona ab mujhse...
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rajrishi

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Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2007, 01:41:40 PM »

Thanks Roja ji,

acha likha hai aapne bhi, apki poem ke liye do lines

Jiyen jab tak mohabbat ke aagosh mein jiyen,
Aaye jab kaza to yaar ke pehlu mein ho.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2009, 01:48:22 AM »

Nice one Rishi Ji


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Roja

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Re: Door ho gaye ho........

«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2009, 02:42:36 AM »

Quote from: rajrishi on August 31, 2007, 01:41:40 PM

Thanks Roja ji,

acha likha hai aapne bhi, apki poem ke liye do lines

Jiyen jab tak mohabbat ke aagosh mein jiyen,
Aaye jab kaza to yaar ke pehlu mein ho.

Shukriya Rajrishi ji...