Door ho rahe hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:24:51 PM
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Jahan dekho diljalo k kisse mashoor ho rahe hai,
dard aur bebasi k lamhe mhbt ka dastoor ho rahe hai,

bahut se log mhbt kar k use pane ka hausla nhi kar paate,
kuch kuch unhi logo mein shaamil merre huzoor ho rahe hai,

tum sang zyada khuab dekhne ki gustakhi tou dil ne ki nhi,
per jo bhi dekhe hai vo chakna choor ho rahe hai,

jin beete palo ko yad kar k sukoon milta tha,
purane zakhmo ki tarah ab vo nasoor ho rahe hai,

hamara milan do jismo ka nhi balki do ruho ka hai,
per dekho naa aaj halato k aage hum kitne majboor ho rahe hai,

yu tou juda hoke jine ki adat ho gyi hai aage bhi guzar jayegi..
tumne sahi kaha tha mujhse hum waqai mein door ho rahe hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2011, 05:32:10 PM »
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hmm……
sahi kaha aapne geet…
bht khoob likha aapne…
esa laga jese aap bta rahi hai mujhe …

khus rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2011, 05:36:25 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on May 02, 2011, 05:32:10 PM
hmm……
sahi kaha aapne geet…
bht khoob likha aapne…
esa laga jese aap bta rahi hai mujhe …

khus rahiye

Shukriya nirala ji...
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2011, 05:38:54 PM »
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u welcm ji
Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:36:25 PM
Shukriya nirala ji...
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2011, 05:46:52 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on May 02, 2011, 05:38:54 PM
u welcm ji

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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 05:54:34 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:46:52 PM
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bht din bad aapko parha
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2011, 06:00:37 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on May 02, 2011, 05:54:34 PM
bht din bad aapko parha
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Ji shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2011, 07:52:41 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke ahsaas o khayaal ke aur
aapki khoob bayaani ke... Usual Smile

Behad gehare aur saaf ashaaroN se saji aapki is
kalaam per dil se daad O mubarakbaad hazir hai,

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez ...

Aapki is purkashish kalaam par humara bhi dil kuch
tukbandi karne ko ho raha hai Usual Smile
          


Woh chand kadmoN ki doori pe tha
Par houNsla mera majboori pe tha

MaiN kia fanaaH hone se bachtaa
Ihetemaad mera jo chhoori pe tha

Uski chahat par mera haq ho ke nahi
Faisla raqeeboN ki manzoori pe tha

Karta bhi kia Parwaaz jhukne ke siva
Yeh zamaana fakhat jee huzoori pe tha
    
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2011, 08:54:28 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:24:51 PM



Jahan dekho diljalo k kisse mashoor ho rahe hai,
dard aur bebasi k lamhe mhbt ka dastoor ho rahe hai,

bahut se log mhbt kar k use pane ka hausla nhi kar paate,
kuch kuch unhi logo mein shaamil merre huzoor ho rahe hai,

tum sang zyada khuab dekhne ki gustakhi tou dil ne ki nhi,
per jo bhi dekhe hai vo chakna choor ho rahe hai,

jin beete palo ko yad kar k sukoon milta tha,
purane zakhmo ki tarah ab vo nasoor ho rahe hai,

hamara milan do jismo ka nhi balki do ruho ka hai,
per dekho naa aaj halato k aage hum kitne majboor ho rahe hai,

yu tou juda hoke jine ki adat ho gyi hai aage bhi guzar jayegi..
tumne sahi kaha tha mujhse hum waqai mein door ho rahe hai.........

bahut hi behteen kalaam broken ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2011, 08:56:00 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 02, 2011, 07:52:41 PM
BBL jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke ahsaas o khayaal ke aur
aapki khoob bayaani ke... Usual Smile

Behad gehare aur saaf ashaaroN se saji aapki is
kalaam per dil se daad O mubarakbaad hazir hai,

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez ...

Aapki is purkashish kalaam par humara bhi dil kuch
tukbandi karne ko ho raha hai Usual Smile
         


Woh chand kadmoN ki doori pe tha
Par houNsla mera majboori pe tha

MaiN kia fanaaH hone se bachtaa
Ihetemaad mera jo chhoori pe tha

Uski chahat par mera haq ho ke nahi
Faisla raqeeboN ki manzoori pe tha

Karta bhi kia Parwaaz jhukne ke siva
Yeh zamaana fakhat jee huzoori pe tha
     


bahut khoob parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2011, 10:18:19 AM »
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AHAAAAAA kya baat hai geet di...bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2011, 10:21:04 AM »
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Good Job Broken Ji N Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2011, 10:24:16 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:24:51 PM



Jahan dekho diljalo k kisse mashoor ho rahe hai,
dard aur bebasi k lamhe mhbt ka dastoor ho rahe hai,

bahut se log mhbt kar k use pane ka hausla nhi kar paate,
kuch kuch unhi logo mein shaamil merre huzoor ho rahe hai,

tum sang zyada khuab dekhne ki gustakhi tou dil ne ki nhi,
per jo bhi dekhe hai vo chakna choor ho rahe hai,

jin beete palo ko yad kar k sukoon milta tha,
purane zakhmo ki tarah ab vo nasoor ho rahe hai,

hamara milan do jismo ka nhi balki do ruho ka hai,
per dekho naa aaj halato k aage hum kitne majboor ho rahe hai,

yu tou juda hoke jine ki adat ho gyi hai aage bhi guzar jayegi..
tumne sahi kaha tha mujhse hum waqai mein door ho rahe hai.........

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Vadhiya geetji, Kin Alfaazan Nal Iss jazbaatan Di kadar kara..lajawaab Likheya Hai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


parwaaz Ji Aapne To sach mein Majbooriyon Ki dastaan Hi lafzon mein Likh Di..

Bahut bahut Khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2011, 10:28:41 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..

Geet di, Dusra aur Akhri ashaar sabse zada acha laga mujhe..
Bahaut saaf lavzon main dard ki gehrayi shamil hai..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!


Parwaaz jee,
Bahaut bahaut khoob..Kya baat hai..
Apko parrke dil khush hojata hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2011, 11:09:32 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 02, 2011, 07:00:41 PM
Wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji


Na Muhabbat, Na Shiqayat Hai
Yeh Kaisi Apni, Hiqaayat Hai,


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut khoob kahi shihab ji aur bahut shukriya pasand karne k liye..
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