Door ho rahe hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 05:24:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 03, 2011, 11:20:43 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 02, 2011, 07:52:41 PM
BBL jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke ahsaas o khayaal ke aur
aapki khoob bayaani ke... Usual Smile

Behad gehare aur saaf ashaaroN se saji aapki is
kalaam per dil se daad O mubarakbaad hazir hai,

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez ...

Aapki is purkashish kalaam par humara bhi dil kuch
tukbandi karne ko ho raha hai Usual Smile
         


Woh chand kadmoN ki doori pe tha
Par houNsla mera majboori pe tha

MaiN kia fanaaH hone se bachtaa
Ihetemaad mera jo chhoori pe tha

Uski chahat par mera haq ho ke nahi
Faisla raqeeboN ki manzoori pe tha

Karta bhi kia Parwaaz jhukne ke siva
Yeh zamaana fakhat jee huzoori pe tha
     


bahut shukriya parwaaz ji aur bahut sach baat kahi aapne apne alfazo mein bahut khubsurat likha share krne k liye...
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«Reply #16 on: May 03, 2011, 11:23:28 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 03, 2011, 08:54:28 AM
bahut hi behteen kalaam broken ji

Bahut shukriya sheba ji..
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«Reply #17 on: May 03, 2011, 11:24:21 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on May 03, 2011, 10:18:19 AM
AHAAAAAA kya baat hai geet di...bahut khoob

Shukriya abhi..
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«Reply #18 on: May 03, 2011, 11:25:02 AM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on May 03, 2011, 10:21:04 AM
Good Job Broken Ji N Parwaaz Ji

Shukriya niha ji..
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«Reply #19 on: May 03, 2011, 11:44:42 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 03, 2011, 10:24:16 AM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Vadhiya geetji, Kin Alfaazan Nal Iss jazbaatan Di kadar kara..lajawaab Likheya Hai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


parwaaz Ji Aapne To sach mein Majbooriyon Ki dastaan Hi lafzon mein Likh Di..

Bahut bahut Khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Tahe dil tou tuada shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #20 on: May 03, 2011, 11:48:42 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 03, 2011, 11:29:36 AM
Shukariya Brokenbyluv Ji
Pasand Farmaane Ke Liye...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

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«Reply #21 on: May 03, 2011, 11:52:37 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 03, 2011, 10:28:41 AM
Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..

Geet di, Dusra aur Akhri ashaar sabse zada acha laga mujhe..
Bahaut saaf lavzon main dard ki gehrayi shamil hai..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!


Parwaaz jee,
Bahaut bahaut khoob..Kya baat hai..
Apko parrke dil khush hojata hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut shukriya rahiim..
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«Reply #22 on: May 03, 2011, 12:46:02 PM »
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Geet ..apka andaaz alag hai auro se, lajwaab!!
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2011, 01:17:26 PM »
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Quote from: annu_genis on May 03, 2011, 12:46:02 PM
Geet ..apka andaaz alag hai auro se, lajwaab!!

Bahut shukriya annu ji...
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