Door hu per juda nhi...

by brokenbyluv on August 30, 2010, 03:53:09 PM
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Badhte hue faaslo k beech bebasi ki koi inteha nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

apne sirhane dhundha naa ho tumhe merre dil ne jis din aesi koi subah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

shab guzarti hai phir milne ki aas mein per milne ki koi wajah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

kehne ko bahut kuch chhupa rakha hai dil mein per lafzo ki koi zuban nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

jo kasak hamare sine mein qaid hai us kasak ka siwa hamare aur koi gawah nhi,
suno merri jaan...ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi.........


 
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 04:08:29 PM »
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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji..

Bahut Hi pyaare jazbaat!!!!har lafz mein Ek tadap Si thi..

just Tooooooooooooooooo Good... icon_salut

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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 04:28:40 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...aur ji bilkul aap yahan likh sakte hai apko ijazat lene ki zarurat nhi hai...Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 05:33:55 PM »
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Nice poem Geet-di......Wah kya baat hai....Dur hu par juda nahi.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ab ye doori tum kab mitaogi
Kab paas aa seene se lag jaaogi

Rah takta hu har pal k ab aaogi
Intezaar ki ghadiye kab mitaogi

Bahut ho gaya ruthna-manaana
Ab agli flight se tum aajaanaa

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 30, 2010, 03:53:09 PM


Badhte hue faaslo k beech bebasi ki koi inteha nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

apne sirhane dhundha naa ho tumhe merre dil ne jis din aesi koi subah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

shab guzarti hai phir milne ki aas mein per milne ki koi wajah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

kehne ko bahut kuch chhupa rakha hai dil mein per lafzo ki koi zuban nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

jo kasak hamare sine mein qaid hai us kasak ka siwa hamare aur koi gawah nhi,
suno merri jaan...ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi.........


 
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2010, 05:35:14 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 30, 2010, 05:33:55 PM
Nice poem Geet-di......Wah kya baat hai....Dur hu par juda nahi.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ab ye doori tum kab mitaogi
Kab paas aa seene se lag jaaogi

Rah takta hu har pal k ab aaogi
Intezaar ki ghadiye kab mitaogi

Bahut ho gaya ruthna-manaana
Ab agli flight se tum aajaanaa

thnx sweetu n nice lines..Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2010, 05:49:57 PM »
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mastam post geet ji....bht pyara likha hai....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kehne ko hain duriyan par basti hun main dil me tere
hain durr bht hum par mahekti hun main saanson me tere

nazar aaun ya na aaun bas mujhe mehsus karte rehna tum
badan me lahu banke ragon me daudti rehti hun main tere

tere jism ki garmahut aur wo shaalinta dil ki main hun
milna ki aag banke dil me jalti rehti hun main tere
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2010, 05:54:53 PM »
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Kuch Issi Theme par...

Tere Aur Mere Dil Ke Beech ab koi darmiyaan Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi..

Yeh Ishq Ek Aisa Rog hai Jiski Koi Dawa Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda nahi..

Tere Bin Iss Dil ko, Koi Aur Aasra nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi...

Tu naa Ho Agar Meri Zindagi ki raah mein To koi Aur Raasta nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu mujhse Juda Nahi...

Dil ke iss Veeran Shehar mein Bin tere Koi Aur Mera Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi..

Tu paas hai To Mere Paas sab kuch Hai,
Bin Tere inn Awaara  Lehron Ko Jaise Koi kinaara Nahi
Door rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi...

Haan Ishq Ek tadap hai, Ek jazba Hai, Par Ishq Kabhi Koi Gunaah Nahi
Yeh sach hai Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2010, 06:01:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bht khubb likha hai khwaish ji aapne..tooo gooddddd
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 01:06:27 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 30, 2010, 03:53:09 PM


Badhte hue faaslo k beech bebasi ki koi inteha nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

apne sirhane dhundha naa ho tumhe merre dil ne jis din aesi koi subah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

shab guzarti hai phir milne ki aas mein per milne ki koi wajah nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

kehne ko bahut kuch chhupa rakha hai dil mein per lafzo ki koi zuban nhi,
ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi,

jo kasak hamare sine mein qaid hai us kasak ka siwa hamare aur koi gawah nhi,
suno merri jaan...ek baat kehni thi tumse main door hu tumse per juda nhi.........


 

Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 11:32:58 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji n rajesh ji....
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 11:39:34 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 30, 2010, 05:49:57 PM
mastam post geet ji....bht pyara likha hai....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kehne ko hain duriyan par basti hun main dil me tere
hain durr bht hum par mahekti hun main saanson me tere

nazar aaun ya na aaun bas mujhe mehsus karte rehna tum
badan me lahu banke ragon me daudti rehti hun main tere

tere jism ki garmahut aur wo shaalinta dil ki main hun
milna ki aag banke dil me jalti rehti hun main tere

bahut khoob kasak ji...


Jo tune abhi kaha kaash terra har vo lafz sach ho,
hamari duao mein merri jaan ab tou koi asar ho,

tadapata rehta hai ye merra dil laakh samjhane per bhi,
koi kahe isse ki tum haqiqat nhi sirrf khwabo ka nagar ho,

jo hasrate saja li hai maine apni ankho mein,
tum unhi ankho mein dubta hua bhanwar ho,

sisakti rehti hai merri aahe terri yad mein,
merri jaan tum abhi merri iss baat se bilkul bekhabar ho.........
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 11:46:46 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 30, 2010, 05:54:53 PM
Kuch Issi Theme par...

Tere Aur Mere Dil Ke Beech ab koi darmiyaan Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi..

Yeh Ishq Ek Aisa Rog hai Jiski Koi Dawa Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda nahi..

Tere Bin Iss Dil ko, Koi Aur Aasra nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi...

Tu naa Ho Agar Meri Zindagi ki raah mein To koi Aur Raasta nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu mujhse Juda Nahi...

Dil ke iss Veeran Shehar mein Bin tere Koi Aur Mera Nahi
Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi..

Tu paas hai To Mere Paas sab kuch Hai,
Bin Tere inn Awaara  Lehron Ko Jaise Koi kinaara Nahi
Door rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi...

Haan Ishq Ek tadap hai, Ek jazba Hai, Par Ishq Kabhi Koi Gunaah Nahi
Yeh sach hai Door Rehkar Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Nahi

Bahut khoob khwaish ji...


Sach hi tou hai apna ye ishq gunah nhi,
per apne haasil ka abhi koi karwaan nhi,

bata kis per karu aetbaar aur kise sunau apna dard-e-dil,
merre dil k zakhmo ki ab koi zuban nhi,

ji lungi tujhse bichad kar bhi main merre ajnabi,
jab tujhe hi merri wafao ka koi ehsaan nhi,

ab tou milne ki har aas tootne lagi hai,
tu shayad bekhabar ho..per merre iss haal se terra khuda bhi anjaan nhi.........
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