DOR

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Na tute aisi koi dor hai,
Jo khinchti teri or hai,
Chhipti hui chali aati hai,
Aa kar mujhse lipat jati hai,
Yaadon me fasi hui hai,
Waadon se bandhi hui hai,
Dor dilon ki tutegi nahi,
Teri lagi chhootegi nahi.
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2015, 01:12:58 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2015, 01:21:36 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2015, 09:00:18 PM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 27, 2015, 01:05:54 AM
Na tute aisi koi dor hai,
Jo khinchti teri or hai,
Chhipti hui chali aati hai,
Aa kar mujhse lipat jati hai,
Yaadon me fasi hui hai,
Waadon se bandhi hui hai,
Dor dilon ki tutegi nahi,
Teri lagi chhootegi nahi.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2015, 01:19:41 AM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 27, 2015, 01:05:54 AM
Na tute aisi koi dor hai,
Jo khinchti teri or hai,
Chhipti hui chali aati hai,
Aa kar mujhse lipat jati hai,
Yaadon me fasi hui hai,
Waadon se bandhi hui hai,
Dor dilon ki tutegi nahi,
Teri lagi chhootegi nahi.


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