Eik Shaheed Kee Beywah Kaa Dardangeyz Aartnaad!

by abdbundeli on December 01, 2008, 11:07:30 AM
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Wa'adaa kar, aayey naheen;
Kaisee yah parwaaz?
Kahaan rukey? Pahunchey kahaan:
Taaj chorh? Sartaj!

           _ abd bundeli
        
 
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2008, 11:03:49 PM »
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uufff!! kaya likha hai Abd ji... dil chu gaya... bahoot khoob!!

sooni sooni nigah main
soona soona sa sansaar
koi khushi, ab na de sake
kaya sarkaar ya sab rishtedaar
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2008, 11:17:46 PM »
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Bahut Khoob ABD Ji
And yours as well Pooja Ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2008, 11:31:28 PM »
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Shukaria Rajesh ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 03:05:08 AM »
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Shukriyah Pooja ji!

Beytee poochheygee, "Maam tooney, kanghee aaj naheen kee?
Yah kyaa hai, kyoun teyrey maathey kee bindiyaa hai pheekee?

Tooney kyoun utaar dee hai, wo chamkeelee-see choorhee?
Too to abhee naheen hai, haan, parhdaadee maan see boodhhee?"

Fir-fir poochheygee, "Batlaa to, maan too kyoun rotee hai?
Khaatee-peetee naheen; kintu munh rah-rah kar dhotee hai?"

Beytaa poochheygaa, "Maan, mujhko kyaa na nahaayegee too?
Aaj, gol sindooree teekaa kyaa na lagaayegee too?

Maan, ab kabhee naheen rokoongaa; ley-ley taklee meyree!
Is kee nok bhalee hai: laalee bhar maang mein ghaneyree!!

Is key binaa, mujhey to, too parhdaadee-see lagtee hai!
Beer-bahootee kousheiyee kyaa khaadee sey sajtee hai?"


                       - Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'       
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2008, 03:17:03 AM »
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wah wah wah wah...abd ji bahoot hi khoob likha hai.....dard ko shabdon me bandhna aasan nahi hota...........
pooja ji aapne bhi achcha likha...
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2008, 03:33:25 AM »
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shukaria Bekarar ji.. Abd ji ne likha he itna acha ki.. raha nahi gaya kalam se
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2008, 03:46:50 AM »
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Shukriyah! Rajesh Harish ji/bekarar ji/Pooja ji! Poora Raashhtra un key saath hai, fir bhee:

Dardnaak hai, mitragan,
Yah saaraa addhyaaya!
Un ko kaisey shaanti ho,
Huye jo ki asahaaya?

            - abd bundeli
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