----- /// Ek aur saawan beet gaya uske intezaar mein /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2010, 10:43:00 PM
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kahaa tha usne jaate jaate mere kaano me ki aayegi wo,
vaadaa kiya tha mujhse kabhi in veerano me ki aayegi wo,
kya hua agar sadiyon se uska intezar kar raha hoon main,
par aetbaar hai uspe mujhe ki ek din laut ke aayegi wo,
jeewan ke kuch pal beet gaye ek taraf ke pyaar mein,
kya hua jo ek aur saawan beet gaya uske intezaar mein,

raat ko sone se pehle uski chhavi aankhon me hoti hai,
subah ki pehli kiran se saath wo mere saamne hoti hai,
main ye nahi kehta ki wo basi hai mere har pal mein,
wo to meri dhadkano mein meri saanson mein hoti hai,
yakeen hai mujhe main dhokha na khaunga uske aetbaar mein,
kya hua jo ek aur saawan beet gaya uske intezaar mein,

tasveer uski har lamha seene se lagaaye rakhta hoon main,
muskaan uski apne hothon pe har pal sajaaye rakhta hoon main,
kya hua to aaj wo mere kareeb nahi, mere baahon me nahi,
uski yaadon ko apne geeton me sajaaye rakhta hoon main,
kya hua jo ek aur geet adhuri hi rahi uske intezaar mein,
kya hua jo ek aur saawan beet gaya uske intezaar mein....


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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2010, 05:10:18 AM »
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mind blowing creation kapil ji.....dil me bht sara dard bhar gaya ye post aapka....
mastammmm mast poem.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2010, 09:35:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.. waise mera aisa koi intension nahi tha ki dard aapke dil me ho...!!!!
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