Ek duje ko satate bahut hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 29, 2011, 08:00:40 AM
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Ek duje k haal se hum anjan tou nhi,
phir bhi hum ek duje ko tadpate bahut hai,

dekhne walo ko lagte hai hum bilkul befikre,
per haqiqat mein hum ek duje ko yad aate bahut hai,

jab izhar-e-mhbt ka waqt hota hai tou hum khamosh rehte hai,
baad mein vo pal yad kar k hum pachtate bahut hai,

pehle kaun baat karega roz isi kashmkash mein din guzar jata hai,
phir ek duje ko yad kar apni raato ko jalate bahut hai,

lab pe aate aate kayi jazbaat theher jate hai,
sab jante hue bhi hum ek duje ko satate bahut hai,

jante hai zindgi ka har sapna adhura hai hamara ek duje bin,
phir bhi bichadne ki baat hum dohrate bahut hai,

har bandish har faasle se badhkar bus itna hi kahungi dosto..
dil-o-jaan se toot kar hum ek duje ko chahte bahut hai....

I knw i hurt u but i really love u frm the depth of my heart
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2011, 08:07:30 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2011, 08:17:56 AM »
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bahut khub geetji..... sundar
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2011, 08:49:47 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut pasand ayi yeh nazm apki mujhe..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2011, 10:12:01 AM »
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Bahut shukriya nirala ji,manju mann ji aur rahiim..
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2011, 10:32:37 AM »
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JAJBAATON SE BHARI Ek aur shaandaar poem Geet-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Likhti ho TUM bahut achhe Geet iss se anjaan tou nahi hain hum
Phir bhi kalaam achhe-achhe likh k humse tali bajwati bahut ho




Ek duje k haal se hum anjan tou nhi,
phir bhi hum ek duje ko tadpate bahut hai,

dekhne walo ko lagte hai hum bilkul befikre,
per haqiqat mein hum ek duje ko yad aate bahut hai,

jab izhar-e-mhbt ka waqt hota hai tou hum khamosh rehte hai,
baad mein vo pal yad kar k hum pachtate bahut hai,

pehle kaun baat karega roz isi kashmkash mein din guzar jata hai,
phir ek duje ko yad kar apni raato ko jalate bahut hai,

lab pe aate aate kayi jazbaat theher jate hai,
sab jante hue bhi hum ek duje ko satate bahut hai,

jante hai zindgi ka har sapna adhura hai hamara ek duje bin,
phir bhi bichadne ki baat hum dohrate bahut hai,

har bandish har faasle se badhkar bus itna hi kahungi dosto..
dil-o-jaan se toot kar hum ek duje ko chahte bahut hai....

I knw i hurt u but i really love u frm the depth of my heart

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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2011, 10:38:08 AM »
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JAJBAATON SE BHARI Ek aur shaandaar poem Geet-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Likhti ho TUM bahut achhe Geet iss se anjaan tou nahi hain hum
Phir bhi kalaam achhe-achhe likh k humse tali bajwati bahut ho



He he he thnx sweetu...
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2011, 11:25:03 AM »
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Bahut shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2011, 12:17:19 PM »
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Ek duje k haal se hum anjan tou nhi,
phir bhi hum ek duje ko tadpate bahut hai,

dekhne walo ko lagte hai hum bilkul befikre,
per haqiqat mein hum ek duje ko yad aate bahut hai,

jab izhar-e-mhbt ka waqt hota hai tou hum khamosh rehte hai,
baad mein vo pal yad kar k hum pachtate bahut hai,

pehle kaun baat karega roz isi kashmkash mein din guzar jata hai,
phir ek duje ko yad kar apni raato ko jalate bahut hai,

lab pe aate aate kayi jazbaat theher jate hai,
sab jante hue bhi hum ek duje ko satate bahut hai,

jante hai zindgi ka har sapna adhura hai hamara ek duje bin,
phir bhi bichadne ki baat hum dohrate bahut hai,

har bandish har faasle se badhkar bus itna hi kahungi dosto..
dil-o-jaan se toot kar hum ek duje ko chahte bahut hai....

I knw i hurt u but i really love u frm the depth of my heart


Bahut Umdaa Rahe Sabhi Ehsaas ..... Geet Ji !

Iss Khoobsurat Peshkash Par Humari Tahe Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2011, 12:27:13 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji..
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2011, 02:55:37 PM »
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Nice poetry Geet ji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower

Jaante hain hum aadat se laachaar ho tum
Ess-see liye hum ko bahut tadpate ho tum

Yu tou beparwaah hain hum dono ek dusre k liye
Par kasam se bahut pareshaan hote hum tere liye

Saaraa waqt gujaarte ek dusre ko chhedne mai hum
Pyaar karne ka beet jata samay fir pachhtate hum

Milan ko taraste par pehal kaun kare  sochte hum
Naa-Jaane kyu ek dusre ko sataate rehte they hum

Tere bina mein aur mere bina tu reh nahi paati thee
Phir bhi nadi jaise bal-khaati mere paas tum aati thee



Ek duje k haal se hum anjan tou nhi,
phir bhi hum ek duje ko tadpate bahut hai,

dekhne walo ko lagte hai hum bilkul befikre,
per haqiqat mein hum ek duje ko yad aate bahut hai,

jab izhar-e-mhbt ka waqt hota hai tou hum khamosh rehte hai,
baad mein vo pal yad kar k hum pachtate bahut hai,

pehle kaun baat karega roz isi kashmkash mein din guzar jata hai,
phir ek duje ko yad kar apni raato ko jalate bahut hai,

lab pe aate aate kayi jazbaat theher jate hai,
sab jante hue bhi hum ek duje ko satate bahut hai,

jante hai zindgi ka har sapna adhura hai hamara ek duje bin,
phir bhi bichadne ki baat hum dohrate bahut hai,

har bandish har faasle se badhkar bus itna hi kahungi dosto..
dil-o-jaan se toot kar hum ek duje ko chahte bahut hai....

I knw i hurt u but i really love u frm the depth of my heart

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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2011, 04:29:21 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2011, 04:17:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji,priya ji n rishi ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2011, 04:39:41 PM »
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Nice poetry Geet ji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower

Jaante hain hum aadat se laachaar ho tum
Ess-see liye hum ko bahut tadpate ho tum

Yu tou beparwaah hain hum dono ek dusre k liye
Par kasam se bahut pareshaan hote hum tere liye

Saaraa waqt gujaarte ek dusre ko chhedne mai hum
Pyaar karne ka beet jata samay fir pachhtate hum

Milan ko taraste par pehal kaun kare  sochte hum
Naa-Jaane kyu ek dusre ko sataate rehte they hum

Tere bina mein aur mere bina tu reh nahi paati thee
Phir bhi nadi jaise bal-khaati mere paas tum aati thee

Bahut shukriya anaam ji aur bahut acha likha apne..
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