ek hi dil ko koi kab tak todta rahega

by amarhellboy on March 21, 2009, 01:34:49 PM
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jiwan ka har panna rangin nhi hota
har rone waala to gamgin nhi hota
ek hi dil ko koi kab tak todta rahega
ab koi jodta bhi hai to yakin nhi hota
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 01:46:15 PM »
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WAH bahut khoob AMAR

Jasbir Singh
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 05:05:03 PM »
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Very nice amar...
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 05:25:03 PM »
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jiwan ka har panna rangin nhi hota
har rone waala to gamgin nhi hota
ek hi dil ko koi kab tak todta rahega
ab koi jodta bhi hai to yakin nhi hota

Nice lines Amar ji
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TOUSIFSHAIKHH
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2009, 05:29:35 PM »
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Achi lines hain amar shb.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2009, 06:39:18 PM »
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Bohat khoob Amar ji,, Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2009, 07:40:56 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Amar Ji
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Grim Reaper
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2009, 10:47:47 AM »
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great words hello
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2009, 10:44:13 AM »
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thank's anjel4u, jasbir ji,honeyrose, roja, harish ji, grim ji, toshif ji aap logo ka bahut bahut sukhariya yaar accha lagata hai jab koi apko comments karta hai kai dino se mujhe koi comment nhi milla to maine bhi yo india par dastak dena kam kar diya magar lagta hai roz aana padega thank's aap sabhi ko
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2009, 10:46:35 AM »
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jiwan ka har panna rangin nhi hota
har rone waala to gamgin nhi hota
ek hi dil ko koi kab tak todta rahega
ab koi jodta bhi hai to yakin nhi hota

Really very Nice one Amar ji. Aaate rahiye aur likhte rahiyega..
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 11:04:59 AM »
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thank,s sophi yaar accha lagata hai yoindia par kyunki yanha koi kisi ko nhi pehchanta yanha tak ki kai to aise hai jinka hume sahi naam tak pata nhi hai magar fir bhi hum sab ek dusre ka gam sukh dukh sab samjhate hai or sath dete hai warna aaj kal kisi ko kya humare apno ko bhi fursat nhi hai
bas yahi kehna chahunga ki


thouda socha hai humne
thouda jaana hai humne
mushkil se magar pehchana hai humne
koi aap jai or yo india jaisa na tha na hoga
isliye dost aapko mana hai humne.

or ha aapko kabhi yo par nhi dekha aapki entry to bahut pehle ki hai
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2009, 11:50:02 AM »
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or ha aapko kabhi yo par nhi dekha aapki entry to bahut pehle ki hai


Yea kya kaha aapne. Hum tho hamesha hi Yo par rehte hai. Aap ani dusripost mea dekhiye jara hum whana bhi hai.

Aur jahan tak Yoindia ki baat hai yes Its always same for Old and new member A family!
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sanya310
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2009, 09:36:46 PM »
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bohot acha likha hai amar ji..
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2009, 10:15:51 PM »
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jiwan ka har panna rangin nhi hota
har rone waala to gamgin nhi hota
ek hi dil ko koi kab tak todta rahega
ab koi jodta bhi hai to yakin nhi hota

Nice Sharing Amar Ji
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2009, 12:11:22 PM »
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thank's saniya310 and thank's celmira dear
aapka bahut bahut sukriya comments dene ke liye.
Yea kya kaha aapne. Hum tho hamesha hi Yo par rehte hai. Aap ani dusripost mea dekhiye jara hum whana bhi hai.

Aur jahan tak Yoindia ki baat hai yes Its always same for Old and new member A family!
sacch kehraha hu sophi ji aap ko pehle dekha nhi tha magar ab lagata hai humesha dekhate rahenge ok dear thank's
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