Ek lafz terri shuao ka chahiye...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 27, 2011, 01:22:55 PM
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Ek jhula terri baaho ka chahiye,
ek katra terri nigaho ka chahiye,

phool hi phool khilte ho jahan,
vo rasta terri raaho ka chahiye,

wadiyo ki khamoshi per badalo ka shor ho,
aesa gharonda mhbt ki panaho ka chahiye,

wado si taazgi diwano si tishnagi,
mujhe ek sama terri adao ka chahiye,

khuda ki ibadat ki hai poore dil se,
ibadat mein ab asar duao ka chahiye,

har lafz is kalaam ka merri tadap bayan karta hai,
ab ek lafz mhbt mein terri shuao ka chahiye.........


Shuao-light,roshni...
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2011, 02:46:32 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 27, 2011, 01:22:55 PM


Ek jhula terri baaho ka chahiye,
ek katra terri nigaho ka chahiye,

phool hi phool khilte ho jahan,
vo rasta terri raaho ka chahiye,

wadiyo ki khamoshi per badalo ka shor ho,
aesa gharonda mhbt ki panaho ka chahiye,

wado si taazgi diwano si tishnagi,
mujhe ek sama terri adao ka chahiye,

khuda ki ibadat ki hai poore dil se,
ibadat mein ab asar duao ka chahiye,

har lafz is kalaam ka merri tadap bayan karta hai,
ab ek lafz mhbt mein terri shuao ka chahiye.........


Shuao-light,roshni...

Very Touching .... broken ji ! very Nice Creation ... !

dil se daad ... !
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 03:19:43 PM »
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geeta ji---
bahut  sensitive peshkash.
behad khubsurat
aap khus raho
sukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 05:29:35 PM »
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bahut khoob geet ji... achhi peshkash hai aapki...

Intezar !
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2011, 06:52:07 PM »
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very nice poem Geetanjali ji.......bahut kuchh maang liya  hai aapne......duaa karta hu aapko wo sab mile......Jo sapne dekh rahi ho sab saakaar ho.....yahi mangal kaamnaa...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aa mere pyaar tujhe aankhon mai basaa loon
Baahon k jhule mai aaj tujhe mein jhulaa doon

Phoolon kee waadiyon mai apna aashiyaa bana lein
Mohbbat he mohbbat ho aysaa ek jahaan basa lein

Chand-sitaaron ki roshni mai hum Byaah rachaa lein
Essii dharaa par hum kyu naa zannat ka mazaa lein

Khudaa ki hai mehharbaani hum par chalo maan lein
Bane hain hum ek-duje k liye aao ye aaj hum jaan lein

Har lafz mere kalaam ka pyaar he pyaar bolta hai
Sone-chaandi se nahi sanam tujhe Dil se tolta hai


Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 27, 2011, 01:22:55 PM


Ek jhula terri baaho ka chahiye,
ek katra terri nigaho ka chahiye,

phool hi phool khilte ho jahan,
vo rasta terri raaho ka chahiye,

wadiyo ki khamoshi per badalo ka shor ho,
aesa gharonda mhbt ki panaho ka chahiye,

wado si taazgi diwano si tishnagi,
mujhe ek sama terri adao ka chahiye,

khuda ki ibadat ki hai poore dil se,
ibadat mein ab asar duao ka chahiye,

har lafz is kalaam ka merri tadap bayan karta hai,
ab ek lafz mhbt mein terri shuao ka chahiye.........


Shuao-light,roshni...
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2011, 08:21:36 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
And Nice Reply Anaam JI
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2011, 04:56:51 AM »
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sundar rachna meri aur se badhai swikar kare...bhai jai shree krishna
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2011, 06:25:27 AM »
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awesome icon_flower Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 28, 2011, 06:29:52 AM »
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shayri mast h, picture mast hai, pic me ladki mast hai aur wo nadi aur dolphin bhi mast hello Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2011, 10:27:45 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji,killbill ji,rishi ji,kishan ji,anaam ji aur intezar ji...

Anaam ji behad khusurat kavita likhi hai bahut khoob...shukriya ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2011, 10:35:22 AM »
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Quote from: ruku on January 28, 2011, 06:25:27 AM
awesome icon_flower Applause Applause

Quote from: ruku on January 28, 2011, 06:29:52 AM
shayri mast h, picture mast hai, pic me ladki mast hai aur wo nadi aur dolphin bhi mast hello Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thnx alot priya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: January 28, 2011, 10:43:44 AM »
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kamaal hai bas
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«Reply #12 on: January 28, 2011, 11:09:54 AM »
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He he he shukriya ji.
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«Reply #13 on: January 28, 2011, 11:44:07 AM »
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Shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #14 on: January 28, 2011, 11:58:07 AM »
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Shukriya kaash ji..
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