fakat aansuon ki baarish... Intezar !

by Intezar on November 03, 2011, 03:26:33 PM
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Fakat in aansuo ki baarish din raat thi
Main judaa hua bas pal bhar ki baat thi

Yun dar-o-deewar se huye mere armaan
Pathar tha jism aur dil-o-jigar ki baat thi

Kyun hai jazbaat soye soye se aankhon me
Khwaabon se gujre kisi rehgujar ki baat thi

un hontho par reh gaye daag judaa hokar bhi
kisi rang ka nahi ye hontho ke asar ki baat thi

faasle badhaa kar wo aazmaate hain hume
khud bhi roye bahut kuch is kadar ki baat thi

wo har raat shamma jalaata raha tha ‘Intezar’
meri zindagi ki shaam me uske sehar ki baat thi… !!!


Shukriya
Intezar !


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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2011, 03:41:27 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2011, 09:26:21 AM »
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Intezar saheb khyaal achhe hain.buraa n mano to kahnaa chaahtaa hoon ki yaa to ise binaa matle kee gazal kahoon yaa fir kahoon kee grammetically aapne matle ko nibhaayaa nahin.peshkash yaqeenan umdaa hai bas thoda techniq per dhyaan de aap men nikhaar aa jaayegaa.God bless you.
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2011, 11:23:53 AM »
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bht bht khoob intezaar ji....
sply last one....
too... good...
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2011, 09:57:45 PM »
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Kya baat hai Intezar bhai..
Bahaut acha likha hai..
Akhri do lines, behad choo gayi..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2011, 10:45:48 PM »
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bahut khoob Intezar jee!
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2011, 06:18:13 AM »
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shukriya Saif ji... aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2011, 09:43:24 AM »
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Fakat in aansuo ki baarish din raat thi
Main judaa hua bas pal bhar ki baat thi

Yun dar-o-deewar se huye mere armaan
Pathar tha jism aur dil-o-jigar ki baat thi

Kyun hai jazbaat soye soye se aankhon me
Khwaabon se gujre kisi rehgujar ki baat thi

un hontho par reh gaye daag judaa hokar bhi
kisi rang ka nahi ye hontho ke asar ki baat thi

faasle badhaa kar wo aazmaate hain hume
khud bhi roye bahut kuch is kadar ki baat thi

wo har raat shamma jalaata raha tha ‘Intezar’
meri zindagi ki shaam me uske sehar ki baat thi… !!!


Shukriya
Intezar !



bahut khoob........!
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