faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

by laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

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lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN

dar.d kii rutt dil men bas jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN

jo beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 11:49:00 PM »

Wah,Wah,Wah Laiba ji,
Really nice.


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 12:04:22 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

Bahut Hi Khoob Surt Peshqash Ki Hai Aapne.


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 12:32:03 AM »

nice lines


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 12:34:23 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

waaaaaaaaaah Applause


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 01:32:22 AM »

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN

dar.d kii rutt dil men bas jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN

jo beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,....

bahut umda khayaal lekar aayee hain aap.
wah wah wah
Maqte aur 2nd sher...ka javaab naheen


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 08:18:26 AM »

WAAH WAAH...
Applause


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 09:12:14 AM »

waah waah beautiful ek rau


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aqsh

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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 02:03:47 PM »

bahut khoob laaiba ji. badi khoobsurat ghazal pesh kee hai aapne. aur sher bahut pasand aaye

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN

dar.d kii rutt dil men bas jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN

jo beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

hazaron dili daad qubool ho. Clapping Smiley