faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

by laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2013, 03:45:26 AM »

behad umda!

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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #16 on: June 26, 2013, 03:59:20 PM »

Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 25, 2013, 08:18:26 AM

WAAH WAAH...
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shukria,.............


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #17 on: June 26, 2013, 05:57:01 PM »

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji....!!!


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«Reply #18 on: June 26, 2013, 07:02:07 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 25, 2013, 09:12:14 AM

waah waah beautiful ek rau

bohat shukria sir aapkaa,............


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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #19 on: June 26, 2013, 07:09:43 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN

dar.d kii rutt dil men bas jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN

jo beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..

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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #20 on: June 26, 2013, 07:10:10 PM »

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN

is ashaar per to waah nahi AAH nikli hai
laaiba ji kya khoob kaha hai apne ,,
ek RAU to banta hai.
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Re: faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2013, 11:08:52 PM »

Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab... !

WaaH waaH waaH jee waaH bus gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne... ahsaas O khayaal aur unki gehraaiyaaN chhub si gayi dil meiN...

Har ashaar dilfareb raha jee... lafz lafz dil ke haal ki bayaani kar raha hai... is umdaa aur laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN lakhoN dili daad kabul kijiye...

Ummid hai aise umdaa shahkaar aapki kalam se padhne milte raheNge...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...