Firaaq-e-Paiham

by syednaami on January 22, 2008, 02:36:12 PM
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syednaami
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«Reply #15 on: April 08, 2008, 09:46:59 PM »
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Arz kia hai:

Mehfil-e-veeran ko koi to aabaad kar
Arsaa daraaz se yun to na paraishaan kar
hijr ke faasle ko itna to na kheench
ki umr guzar jaey teri yaadon ki rahguzar par
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syednaami
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«Reply #16 on: April 12, 2008, 09:32:26 AM »
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Dil men mere firaaq ki ik Khalish si hai,
Barbaad muhabbat ki iss main thodi ravish si hai,
Aansuon ka taqaaza na kar mujhse aye dard-e-hijr,
Ashk bhi aakhon se rooth gaye meri yeh kaifiyat si hai.
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syednaami
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«Reply #17 on: April 16, 2008, 02:40:57 PM »
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Visaal Ko guzre zamaana beeta,
aaj phir firaaq ne dil ko bheencha,
kyun huey the hum juda kaise hua yeh sab,
iss raaz ko waqt-e-beraham ne seecha.


(S Naami)
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2008, 03:35:02 PM »
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syeednaami ji,

bohut khoob likha he.
khwaaish ji--behtareen.
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syednaami
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2008, 02:28:59 AM »
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Ashaon men lipti nirasha thi
Dil men ik umeed naumeed si thi
firaaq-e-paiham ka safar taveel tha
Azaab-e-mustaqil men raha yeh haqiqat thi.
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Sonia01
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2008, 02:33:10 AM »
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Ashaon men lipti nirasha thi
Dil men ik umeed naumeed si thi
firaaq-e-paiham ka safar taveel tha
Azaab-e-mustaqil men raha yeh haqiqat thi.


Wow really very good to read... hum to aapka (ceiling) Fan huye jee tongue3
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syednaami
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«Reply #21 on: April 19, 2008, 04:30:58 PM »
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Sonia bibi: Pasan karne ka buhat shukriya
Main umeed karta hun ki aap ko pasand aya hoga.
Dhyan rahe yeh Dard-e-Judai section hai, yahan funny, mazaaq nahin hota. Seriously.

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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2008, 08:26:32 PM »
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Ashaon men lipti nirasha thi
Dil men ik umeed naumeed si thi
firaaq-e-paiham ka safar taveel tha
Azaab-e-mustaqil men raha yeh haqiqat thi.



Bahoot khoob SAMI JI!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2008, 10:01:00 PM »
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Aap ne padh kar iss roodad ko
Bakhsha hai jo inaam mujhe
Kaise karun shukriya ada
Samajh men na aye iss ahqar ko

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So nice of you.
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2008, 11:01:39 PM »
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kavita ka jawab kavita se diya kare
iss tarah uah haq adda kiya kare tongue3
likhne ka jab bhi banaye hum mood
chup chap app bhi sath diya kare Usual Smile
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honeyrose
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«Reply #25 on: May 31, 2008, 01:34:48 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai Syed ..Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #26 on: May 31, 2008, 04:42:30 PM »
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kavita ka jawab kavita se diya kare
iss tarah uah haq adda kiya kare tongue3
likhne ka jab bhi banaye hum mood
chup chap app bhi sath diya kare Usual Smile

Meri kavitaen ban gayi mera dard, -
Har lafz pe lagi hai judai ki muhar, -
Likhta hun to kaifiyat hoti hai zard, -
Padh ke unko peeta hun judai ka zahar. -


(Syed Naami)

Bohat khoob likha hai Syed ..Usual Smile
Shukriya, aapki haosla afzai ka...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #27 on: May 31, 2008, 04:50:15 PM »
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Bohat khoob syed ji ek ek lafz bohat hi acha
likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

Darte hai pyaar mein kahi lag jaaye na damaan pe daag
Mohabbat mein ho gaye hoon bohat badnam
Kuch na chahon aapke pyaar ke siwa meri jaan
Darte hai pyaar mein kahi lag jaaye na damaan pe daag
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«Reply #28 on: June 01, 2008, 04:34:54 AM »
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Sonia bibi: Pasan karne ka buhat shukriya
Main umeed karta hun ki aap ko pasand aya hoga.
Dhyan rahe yeh Dard-e-Judai section hai, yahan funny, mazaaq nahin hota. Seriously.



Humne kahan mazak kiya? or funny behave kiya?  sad10
I just said your shayries are too good to read and hum aapke Fan bane...
Kya galati kiya?  icon_scratch
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«Reply #29 on: June 01, 2008, 09:00:22 AM »
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Nahin baba aap to beeti baaton ko bhool jao, ab aisa kuchh nahin baba... Aap jaise ho waise hi raho.... So nice of you...
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