~~galti~~

by jaindost on May 21, 2009, 06:37:29 AM
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Please suggest a better title.........
well poem goes like this

Tu nahi teri yaad sahi,
kisi ko to apna batayenge,

Jab puchenge dost mere pyaar ki kahani,
yaad tujhe kar Bewafa khud ko batayenge....

Nahi girne denge in aankhon se aansu apne,
inhi aankhon mein tasveer teri banayenge.....

Juda hue hum meri wajah se,
apni galti ka shok hum tamam umaar manayenge........

-JAIN DOST
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 06:49:17 AM »
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Again Nice One Jain Ji.
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 07:51:45 AM »
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sache se ahsaas dil ko chhu gaye

sakhi
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 08:37:33 AM »
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wah jaindost ji,bahut bahut khoob,maza aa gaye,
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 10:03:05 AM »
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Quote from: jaindost on May 21, 2009, 06:37:29 AM
Please suggest a better title.........
well poem goes like this

Tu nahi teri yaad sahi,
kisi ko to apna batayenge,

Jab puchenge dost mere pyaar ki kahani,
yaad tujhe kar Bewafa khud ko batayenge....

Nahi girne denge in aankhon se aansu apne,
inhi aankhon mein tasveer teri banayenge.....

Juda hue hum meri wajah se,
apni galti ka shok hum tamam umaar manayenge........

-JAIN DOST


KYAA JUSTJU HAI NAAKAAM MOHABBAT KI ....NAAAICE  JD
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2009, 10:51:18 AM »
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Jain Ji bahut hi pyare jasbaat koh aap ney khoobsurti sey shabdoh meh dhala hai .... dil koh chu gayi aap ki yeh kavita

jasbir singh
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2011, 02:48:10 AM »
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ji pasand karne ke liye bhut bhut shukriya aap sab ka.......... Usual Smile
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