Ghayel samajhta hain......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 01, 2009, 08:37:07 AM
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Dr. Kumar Vishwas ko apni yeh ek sundar rachna Koi deewana kehta hain koi pagal samjta hain.....You Tube pe padhte hue suna aur bas usi dhun yeh char line ban gayee, bohat khushi hogi agar aap sab bhi isme apni 4 line add karte rahe.

Koi gair kehta hain, koi apna samajhta hain
Haqeeqat yeh hain peeda* zakhmo ki, to bas GHAYEL samajhta hain
Karu q sirf main shikwa tere ashko se aye dilbar
Dard tujhse bichedne ka , tera kajel bhi samajhta hain

                        -Sajid Ghayel-

* Pain
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2009, 08:57:59 AM »
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Mere ashqon ki tapish ko mere khwab ka har tukda samajhta hai,
Kirchiyome bikhri zindagi ko mere dilbar tu jeevan samjhta hai,
karein kya shikayat tujhse bichhadne ki ab mera pyaase dil ka gharonda
Teri yaad aajaye to ye banjar makaan use barasta sawan samajhta hia...
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2009, 09:00:23 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 01, 2009, 08:37:07 AM
Dr. Kumar Vishwas ko apni yeh ek sundar rachna Koi deewana kehta hain koi pagal samjta hain.....You Tube pe padhte hue suna aur bas usi dhun yeh char line ban gayee, bohat khushi hogi agar aap sab bhi isme apni 4 line add karte rahe.

Koi gair kehta hain, koi apna samajhta hain
Haqeeqat yeh hain peeda* zakhmo ki, to bas GHAYEL samajhta hain
Karu q sirf main shikwa tere ashko se aye dilbar
Dard tujhse bichedne ka , tera kajel bhi samajhta hain

                        -Sajid Ghayel-

* Pain

Bahoth qoob Ghayel sahab !! Aj kal kafi tanz me likh rahe ho janab !! waise apki har nazam me maza ajata hai !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2009, 09:23:22 AM »
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Tanhayi Mein Baithe Hue Jab Sochti Hu Kuchh Likhun,
Tab Gamon Ki Dhaara Samne Se Gujar Jati Hai.

Khushi Ke Do Labz Bhi Zuban Tak Nahin Aate,
Kavita Meri Dukhon Ke Sabdon Se Bhar Jati Hai. 

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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 09:40:12 AM »
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Beautiful contribution by Roja and Angel thank you so much...& thank u Qadeer.

Main tujhse door rehkar bhi, teri yado me rehta hu
Kasam hain mujko farishto ki, tera hi nam leta hu
Bichad ke jee rahe hain tujhse, aur ab ban chuke GHAYEL
Main har lamha tadapta hu, har lamha main marta hu

                             -SG-
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2009, 10:24:49 AM »
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bahot khooob Ghayal ji.. angel ji...& roja ji.......

ek choti si koshish meri taraf se bhi........


main zakhmo ko apne kabhi bharne nahi deta
un dard bhari yadon ko kabhi mitne nahi deta
kitne tukde kiye dil ke woh bhul gyi ho shayad
main aj bhi un tukdo ko judne nahi deta
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2009, 01:15:44 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 01, 2009, 09:40:12 AM
Beautiful contribution by Roja and Angel thank you so much...& thank u Qadeer.

Main tujhse door rehkar bhi, teri yado me rehta hu
Kasam hain mujko farishto ki, tera hi nam leta hu
Bichad ke jee rahe hain tujhse, aur ab ban chuke GHAYEL
Main har lamha tadapta hu, har lamha main marta hu

                             -SG-




tere har lamhe mein main guzarti hoon khamoshi se main,
Saanson ki maanind rakhti hoon yaadon ka aana jaana main,
Pighal na jaaye rooh meri in dooriyon ki adhuri tapish se,
Tujhse na keh paun ye bhi, hoon kuch is qadar majboor main...
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2009, 01:28:01 PM »
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Beautiful Contribution Samir and Angel....

Teri har aah sunta hain, teri har baat sunta hain
Sadaye jab bhi deti hain, GHAYEL tera sunta hain
Mujko khud meri bhi ab sunayee nahi deti
Dhadakta hain mera dil me par dhadkan teri sunta hain

                        -SG-
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2009, 03:22:54 PM »
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Meri aahon ko sunke bhi ansuna kar deta hai na jaane kyon,
Tere dilse shayad takra ke aa jaati hai dhadkanein meri,
Bula le tu ek baar phir usi kashish se apni mohabbat ko,
beqaraar hia meri saansein sunneko wo Masoom si aahat teri...
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2009, 05:51:44 PM »
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Bohat khoob Angel... Clapping Smiley

Meri majboori ko pagli, berukhi q samajti hain
Jitna samjha hain tujhko, Kya tu mujko bhi samajti hain
Chuda lu tujhse damen yeh kaha mumkin hain GHAYEL se
Main q samjaoo duniya ko, jo muje tera samjti hain

                      -SG-
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2009, 06:14:19 PM »
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Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
Good Goind Bhaijaan, And Good One Huznaina Ji, And Roja Behna,.

Hum Bhi Ek Choti Koshish Karenge, Agar Buraa Na Lage,.
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2009, 06:27:08 PM »
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Meri Khamoshi Ko, Ab To Saara Shehar Samajta Hai,.
Ye Baat Aur Hai Ke, Tu Mera Haal Dekh Ke Hasta Hai,.

Ab Kaise Main Zamaane Ko, Ye Tera Rang Batlaaoon,.
Saara Shehar Mujhe Abto, Teraa Aashiq Samajhta Hai,.

Kyun Mujhse Door Hua Hai Tu, Ye Mujhe Bhi Nahi Maaloom..
Teri Is Doori Ko "Azeem, Ab Bhi, Teri Mohabbat Samajhta Hai,.

Tera Chehra Mujhe, Teri Bechaini Bataata Hai,.
Tu Meri Hai, Aur Mera Tujhse Dil Ka Naata Hai,.

Bhale Mujhse Tu Karle Laakh Zamaane Ke Sitam "Jaana,.
Tu Bhi Tadpegi Aakhir Mein, Ye Mera Dil Kehta Hai,.

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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2009, 06:39:56 PM »
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Bohat khoob Angel... Clapping Smiley

Meri majboori ko pagli, berukhi q samajti hain
Jitna samjha hain tujhko, Kya tu mujko bhi samajti hain
Chuda lu tujhse damen yeh kaha mumkin hain GHAYEL se
Main q samjaoo duniya ko, jo muje tera samjti hain

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Shukriya...  tearyeyed

Teri har majboori se waaqif hoon par kya karun,
sisakta hai teri chhuwan ko mera har pal kya karun,
Kahin se to aa jaa bas mere armaano ko sehlane,
bilakhne lage hai khwaab bhi mere tere bin kya karun...  tearyeyed
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2009, 06:49:14 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 01, 2009, 06:39:56 PM
Teri har majboori se waaqif hoon par kya karun,
sisakta hai teri chhuwan ko mera har pal kya karun,
Kahin se to aa jaa bas mere armaano ko sehlane,
bilakhne lage hai khwaab bhi mere tere bin kya karun...

Hmm, Nice One,.

Main Aaoonga, Meri "Jaanam Tujhe Apna Banaane Ko,.
Tujhe Khushiyaan Dene Ko, Tere Sang Ghar Basaane Ko,.

Abhi Kuch Pal Ki Doori Hai, Tu Haske Ise Sehna,.
Teri Muskaan Meri Hai Meri Jaan, Sadaa Haste Hi Tu Rehna,.

Ye Duniya Kya Tere Liye, Main Jannat Bhi Sajaa Doonga,.
Tu Bas Kehde Tu Meri Hai, Main Sab Ko Bhulaa Doonga,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen,.
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2009, 07:07:54 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 01, 2009, 06:39:56 PM
Teri har majboori se waaqif hoon par kya karun,
sisakta hai teri chhuwan ko mera har pal kya karun,
Kahin se to aa jaa bas mere armaano ko sehlane,
bilakhne lage hai khwaab bhi mere tere bin kya karun...
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 01, 2009, 06:27:08 PM
Meri Khamoshi Ko, Ab To Saara Shehar Samajta Hai,.
Ye Baat Aur Hai Ke, Tu Mera Haal Dekh Ke Hasta Hai,.

Ab Kaise Main Zamaane Ko, Ye Tera Rang Batlaaoon,.
Saara Shehar Mujhe Abto, Teraa Aashiq Samajhta Hai,.

Kyun Mujhse Door Hua Hai Tu, Ye Mujhe Bhi Nahi Maaloom..
Teri Is Doori Ko "Azeem, Ab Bhi, Teri Mohabbat Samajhta Hai,.

Tera Chehra Mujhe, Teri Bechaini Bataata Hai,.
Tu Meri Hai, Aur Mera Tujhse Dil Ka Naata Hai,.

Bhale Mujhse Tu Karle Laakh Zamaane Ke Sitam "Jaana,.
Tu Bhi Tadpegi Aakhir Mein, Ye Mera Dil Kehta Hai,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-

 
waah kitni khubsurat lines likhi apne Jaanasheen ji or Anjel ji....kya khub likha... Applause Applause
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