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«Reply #30 on: May 22, 2007, 03:53:59 PM » |
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hello poonamji
bahut achha likha hai..........
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«Reply #31 on: May 23, 2007, 10:27:36 AM » |
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Thanx...jochahohojayein ji..
khwab ke tarah mera zindagi me na aana
khwab dikha ke pal me chale na jana...
badal ki tarah baras ke chale na jana
meri zindagi me jala ke deep bujha na jana
tarasti hai ye ankh pal bhar ki dedaar ko
usse zindagi bhar ansoo ka tofha de na jana..
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«Reply #32 on: May 23, 2007, 10:32:04 AM » |
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khwab ke tarah mera zindagi me na aana
khwab dikha ke pal me chale na jana...
badal ki tarah baras ke chale na jana
meri zindagi me jala ke deep bujha na jana
tarasti hai ye ankh pal bhar ki dedaar ko
usse zindagi bhar ansoo ka tofha de na jana..
Punam Superb ! Very good =D> Yoindia par phir ek achchi shayara ka swaagat hai :D |
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«Reply #33 on: May 23, 2007, 12:06:10 PM » |
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Thanx...jochahohojayein ji..
khwab ke tarah mera zindagi me na aana
khwab dikha ke pal me chale na jana...
badal ki tarah baras ke chale na jana
meri zindagi me jala ke deep bujha na jana
tarasti hai ye ankh pal bhar ki dedaar ko
usse zindagi bhar ansoo ka tofha de na jana..
khawab bankar hee aye the jindgee me meri tum
wo khawab hee rah gya hai magar, n aye merei jindgi me tum
har pal jieeta hoo sahare hee khwab ke tere aye 'jigar'
chand ko dehka to socha dil ne kya yahi to nahi ho tum
dil kee bat karte ho wo bhee tootne kee pyar me.....
ek bar musafir ko dil me apne basa kar to deho tum
choudhary.......... |
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jochahohojayein
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«Reply #34 on: May 23, 2007, 01:28:10 PM » |
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khwab ke tarah mera zindagi me na aana
khwab dikha ke pal me chale na jana...
badal ki tarah baras ke chale na jana
meri zindagi me jala ke deep bujha na jana
tarasti hai ye ankh pal bhar ki dedaar ko
usse zindagi bhar ansoo ka tofha de na jana..
me khwab hu par khwab bhi kabhi sach hote hai
badal bann ke baras jawunga jindagi me haryali kardunga
deepak bann ke jalta rahunga jo tumhe roshni dikhyegi
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punam
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«Reply #35 on: May 24, 2007, 06:19:00 AM » |
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khwab ke tarah mera zindagi me na aana
khwab dikha ke pal me chale na jana...
badal ki tarah baras ke chale na jana
meri zindagi me jala ke deep bujha na jana
tarasti hai ye ankh pal bhar ki dedaar ko
usse zindagi bhar ansoo ka tofha de na jana..
Punam Superb ! Very good =D> Yoindia par phir ek achchi shayara ka swaagat hai :D Raj ji thanx...itna bhi nahi aati mujhe...yeh aap ko pata hai...aap ka sath hai isliye kuch kar paati hun...waise hindi me poor hun bas dil ki baat express toh kar sakti hun par hindi na aane ki waja se bhool bhi bahot hoti hai...aur thanx again for helping me... |
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punam
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«Reply #36 on: May 24, 2007, 06:31:02 AM » |
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sapne dikhake chore na jana bich raha pe
dard sine pe hai bahot jo gairo ne diye
aap ki yaad me hum khud ko bhula diye
yeh nigahe aap ko haal-e-dil suna diye
phool ke raha ho ya kanto ke yeh aap jano
hum toh apna dil aap ko de diye..
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«Reply #37 on: May 24, 2007, 08:26:56 AM » |
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nice punam
teri yaad hamasa mera shath hothee hai
kahna ko to ek dunia mera saath hai
par chhup kar ek tanhie har dam mera saath hoti hai
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«Reply #38 on: May 24, 2007, 09:10:55 AM » |
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rahe jindgee me fir akela hogya hoo mai
mere mahaboob tujse fir juda hogya hoo mai
kuch pal ko bhool gya tha sakee mai rah meree
tum age nikal gay rah me fir tnha ho gaya hoo mai
tum to khiladee nikle aye musafir rahe asheekee ke
sathee bhee ban gaye tere , sathee talashta hoo mai
netra.
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«Reply #39 on: May 25, 2007, 06:52:23 AM » |
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waqt ke saath sath chalti hai zindagi
kismat roothi toh jalti hai zindagi
viswaas aur himmat pe toh tikki hai zindagi
chalo yeh bhi dekh le kaise aage barti hai zindagi..
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«Reply #40 on: May 25, 2007, 08:35:48 AM » |
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waqt ke saath sath chalti hai zindagi
kismat roothi toh jalti hai zindagi
viswaas aur himmat pe toh tikki hai zindagi
chalo yeh bhi dekh le kaise aage barti hai zindagi.. jaltee nahi hai jindgee jalatee hai jindgee
tadfaa tdfaa kar martee hai ashik ko jindgee
abaad hooyee thee kabhee hamaree bhee jindgee
chale gaye duniya se aashik kee kabr me gujartee hai jindgee
netra....
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«Reply #41 on: May 25, 2007, 05:20:11 PM » |
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in ankhose ansoo yun behene do
mujhe dard me yu tarap ne do
jab dard me yaad tum aate ho
to dard ko seene se lagane do...
wah poonam ji gham ko apnana koi aap se sikhe
Itna bhi na yaad karo use ki, auro ko bhula do
Kuch aur bhi rishte hote hai, unhe bhi jindagime aane do
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«Reply #42 on: May 28, 2007, 06:03:16 AM » |
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in ankhose ansoo yun behene do
mujhe dard me yu tarap ne do
jab dard me yaad tum aate ho
to dard ko seene se lagane do...
wah poonam ji gham ko apnana koi aap se sikhe
Itna bhi na yaad karo use ki, auro ko bhula do
Kuch aur bhi rishte hote hai, unhe bhi jindagime aane do Thanx jochahohojayein... risto me se aik rista toh unse hai
hote hain bahot par dil me basta sirf aik hai
yeh rista nahi tha pehele..
jooda toh abhi abhi hai
na yaadon se jane de paungi na bhul sakungi
yeh rista toh aisa hai... |
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«Reply #43 on: May 28, 2007, 07:06:39 AM » |
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kehadi unse bhula dungi unhe
bhul paungi ye keha nahi sakti
hal-e-dil un ko dikha nahi sakti
unhe rukne ko kehe nahi sakti
wo aaj dur chale bhi gaye to
unhe bewafa keha nahi sakti
jee lungi unke yaadon ke sahare
jo jagah unka hai wo aur kisi ko de nahi sakti..
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«Reply #44 on: May 28, 2007, 08:31:38 AM » |
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kehadi unse bhula dungi unhe
bhul paungi ye keha nahi sakti
hal-e-dil un ko dikha nahi sakti
unhe rukne ko kehe nahi sakti
wo aaj dur chale bhi gaye to
unhe bewafa keha nahi sakti
jee lungi unke yaadon ke sahare
jo jagah unka hai wo aur kisi ko de nahi sakti.. bhoot sakoon tha n aye the tum jindgee me meri
dard hee dhar hai ab befayee dekhi hai jab se teri
jana chata hoo door jamne se ruswa hogaya hoo mai
rahkar kisee ke agoosh me, bahen pakadti ho kyo meri
wada kiya tha tune hee tod gayee too hee us wade ko
kaise bhool jaoo befa dil me basee hai too hee ab bhee meri
netra...
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