Hain kahaan ashk baaqee, jo hon chashm nam?

by abdbundeli on February 27, 2009, 12:44:17 PM
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Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!


Ham ney samjhaa thaa, Rab key farishtey hain woh;
Phool jhartey hain, jab dil sey hanstey hain woh;
Khuskiyoun mein ghataa ban barastey hain woh;
Par na jaaney kahaan jaa key bastey hain woh?

Ham ney puuchhaa hazaaroun sey un kaa patah:
Poochhney mein kahaan thee hamaaree khataa:
Jinsey poochaa, wahee kar kinaaraa, badhhey:
Baarahaa dohraanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!

Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!


Ham ney khaayee qasam, ‘Ab mileyngey na ham!’
Door ghar sey tumhaarey raheyngey sanam!
Dooriyaan, ab kabhi bhi nahin hongin kam!
Hain kahaan ashk baaqee, jo hon chashm nam?

Raah par unkee daaleyngey, ab, kyoun nazar?
Qaid ho kar raheyngey yaheen umra bhar!
Dard kaa, kyaa patah kab ho un par asar?
Bin kahey, un kaa jaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!

Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!

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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2009, 12:48:31 PM »
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Subnhan Allah, Subhan Allah,
Bohat Kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne Abd Bhaiya Nice One,.
As Usual,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2009, 01:06:27 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 27, 2009, 12:48:31 PM
Subnhan Allah, Subhan Allah,
Bohat Kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne Abd Bhaiya Nice One,.
As Usual,.
Thanks! I'm delighted to read your comments!
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2009, 01:17:14 PM »
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Its like a song....very beautiful..when I read somehow, a kind of music was playing along with the words....Just amazing, Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2009, 02:36:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 27, 2009, 01:17:14 PM
Its like a song....very beautiful..when I read somehow, a kind of music was playing along with the words....Just amazing, Babu Ji
Talat bitia! Sangeet dimaag sey ziyaadah dil (man) ki 'wastu' hai! It pleases only them who feel who possess a sensible heart that knows to pine even then when others are in pain! And, you're blessed with a plenty of it!
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2009, 02:44:48 PM »
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Very very nice.... commendable ABD sirji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2009, 02:54:01 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 27, 2009, 02:44:48 PM
Very very nice.... commendable ABD sirji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Haardik dhanyawaad, salma786 ji! Aap gaateen to zaroor hi hongeen: zaraa tarannum key saath, thorhaa zor sey, gungunaa deyngeen to mein yahaan 2700 Km door sey bhi sun loongaa!!No?
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2009, 02:59:22 PM »
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Bahut acche...

Gajab ka gazal pesh ki hai aapne Abd ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2009, 03:31:04 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 27, 2009, 02:59:22 PM
Bahut acche...

Gajab ka gazal pesh ki hai aapne Abd ji  Applause Applause
Roja ji, thanks a lot! Aap a-Hindi/a-Urdu bhaashhee hain; fir bhi dono bhaashhaaoun mein likh leyteen hain! Nazmain 'dil sey ziyaadah, aur dimaag sey kam' likheen jaateen hain!
Aap ko pasand aayi mujhey bahut achchhaa lagaa!
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2009, 04:05:25 AM »
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Tera bebak hona ghazab dhaa gaya
Tera andaz-e-bayaan "ABD" ghazab dhaa gaya
"GHAYEL" samjha kiye khudko mehfil ki jaan
Aur tera Mehfil me aana ghazab dhaa gaya

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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2009, 04:09:56 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 27, 2009, 12:44:17 PM
Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!


Ham ney samjhaa thaa, Rab key farishtey hain woh;
Phool jhartey hain, jab dil sey hanstey hain woh;
Khuskiyoun mein ghataa ban barastey hain woh;
Par na jaaney kahaan jaa key bastey hain woh?

Ham ney puuchhaa hazaaroun sey un kaa patah:
Poochhney mein kahaan thee hamaaree khataa:
Jinsey poochaa, wahee kar kinaaraa, badhhey:
Baarahaa dohraanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!

Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!!


Ham ney khaayee qasam, ‘Ab mileyngey na ham!’
Door ghar sey tumhaarey raheyngey sanam!
Dooriyaan, ab kabhi bhi nahin hongin kam!
Hain kahaan ashk baaqee, jo hon chashm nam?

Raah par unkee daaleyngey, ab, kyoun nazar?
Qaid ho kar raheyngey yaheen umra bhar!
Dard kaa, kyaa patah kab ho un par asar?
Bin kahey, un kaa jaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!

Un kaa nazdeek aanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!
Un sey nazareyn milaanaa: gazab dhhaa gayaa!

                                                 - abd bundeli


gud one abdbundeli.......
kaafi lines meri samajh me nahi aayi..
but jitni aayi, acchee lagee....
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2009, 05:12:28 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 28, 2009, 04:05:25 AM
Tera bebak hona ghazab dhaa gaya
Tera andaz-e-bayaan "ABD" ghazab dhaa gaya
"GHAYEL" samjha kiye khudko mehfil ki jaan
Aur tera Mehfil me aana ghazab dhaa gaya

-SG-
Shkriyah Sajil bhai! Aapko nazm/geet pasand aayaa mujhey khushee huyi!
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2009, 05:17:31 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 28, 2009, 04:09:56 AM
gud one abdbundeli.......
kaafi lines meri samajh me nahi aayi..
but jitni aayi, acchee lagee....
Janaab pandit ji! Shukriyah! Dheerey-dheerey sab samajh mein aa jaayegaa!
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2011, 01:24:54 AM »
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Abd jee aap ko paRhaa or paRhte hee rah gaye......behad sundar saangeetik rachnaa kee peshkash! dheroN haardik badhayee....
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2011, 08:06:01 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 11, 2011, 01:24:54 AM
Abd jee aap ko paRhaa or paRhte hee rah gaye......behad sundar saangeetik rachnaa kee peshkash! dheroN haardik badhayee....

Haardik dhanyawaad, Mamta ji! Lagtaa hai 'geet-prageet' aapkey galey mein bastey hain!!

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