ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

by sakhi1909 on July 01, 2007, 11:46:07 AM
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yadoin mein tum aaye to rula kar chale gaye
mere soye ehsasoin ko jaga kar chale gaye

tumko apna banane ke liye hamne kya nahi kiya
tum khabab mere saare mita kar chale gaye

muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye

hasne ke bahane sabhi tere sath mein gaye
ham yaad un paloin khud ko dilate chale gaye

unka wajood har taraf bikhara pada hai aaj
ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

sakhi
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2007, 05:35:55 PM »
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Jasbaati  !

Nice work !
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2007, 04:43:02 AM »
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yadoin mein tum aaye to rula kar chale gaye
mere soye ehsasoin ko jaga kar chale gaye

tumko apna banane ke liye hamne kya nahi kiya
tum khabab mere saare mita kar chale gaye

muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye

hasne ke bahane sabhi tere sath mein gaye
ham yaad un paloin khud ko dilate chale gaye

unka wajood har taraf bikhara pada hai aaj
ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

sakhi


Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam hai Sakhi...

Yeh sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...
"muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye"

Very very nice... Keep Writing..
Its always feels good to read ur Shayari... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2007, 04:54:40 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai saki.... ek ek line bahoot khoob!! bahoot hi acha likha hai...
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2008, 06:46:38 PM »
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Quote from: Ricky on July 03, 2007, 05:35:55 PM
Jasbaati  !

Nice work !
sabse pahle mafi chaungi itna late aane ke liye...shurkiya ricky ji jo apko pasand aaya

sakhi
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2008, 06:50:39 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on July 06, 2007, 04:43:02 AM


Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam hai Sakhi...

Yeh sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...
"muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye"

Very very nice... Keep Writing..
Its always feels good to read ur Shayari... Usual Smile

mafi ke sath shukriya ada karti hun sikha...kaisi ho aap??

sakhi
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2008, 06:53:45 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2007, 04:54:40 AM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai saki.... ek ek line bahoot khoob!! bahoot hi acha likha hai...

mafi ki talbgaar hun pooja ji
shuriya apko har line pasanda ayee....
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2008, 08:15:51 PM »
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 Both Thumbs Up occasion14 very nice  occasion14 Both Thumbs Up
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2008, 08:17:09 PM »
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peney dey saki abi raat baqi ha
terey hathon ka 1 aur jaam baqi ha
jana ha mehkhaney tak larkharatey howey
in kadmon mian abi jaan baqi ha  Swinging Swinging
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2008, 08:17:34 PM »
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peney dey saki abi raat baqi ha
terey hathon ka 1 aur jaam baqi ha
jana ha mehkhaney tak larkharatey howey
in kadmon mian abi jaan baqi ha  Swinging Swinging
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2008, 06:35:28 PM »
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shukrioya apne pasand kiya...apka nam nahi pata isliye swwet killer ji
Quote from: sweet killer on September 25, 2008, 08:17:09 PM
peney dey saki abi raat baqi ha
terey hathon ka 1 aur jaam baqi ha
jana ha mehkhaney tak larkharatey howey
in kadmon mian abi jaan baqi ha  Swinging Swinging
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2008, 06:52:50 PM »
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Quote from: sakhi1909 on July 01, 2007, 11:46:07 AM
yadoin mein tum aaye to rula kar chale gaye
mere soye ehsasoin ko jaga kar chale gaye

tumko apna banane ke liye hamne kya nahi kiya
tum khabab mere saare mita kar chale gaye

muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye

hasne ke bahane sabhi tere sath mein gaye
ham yaad un paloin khud ko dilate chale gaye

unka wajood har taraf bikhara pada hai aaj
ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

sakhi

Bohot hi Khoob Sakhi...Very good creation Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2008, 07:31:53 PM »
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waah sakhi waah...aakhir tum RaNg maiM aa hi gayii...bahoot khoobb dost.......

Harash
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2008, 06:45:38 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 26, 2008, 06:52:50 PM
Bohot hi Khoob Sakhi...Very good creation Applause

shukriya celmira...apne apsand kiya mera likha....

sakhi
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2008, 06:52:04 PM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on September 26, 2008, 07:31:53 PM
waah sakhi waah...aakhir tum RaNg maiM aa hi gayii...bahoot khoobb dost.......

Harash

harsh ji namste....
rang mein aa gayee ...me to rang me thi hi...bas dala anhi rahi kahin kuch new...likhne ka silsila to jari hi hai...

shukriya aapne saraha...acha laga apka aana
apna khyala rakhe

sakhi
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