ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

by sakhi1909 on July 01, 2007, 11:46:07 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 27, 2008, 07:17:01 PM »
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khoob likha hai sakhi ji,.....maafi chahunga itne dino baad najar gai yahan
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«Reply #16 on: September 27, 2008, 07:30:37 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on September 27, 2008, 07:17:01 PM
khoob likha hai sakhi ji,.....maafi chahunga itne dino baad najar gai yahan

koi baar anhi bekrar ji
acha laga apko pasand aaya...

shukriya

Quote from: bekarar on September 27, 2008, 07:17:01 PM
khoob likha hai sakhi ji,.....maafi chahunga itne dino baad najar gai yahan
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«Reply #17 on: September 27, 2008, 07:41:43 PM »
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Zindagi jeene ka naam hai, jeete rahna
Gum agar aaye raha mein to sahte rahna

kamaal ke likha hai SAAKI aapne   Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: September 27, 2008, 07:54:54 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 27, 2008, 07:41:43 PM
Zindagi jeene ka naam hai, jeete rahna
Gum agar aaye raha mein to sahte rahna

kamaal ke likha hai SAAKI aapne   Applause Applause

rajesh ji shukriya apne pasand kiye mere alfaz

koshish yahi hai sahte rahe jite rahe...aur kya kare...
ek sher

dil ke tukde samete jo hamne..
hath mein lahoo lag gya hai
dekh ke dard dil ka kisi ke
dard soya hua jag gya hai

regrds
sakhi
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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2008, 08:44:33 PM »
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Again nice lines Sakhi......and Rajesh you also wrote nice lines
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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2008, 10:55:59 PM »
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Hi Sakhi

bahut khoob

chalu kuch acha to padhne ko mila tumhari qalam se


javed
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«Reply #21 on: September 30, 2008, 03:17:06 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 27, 2008, 08:44:33 PM
Again nice lines Sakhi......and Rajesh you also wrote nice lines

shukriya celmira ji
apne pasnad kiya

regards
sakhi
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«Reply #22 on: September 30, 2008, 03:19:36 PM »
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Quote from: sakhi1909 on July 01, 2007, 11:46:07 AM
yadoin mein tum aaye to rula kar chale gaye
mere soye ehsasoin ko jaga kar chale gaye

tumko apna banane ke liye hamne kya nahi kiya
tum khabab mere saare mita kar chale gaye

muhaabat karne ki nahi hone ki baat hai
dil ko ham yuhi apne manate chale gaye

hasne ke bahane sabhi tere sath mein gaye
ham yaad un paloin khud ko dilate chale gaye

unka wajood har taraf bikhara pada hai aaj
ham dard ko apne unke sath sazate chale gaye

sakhi

Bahut khoob sakhi dear
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«Reply #23 on: September 30, 2008, 03:25:57 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on September 27, 2008, 10:55:59 PM
Hi Sakhi

bahut khoob

chalu kuch acha to padhne ko mila tumhari qalam se


javed

javed ji
bhaut bhaut shurkiya....apko kuch sahi alga hamarai kalam se nikla...
acha laga apko yahan dekh kar...
sakhi with love
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«Reply #24 on: September 30, 2008, 03:30:49 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 30, 2008, 03:19:36 PM
Bahut khoob sakhi dear

huggs roja dear
shurkiya apko pasand aaya

love
sakhi
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«Reply #25 on: September 30, 2008, 03:38:45 PM »
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huggs roja dear
shurkiya apko pasand aaya

love
sakhi


Welcome Sakhi dear aur tujhe padne ki chhat hai.. Yu hi likhte rehna. Aapka kalam aur padne ka intezar hai mujhe dear....
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«Reply #26 on: October 01, 2008, 09:50:30 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 30, 2008, 03:38:45 PM
Welcome Sakhi dear aur tujhe padne ki chhat hai.. Yu hi likhte rehna. Aapka kalam aur padne ka intezar hai mujhe dear....


thnx dear jaldi hi new kuch dalungi thik hai...likha to hai lkein time nahi mil pata dalne ka yahan.
sadaa sath rahna
love sakhi
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