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HAMARI YAAD AAYI HOTI

by poem143s on July 05, 2007, 12:54:15 PM

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Kaas unhen bhi kabhi hamari yaad aayi hoti
Hamari yaad main unki bhi aankh bhar aayi hoti
Milna to ab kishmat ki hi baat rahi
Sapno main aake hi kabhi hamari need churayi hoti
Waade kashme sab bhul gaye wo, kiye the jo kabhi humne
Kaas hamari yaad ne hi un kashmon ki yaad dilayi hoti
Hum to jee rahen hai unki yaadon ke sahare
Unki yaad na hoti to hamari zindagi main bhi tanhai hoti

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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2007, 06:55:55 AM »

nice 143


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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2007, 11:11:34 AM »

Thanks for your valuable comments


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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2007, 04:52:50 PM »

Every line is nice and balanced..
good work !


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Re: HAMARI YAAD AAYI HOTI

«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2007, 04:20:59 PM »

Quote from: "poem143s"

bhoot khoob,

khush kistmat who hote hai
jo yado me kisi ke baste hai

ham bhee dekh te hai khawab me kisiko
par khawab kya kabhi poore hote hai?

kyo jeete hao yado ka share kisee ke
tum to wo shama ho jis par kai parwane
kurbaan hote hai....

netra......