Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!

by abdbundeli on July 31, 2008, 08:13:34 AM
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  Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
  Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!
 
Raatan kee kaa kahiye: din mein andhiyaarou hai!
Jaan tum hou piyaa: utayin saanchou ujiyaarou hai!!
Bainan kee guryaayee: bisrat nainyaan  kaisayu!
Tum ney jo-jo daou hai: praanan seyn pyaarou hai!!
  Ab, kaisou kariye? tum bin kaisain katai raat?
  Jaaney kaa, kaisou, uksaaya gayou badraa?
         Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
         Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!

Kab seyn, eikayu din foolo nainyaan seinmaraa?
Soonou hai mainan seyn, apnou jou chountaraa!
Ab lag raou hai: tum aa raye hoohou lout kein;
Choukhat pai thaanrhee hon, aa raou hai bojraa!!
  Bhout dinaan ho gaye hain: sochou tou kachhoo, kant!
  Hamree ankhinyan mein, samaaye gayou badraa!
         Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
         Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!

Ruch-ruch kein poojo hai ham ney soyee baraa!
Bhorayi mein dhaaro hai saalan, tulseegharaa!!
Pwaasey reh-reh kein hamnain: Kishan-Kanhaiyaa sain,
Sang tumaarou, maagou hai poorou saikaraa!
  Tum jaaneyn kitai jaat, kitai raat hou sanyaan?
  Ansuan mein, deykhou, dubaaya gayou badraa!  
         Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
         Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!

Tumnai tou kayee tee, 'jhattaiyn aabee lout keyn;
Tum jaisou kaihou, oosayi gaabee lout keyn?'
Deykhou tou ham nain banaaou hai kaa-kaa? piyaa!
Maalpuaa, tum kai raye tey,'khaabee lout kein'?
  Ab, aisou lag raou: sapnan keen hain bey baataiyn!
  Kitai, tumein dhooneen ramwaaya gayou, badraa?
         Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
         Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!

Aandhee kee dhakiyaayee, baj rayi hai saankree!
Tarhkey sain pailaan, bijuree gayee hai jhaank, ree!
Guinyaan! ghar mein nainyaan saniyann hamaarey , aaj!
Kaa kariye? paaweyn wey dukh hamrou aank? ree!
  Andhiyaarou ho raou hai: sakhee! gharye jaaou tum!
  Hamain, yee akeiley mein, paaye gayou badraa!    
         Dour-dour poorab seyn, aaye gayou badraa!
         Hamree atariyaa pai chhaaye gayou badraa!!
                    
                                    - abd bundeli

  

    

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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2008, 09:09:14 AM »
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wah abd sahab.....har bhasha par..ap poore adhikaar ke saath likhte hain.......
bahoot khoob..
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2008, 09:12:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob abdbundeli ji....
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2008, 09:17:30 AM »
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abd piyaa,,Tohar Gitwaa Hamree Ankhiyan Mein samaye gayou Re..badraa

Kuch shabd Hai Jo..Mile jule hai aapki previ.post se..
Kuch Nayaapan Hai Is Geet Mein
kuch shabd samaj k bahar bhi hai,,lekin puri lines padhne se Meaning Thoda saaf ho jaata Hai..
Ba-khoobi Se Banaya aapne Ye..Fir Gaa Kar Hi achchha lagta hoga.
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2008, 11:56:13 AM »
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bekarar ji / punam ji / Muhammed sa'b,
Khushee hai, ki, birahey pasand aa rahey hain!
Isee sey, sarey aam, ham gaa rahey hain!!
          Meethey-meethey lafzoun key liye shukriyaa!
                               - abd bundeli     
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2008, 12:04:37 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai Abd ji..  Applause
You are really Master of Many Languages...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2008, 01:18:27 PM »
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'Mahiya! dil mein jagah ho, to, asar hotaa hai!
 Lafz shaayar kaa, 'abd', rooh-e-jigar hotaa hai!
 Aap-sey zeyhn nasheen, padhtey hain usey jab bhi,
 Jalwah afroz WAHEE KEEMIAGAR hotaa hai!!'

                               - abd bundeli

   
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