Har pehelu ansu bahata hai...R...

by brokenbyluv on June 29, 2010, 08:00:13 PM
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Beete lamho ka manzar jab bhi waqt dikhata hai,
merre zehen mein tujhse doori ka ehsas chhod jata hai,

jab bhi dhundhti hu tujhe terri tasveer mein,
tujhe na paane ka khayal mujhe aur bhi tadpata hai,

har pal khuaish rehti hai tujhse milne ki,
per tujhse naa mil pane ki majburi kyun ye dil smjh nhi pata hai,

kya yu hi juda hone k liye mile the humdono,
ye sawal har ghadi merra dil dohrata hai,

tu le gaya merra chain bhi mujhse,
aur ab tou merre khuabo mein bhi mujhe bahut satata hai,

kuch kehne ki himmat nhi rahi mujhme.
bus terri yad mein merra har pehelu ansu bahata hai.........
  
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2010, 08:39:42 PM »
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Waah...!!! Kya kahen Geet ji... Kin shabdon me taarif karein... bahut bahut sundar kavita hai...Bahut dard hai isme.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2010, 01:10:59 AM »
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DIL KI TADAP LAFZON KE LIBAAS ME SAAMNE AA KHADI HUI HAI.AISE KALAAM PAR TO BAS AAH HI NIKAL SAKTI HAI.
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2010, 05:18:18 AM »
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   Very Nice creation Geet ji. Simple and Sweet. hello2
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2010, 10:29:11 AM »
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Wah Wah bahot khoob likha hai BBL JI. Dil ki kaifiyaat ko badi sanjeedgi se lafzo ka roop diya hai. Marvelous. Daad Hazir Hai.
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2010, 11:47:20 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji,kapil ji,tamanna ji aur riyaz ji... notworthy notworthy
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