<>*Hum darte hain*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 06, 2010, 05:06:33 AM
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<>*Hum darte hain*<>


Kuch  ankahe se afsane hain dil me
Jo  zabaan pe lane se hum darte hain

Hum chhate hain unhe baintehaan magar
Unke paas aane se hum darte hain

Ye nazdeeki kahin zindagi bhar ka dard na ban jaye
Ab hum unhe kho dene k khyal se bhi darte hain

Khud hi ho jayenge durr hum unse kuch pal me
K unke bina jeene ki aadat se hum darte hain...
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 05:17:07 AM »
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no words...it's beautiful... straight from the heart... and no claps...


meri jaana, na karo khud pe tum zulm itna,
hum tumhe chot pahuchaane se darte hain,

tumhaare itne kareeb aa chuke hain hum ab,
tumse duur jaane ke khayaal se bhi darte hain,

maloom hai humein hai mumkin nahi hamaara saath,
tumhaara ye saath chhoot jaane se darte hain,

kehna chaahte hai tumse kuch khaas magar,
tumhaara dil toot jaane se darte hain,

ye jaane kaisa ehsaas hai ki itne kareeb hai hum,
yakeen tum na karo par pyaar hum tumse hi karte hain...
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 05:28:15 AM »
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kapil......same reaction from my side re...no claps....very sweet reply...very touchy....

keh den kaise k ab hum nahin sath tere
koi aur na aajaye is baat se darte hain

tujhse durr jaate jaate ruk jate hain hum
koi aur tere kareeb na aa jaye isse darte hain

tanha tanha raaton me aksar hi ro lete ahin chup chap
tu dekh na le aansu isly tere samne aane se darte hain

lamhe judaai k kitna dard dete hain hume kya kahen
tujhe kuch bhi is bare me kehne se hum darte hain

tujhe dekh k dard k aanchal me soya hua na diya aanchal
ab apne hi iss swarthi pathar dil aks se hum darte hain...!!!

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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 05:41:36 AM »
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hmmmm ... sach mein touchy touchy sa ban gaya par pata nahi kaise bana... aapne bhi waisa hi likh diya... pata nahi kuch different type ki feeling hai aaj dil me... ye lo fir kuch waisa ban gaya...

kitna mushkil hota hai ye dard apno se dur jaane ka,
kuch palon ke liye tujhse dur rehke hai jaana humne,

paake kisi ki bepanaah mohabbat gar khona pade usko,
aaj us jaanlewa dard ke ehsaas ko hai pehchaana humne,

maaloom hai tu meri nahi thi, na meri ho paayegi kabhi,
jaanke bhi is sach ko kabhi chaaha na samajhna humne,

jab aayi ghadi judaai ki to tadap rahe hain dono k dil,
keh na sake kisi se na kisi ko sunaya ye fasaana humne,

kuch dino ka saath hai bus fir dur bahut jaana hai tumse,
tumhi kaho jaanke sab ek duje se dil kyun lagaaya humne...Huh??
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 05:53:26 AM »
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aaj tum jarur rulaoge...oyeeeeeee itna senti mat likho re...... mujhe nahin rona hai atleast aaj to pehle hi wednesday hai......

kyun kar baithe mahobbat hum ek duje se
kyun nahin sambhal paaye apne jazbaaton ko

har baat samjhke jaanke hum kyun aage badhte gaye
kyun rok na paye apne badhte hue kadmon ko

kyun khote chale gaye hum ek duje ki baaton me
kyun na samjh paaye inn bigadte haalaton ko

ho gaye hum ek jism do jaan kuch iss kadar
kyun na rok paaye tan man me uthte tufaanon ko

ek duje bin a ab ek pal bhi ji na saken hum
kyun na sahej pa rahe ab dil k ehsaason ko

nahin nahin ab aur nahin jina hai tum bin
rok lo tum mujhse durr jate apne inn kadmon ko...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2010, 06:04:10 AM »
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pata nahi aapka likha padhta hoon to haathon me khujli hone lagti hai aur aise aise poems hi likhne lag jaata hoon ... haath rukte hi nahi hai.. sorry aapko frastu kiya... par rone ka nahi kya .. mastammm khush rehne ka ... ye ban gaya ek aur frasu waala par thoda halka hai.. aapke agle reply k baad main thoda twist laa dunga.. kuch romantic me aa jaunga .. ye ban gaya to post kar diya...


rokna chaahta hoon main in kadmo ko
par main inhe rok nahi paata hoon,

koshish karke bhi bahut main ab,
inse bas haar ke reh jaata hoon,

waqt ka khel tha wo jisne humein milaaya tha,
waqt ka hi khel hai ki ab tanhaayi me rota hoon,

chaahta nahi hoon khona tumhe, umra bhar tum saath raho,
kuch aise khayaalon me khoke bahut gumsum main hota hoon,

tum ho meri, main tumhaara, saath ye lagta hai pyaara,
par apni judaai ke bojh ko apne seene me main dhota hoon,

rok tumhe lunga main par zamaane se darta bhi hoon main,
kyun aise bandhan hai yahaan jinhe soch ke pareshaan hota hoon...
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2010, 09:32:00 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI         KASAK... DIL KI JI....

PYAR TO HAM DONO BE-INTEHAAN EK DUJHE SE KARTE HAIN
PAR KABHI HAM DONO EK NA HO SAKHEGE YE BHI JAANTE HAIN
FIR BHI NA JAANE KYUN EK DUJHE SE YEH KAHENE SE "HAM DARTE HAIN"...
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2010, 10:05:30 AM »
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claps claps claps 10000 of claps for u two kapil ji and anu jiii..

bahut badhiya likha he apne

cara ji apne bhi bahut achhi baat kahi...

sabhi ko dher sarii daad~
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2010, 10:07:20 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI         KASAK... DIL KI JI....

PYAR TO HAM DONO BE-INTEHAAN EK DUJHE SE KARTE HAIN
PAR KABHI HAM DONO EK NA HO SAKHEGE YE BHI JAANTE HAIN
FIR BHI NA JAANE KYUN EK DUJHE SE YEH KAHENE SE "HAM DARTE HAIN"...

thnx cara ji bht pyara likha hai aapne aur accha sath diya hai..thnx alot for appreciation
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2010, 10:08:14 AM »
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claps claps claps 10000 of claps for u two kapil ji and anu jiii..

bahut badhiya likha he apne

cara ji apne bhi bahut achhi baat kahi...

sabhi ko dher sarii daad~

mujhe aapki taaliyon ki gunj nahin sunai de rahi abhi ji....
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 10:13:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... par Kasak ji shayad aapki taaliyon se khush nahi hain.. unhe kuch aur chahiye... aapka poetic reply...!!!

claps claps claps 10000 of claps for u two kapil ji and anu jiii..

bahut badhiya likha he apne

cara ji apne bhi bahut achhi baat kahi...

sabhi ko dher sarii daad~
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 10:25:18 AM »
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unkhi ankhon jhukkar kai bar mujhse izhar kiya
ham na keh sake ki tumhare he jane kis bat se darte the
unke ansuo ne kai bar mere jehen ko bhigo diya
ham na keh sake ye sare moti hamare he jane kis bat se darte the~


lijiye jiii kapil sahab apne kaha hamne likh diya~
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 10:30:31 AM »
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shukriya Abhi ji aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good hai ...oh... abhi Sirji likhte likhte reh gaya.. nahi likha ... Usual Smile

unkhi ankhon jhukkar kai bar mujhse izhar kiya
ham na keh sake ki tumhare he jane kis bat se darte the
unke ansuo ne kai bar mere jehen ko bhigo diya
ham na keh sake ye sare moti hamare he jane kis bat se darte the~


lijiye jiii kapil sahab apne kaha hamne likh diya~
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 10:35:15 AM »
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aahaaaaaa ye hui na baat.....ab laga abhi ka reply....warna wo fika fika achcha nahin lagta.....
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2010, 10:46:54 AM »
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shukriya Abhi ji aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good hai ...oh... abhi Sirji likhte likhte reh gaya.. nahi likha ... Usual Smile

ohh toh fir shukriya apka hua kapil sahab...
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