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by Meena on July 20, 2005, 03:46:02 PM
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Well...kahi log jante honge us alam ko jab besabri se kisi ka intezaar reheta hai. dil bas ek hi shaks ke bare me hi sochta hai...koi bohot yaad ata hai to kisi ko bohot miss kiya jata hai....bas unhi feelings ko ek poem me likhne ki koshish ki haiyaha maine :D

Din me unke khayal hume satate hai,
Raat ko khwabon me woh roz hume tadpate hai,
Ek bechaini si hurdum hai aur keheti hai,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaat ate hai!

Har gari unke saye ko hum talashte hai,
Nam ankhon ke saath dil se unko pukarte hai,
Koi to sandesh pohoncha de unko yeh mera,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaad ate hai!

Kisi aur se nahin par apne dil se unki baate karte hai,
Soch kar unko kabhi rote to kabhi haste hai,
Meri ankhon ki tadap gawayi de rahi hai bar bar,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yad ate hai!
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2005, 05:48:31 PM »
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Well...kahi log jante honge us alam ko jab besabri se kisi ka intezaar reheta hai. dil bas ek hi shaks ke bare me hi sochta hai...koi bohot yaad ata hai to kisi ko bohot miss kiya jata hai....bas unhi feelings ko ek poem me likhne ki koshish ki haiyaha maine :D

Din me unke khayal hume satate hai,
Raat ko khwabon me woh roz hume tadpate hai,
Ek bechaini si hurdum hai aur keheti hai,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaat ate hai!

Har gari unke saye ko hum talashte hai,
Nam ankhon ke saath dil se unko pukarte hai,
Koi to sandesh pohoncha de unko yeh mera,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaad ate hai!

Kisi aur se nahin par apne dil se unki baate karte hai,
Soch kar unko kabhi rote to kabhi haste hai,
Meri ankhon ki tadap gawayi de rahi hai bar bar,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yad ate hai!


hmmmmmmmmm   wow wow  meenu............ what's  feelings  yaara....  tongue3  

aa  jaayen  to  kuch  aur  waqt  gujar  jaayega
na do sada  itni,  ek  dost  bikhar  jaayega
jaroori nahi  tum  ask  bahao kisi  ki  yaad mein itna
ek shaks jo teri palkon mein chupa hai woh ask  bankar  bah jaayega...
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2005, 06:05:24 PM »
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thank u waheed and gud one too!

aise kaise ansowon ke saath woh behe jayenge,
jab apne dil me une basaya hai humne,
kabhi na door ho payenge woh kabhi,
jab apni rooh se unko milwaya hai humne!
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2005, 06:22:47 PM »
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thank you waheed and gud one too!

aise kaise ansowon ke saath woh behe jayenge,
jab apne dil me une basaya hai humne,
kabhi na door ho payenge woh kabhi,
jab apni rooh se unko milwaya hai humne!


thanxxxxxxxx  meenu...........  kya  reply  maari  ho.......  hmmmmmmmmmm.......

yeh ghum  hai  mujhe  kahin  tere  dil  ke  armaan toot  na jaaye
kahin khud tumhare  askon  ki  dariya tujhe  dubo na  jaaye
yeh aur   baat hai  tumhari  rooh  ne  dekha  hai  usse
kahin  aisa na  ho  waqt  usko bhi  saath  uda  le  jaaye.............   tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2005, 06:34:33 PM »
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wah wah waheed!!

waqt kya juda karega hume apne sanam se,
jinse nata hai humara janam janam se!
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2005, 06:49:02 PM »
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hahaha  meenu...............

yeh  waqt  aayega  yahan  bhi  ai  "Meena"
woh bichane ki  dua karega, tumne milne ki dua karogi......tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2005, 08:42:41 AM »
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wah meena,waheed,excellent both of u. Usual Smile

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2005, 09:25:54 AM »
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Well...kahi log jante honge us alam ko jab besabri se kisi ka intezaar reheta hai. dil bas ek hi shaks ke bare me hi sochta hai...koi bohot yaad ata hai to kisi ko bohot miss kiya jata hai....bas unhi feelings ko ek poem me likhne ki koshish ki haiyaha maine :D

Din me unke khayal hume satate hai,
Raat ko khwabon me woh roz hume tadpate hai,
Ek bechaini si hurdum hai aur keheti hai,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaat ate hai!

Har gari unke saye ko hum talashte hai,
Nam ankhon ke saath dil se unko pukarte hai,
Koi to sandesh pohoncha de unko yeh mera,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yaad ate hai!

Kisi aur se nahin par apne dil se unki baate karte hai,
Soch kar unko kabhi rote to kabhi haste hai,
Meri ankhon ki tadap gawayi de rahi hai bar bar,
Ke humare sanam hume bohot yad ate hai!


waah .. Pyaar mein intzaar ki tatap ..bakhubi byaaN ki hai !!!
ik khoish hamari traf se bhi Meena ji !!!


nadaaN yeh dil bas tumhi ko hai har jagaah dundta
teri ik jalak dekhne ko meri ankhien beqraar hai

tumhare bina koi bhi dilkash nazara acha nhi lagta
cahhya mere dil yeh kasisa ishq ka khumar hai

inn mehki bharooN mein jab agosh mein aayigi mere
mere zahen o dil ko to faqt ussi pal ka intzaar hai

karta hoon mein aaj bari mehfil mein ikraar
haan !! mujhey tum se sirf tum se hi pyaar hai !!!!

Hum Aur Tum
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2005, 10:10:28 AM »
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shukriya nidhi and humtum ji!  :D

well done mundeya bohot acha likha apne to!!

judai ke lamhe aab katte nahin,
kuch aisa kiya hai tumne hum pe jadu,
dil me to hai tu aab zindagi me bhi aa ja,
bas jeevan me ek yehi hai meri arzoo!
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2005, 10:17:41 AM »
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jo hukm mere aaka !!!

ab to kattey nhi hai yeh intzaar ke lamhey
milney ko tumse dil mera beqraar hai
arzuu hai tumko bahoon mein lene ki
dil pe mere ishq ki chai bahar hai !!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2005, 10:26:04 AM »
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wah ji wah!!!!!!!

intezaar me hum subhe sham khoye rehte hai,
is mithe dard ko ankhon me piroye rehte hai!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2005, 10:32:18 AM »
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Tumhari galat adtonki
pass they tum takrar karte they
hamse dur chake gaye to
ab hum tumko yaad karte hai
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2005, 10:34:06 AM »
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Socha tha tumhe apna banayenge
tumare liye sari duniya ko chod denge
per yeh kabhi na socha tha
ki ek mode yesa aayega
ki hum tumkohar pal  yaad karenge
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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2005, 10:36:54 AM »
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nice chaya ji!!

pyar me kushi ke sath milti bhi hai sanam se judai,
uski yaadon ko tab maine apne ashkon ki dara se hai sajayi,
ayenge woh wapas tab milan hoga dono ka,
yeh mere dil ki awaz de rahi hai gawayi!
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2005, 10:39:32 AM »
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wah ji wah!!!!!!!

intezaar me hum subhe sham khoye rehte hai,
is mithe dard ko ankhon me piroye rehte hai!!


very nice wriiten Chhaya ji !!!

aur Meena ji  Winking

Ehsaas teri muhoobat ka dil mein basaya hai
tujhy paker asia lga jaseey khuda ko paya hai !!
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