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 <>*Ik pal ki judaai na de*<> Rangon me chhupakar apna benuur chehra
K kisiko mere chehre pe udaasi dikhai na de
Wafa ka dusra naam hi dard hai mere dost
Fir bhi koshish karma tu kisiko bewafai na de
Dil ki har baat keh na paoge gairon ki mehfil me
Tu zakhmon ko apne ab yun jag hansaai na de
Har ilzaam she le chup chap na ka ruff zabaan se
Tu is tarah apne begunaahi ki yahan safaai na de
Dekh kar bhi jo mere ehsason ko andekha kare
Mujhe aise sanam se bhi tu ik pal ki judaai na de
“KASAK” uthti hai dil me dard ki bht tez ae KHUDA
Tu fir bhi mujhe unki yaadon ki giraft se rihaai na de…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2011, 02:17:57 PM » |
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lafz nai hai mere pas itna acha likha hai apne
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2011, 03:02:55 PM » |
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wah ji anamika ji bahut sundar rachna .....aap ne to dil ko hach macha diya ..mast aur sundar rachna aur is sab pe muje 5 va sher bahut achha laga ....kyunki sab achha lekin judai kisi ko achhi nahi lagti judai mai har ek pal maut ke saman katti hai....well achhi rachna ke liye meri aur se hardik subh kamnaye
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2011, 05:25:18 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2011, 05:39:24 PM » |
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<>*Ik pal ki judaai na de*<> Rangon me chhupakar apna benuur chehra
K kisiko mere chehre pe udaasi dikhai na de
Wafa ka dusra naam hi dard hai mere dost
Fir bhi koshish karma tu kisiko bewafai na de
Dil ki har baat keh na paoge gairon ki mehfil me
Tu zakhmon ko apne ab yun jag hansaai na de
Har ilzaam she le chup chap na ka ruff zabaan se
Tu is tarah apne begunaahi ki yahan safaai na de
Dekh kar bhi jo mere ehsason ko andekha kare
Mujhe aise sanam se bhi tu ik pal ki judaai na de
“KASAK” uthti hai dil me dard ki bht tez ae KHUDA
Tu fir bhi mujhe unki yaadon ki giraft se rihaai na de…!!!
Kasak Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye ... bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... khush rahen ... ! aise hi likhti rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2011, 05:58:38 PM » |
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lafz nai hai mere pas itna acha likha hai apne
thnx saahil ji |
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2011, 05:59:34 PM » |
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wah ji anamika ji bahut sundar rachna .....aap ne to dil ko hach macha diya ..mast aur sundar rachna aur is sab pe muje 5 va sher bahut achha laga ....kyunki sab achha lekin judai kisi ko achhi nahi lagti judai mai har ek pal maut ke saman katti hai....well achhi rachna ke liye meri aur se hardik subh kamnaye
shukriya natkhat ji meri koshish ko pasand karne aur sarahne k liye...... |
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2011, 06:00:36 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2011, 06:01:26 PM » |
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humnaam ......bht pyara likha hai tumne...dil ko chhute ehsaas...too good re..keep writing |
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2011, 06:03:47 PM » |
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Kasak Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye ... bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... khush rahen ... !
aise hi likhti rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
naresh ji aapka bht bht shukriya meri koshish ko pasnd farmane ka...meri koshish aapke dil tak pahonchi ye bht badi baat hai mere liye...yunhi hausla badhate rahiyega... |
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«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2011, 04:52:13 PM » |
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Denaa hai tou ek pal ka saath de ay khuda
Kabhi bhee kisi ko " ik pal ki judaai na de "
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«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2011, 05:22:04 PM » |
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sahi kaha hai aapne humnaam badi pyari 2 lines
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«Reply #13 on: March 14, 2011, 05:29:09 PM » |
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Awesome Job Done Anamika Ji... Kya Kamaal Ka likhti hai Aap.. Bahoot Khoob...SubanAllah !!!!
Bahoot Umda Likha Anaam Apne Bhi.... !!!
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«Reply #14 on: March 14, 2011, 05:35:09 PM » |
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thnx sophi ji..k aapko ye pasand aai.......thnx for appreciating ji...
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