inteha intezaar

by spandana on March 09, 2010, 12:42:18 PM
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I m new to this forum .Presenting my poem to all the friends here .Greatly appreciate ur comments/sugesstions



Meri ankhaen mera gunaah ki gavahi na ban jaye
Yeh hoth jab khule toh prem kahani na ban jaye
Mere aansoo mera khoon ki rawani na ban jaye
Tera pyar mera pass teri nishani na ban jaye
Ab aa bhi ja zalim tera aane sa pehle yeh zindagi na chali jaye
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2010, 04:35:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause
ACHHI HAI .
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2010, 05:00:51 PM »
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Quote from: spandana on March 09, 2010, 12:42:18 PM
I m new to this forum .Presenting my poem to all the friends here .Greatly appreciate ur comments/sugesstions


Meri ankhaen mera gunaah ki gavahi na ban jaye
Yeh hoth jab khule toh prem kahani na ban jaye
Mere aansoo mera khoon ki rawani na ban jaye
Tera pyar mera pass teri nishani na ban jaye
Ab aa bhi ja zalim tera aane sa pehle yeh zindagi na chali jaye

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Spandana ji and Welcome to Yoindia
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2010, 12:51:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya
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Bahut khoob... bahut achcha likha hai aapne.... really ... Applause Applause Applause
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