intzar

by Rishi Agarwal on September 24, 2009, 11:50:57 AM
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Hum bhi to kar rhe h apke laut aane ka intzar
aa jao ab laut ke ab aur mat karwao ap intzar
aankhen nam ho chuki apke is intzar mein
ab nhi ho par rha h humse itna intzar
Hum to apse krte h vintiya bar bar
aa jao ap laut ke hum to kr rhe h apka
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2009, 11:53:46 AM »
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Sory last line me intzar likhana bhool gya tha

Hum bhi to kar rhe h apke laut aane ka intzar
aa jao ab laut ke ab aur mat karwao ap intzar
aankhen nam ho chuki apke is intzar mein
ab nhi ho par rha h humse itna intzar
Hum to apse krte h vintiya bar bar
aa jao ap laut ke hum to kr rhe h apka intzar
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2009, 02:18:40 PM »
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Usual Smile

Bahoot bahoot Khooob Rishi... keep writing more...

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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2009, 02:45:07 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shopi ji and thnx for good help
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2009, 06:09:39 AM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob Rishi ji,very touching n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2009, 05:14:15 PM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob Rishi ji,very touching n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya apka madhu ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2013, 06:43:12 PM »
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कविता में थोडा बदलाव :-

में कर रहा हूँ आपके लौट आने का इंतेज़ार,
आ जाओ अब लौट के, मत करवाओ इंतेज़ार,
आँखे नम हो चुकी, आपके इस इंतेज़ार में,

अब नहीं हो पा रहा हैं, मुझसे इतना इंतेज़ार,
में तो आपसे करता हूँ, विनतियां बार - बार,
आ जाओ  लौट के में तो कर रहा हूँ इंतेज़ार..


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