Is anokhe zahan me...

by Saavan on July 26, 2012, 03:16:55 PM
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Is anokhe zahan me sahib
Uski khubsurti use aksar daga deti hai,
Sham hoti hai to wo kuch sochati hai phir..
Haule se apne har Zakhm ko zaga deti hai,
Manzilo ka pata nahi per..
Zis raah se guzarti hai ik deepak zala deti hai,
Kabhi jo hasati thi harpal usko..
Wahi bat ab uski aankho ko rula deti hai,
Maine puchha to usne bataya 'Saavan' ki..
Is tara wo 'Dil ki aag' ko Hawa deti hai.
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2012, 03:34:17 PM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2012, 04:06:46 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2012, 04:38:14 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2012, 01:59:04 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2012, 09:54:59 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut sundar .. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saavan ji....!!!
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